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    Default American Dreamin' -Keystyle-

    Smoke A Cigar With Me.
    Let's Take A Walk.
    Let Me Tell You A Story...

    Focus-
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    I Feel Like The Cover Shot Of Jay's Blueprint, As I Prep Tha Cigar And Cut Tha Top/
    Momma Couldn't Say They'd Be Dayz Like This, When I Controled Crime & Tha Cops/
    Refusing To Go Away At 10 Watching Raymond Bakin' Cakes In My Momma's Basement/
    It Was Amuzing Seeing Baseheads Tweak They Bodies, No Surgery But Still Get They Facelift/
    Fast Foward 16 Years, No Longer Am I My Brother's Apprentice/
    Those Who Appose?, Don't Get It Confused When I Send My Prey Up To Heaven/
    Gotta Be Successful, Gotta Expect Consequences In Tha Worst Way/
    Whe I First Hit Tha Block I Got Stabbed In The Projects, Shit! It Was My First Day/
    I Hold Jesus On My Weist, Think About How Many Mother's I Left Grievin'/
    Nobody Knows Shit! Pay Off Whoever's Peekin' It's American Dreamin'/
    American Gangster? No I'm An American Business Man An American Icon/
    Past Hustlers Cemented Legacy's Fell Victim When Theyre Times Gone/
    Gotta Have Loyalty, Everyday Is A Gamble Never Give Trust/
    Know Tha Business Results, Have Your Enemies Closer... That Is A Must/
    This Is AMERICAN DREAMIN'.....

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    Artist: Focus
    Album: The Departed
    Lable: Untouchable Music Group
    Release Date: TBD
    Focus Appears Courtesy Of Untouchable Music Group
    Song Inspired By "Jay-Z's American Dreamin'"
    Last edited by Focus; 03-08-2008 at 06:41 PM. Reason: Touch Up
    Tha Untouchables New Era 2008 -The Departed-

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    This is hot.

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    focus is back....
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    Thank's For The Views, And To Note On Flash......Superman Is Back!
    This Was Just To Keep My Name Again On The Minds Of Those Who Doubt It.
    This Was A Snippet Of A Full Song Of American Dreamin', I Just Keystyled This Quick, It Was Crazy Because The Process Obviously I Was Listenin' To The Actual Track Just Looking at MIO Boards...Anyways My Brother Ray Was Like That's A Hot TracK To Do A Freestyle, So I Did It Infront Of Him And I Amazed The Peeps In Tha Room...I Told Myself That I Will Never Be Back On Forums Texting... Retire On A Good Note, It's Been 2 Years Since I Been At MIO.
    I Feel It's Time To Intrigue The Newer Audiences With My Storytelling.
    It's Time For The Audio Stealing Biters & Of Texts To Go Away.
    And To Add On A Good Vibe, Those Who Hate Focus And The Brand Of Music I Create...Pass Trough, I Do Not Come For Petty Internet Beef, Cause In Reality We're Just Looking At CPU Screens, Take The Cpu And Face To Face With Me? Then We Can Tango! Anyways Shout Outs 2 Those Who Remember Me?
    Tha Untouchables - ONE!
    Tha Untouchables New Era 2008 -The Departed-

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    Bruh If U Still Reppin That Untouchables/U-Gang Shit, WHose The Squad?
    I Got You 'On The Lamb', Like You Killa's Assailants...

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    Superman Aye?!
    Enzyme

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    smh... come on focus... we already know ur dropping one song... then bouncing...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sparx View Post
    smh... come on focus... we already know ur dropping one song... then bouncing...

    SMH At Poverty Niggas!
    Lemme Guess? "I Never Liked Focus So, I'm Just Gonna Downplay Any Shit He Say's? Or "I'll Stay Behind My Computer And Talk Shit Because I Have nO Balls To Be A Man And Acknowledge Another Human Being" Or "I'm Just Gonna Live Up tO tHE bLACK sTEREOTYPE That Includes: Be Bitter On Everybody, Complains, Hate On Other Races Including Your Own And Your Own Family, And The Other Probably? You Have No Job, Stay At Home Drink A FOrty Grow Balls On The Net And Maybe Smoke Crack".

    But Please My Good Ol' Friend I Have Never Met Or Lost Sleep About His Black Woman Rants....I'm Not Here To Engage In Useless Internet Shit Talkings, And To What Yoiu Said "We Already Know" Who's We? And Who's Checking For Me Anyways? Hmmm Look In The Mirror And You'll Get Your Answer Because Person I Never Met Before, I Took An Educated Guess And I Think We Got The Same Answer.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Enzyme View Post
    Superman Aye?!
    Como Estas Zyme?, Ey' Hows Your Sis?.
    Yeah Superman...Nah Just Foolin' Had To Post Something Out Tha Blue Ya'know, The Net Text Damn I Left This Garbage 2 Years Ago, I Don't Know Why I Dropped A Text Really? I Think I Left Explenation Earlier...Anyways I Hope Well For You And Your Fam. Peace Bruh!
    Tha Untouchables New Era 2008 -The Departed-

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cap View Post
    Bruh If U Still Reppin That Untouchables/U-Gang Shit, WHose The Squad?
    Oh, Untouchables Outside The Net Was Always A Reality Cap.
    That's Me And Outside Real World Affiliates. If Your In Los Angeles East L.A., La Puente, Ontario Region Than You Might Here A Buzz About Us.

    On The Internet On The Other Hand....
    Well It Was Fun Having Y'all On The Crew, Last I Checked You Ran U-Gang For Me?

    As Me Repping It Always, Roster Includes Me 24-7

    I Think That Should Answer Any Questions You Have?
    Tha Untouchables New Era 2008 -The Departed-

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