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    Default Intoxicated Perseverance =[

    Sadistic views can be intertwined, With kids with pubescent minds,
    Teenage boys pushing themselves onto girls, Looking for shines,
    With a mindset that isn’t straight, it has been raped by their parents,
    A lonely life led with few true friends, and even they’ve stopped caring,
    It then seems that all is lost before the bottle is found in his hands,
    The kid has no other option, he takes off the lid and stands,
    On the street corner staring into the epitome of evil, puts it to his lips,
    Feels the drug slowly intoxicate him, and he feels it slowly burn,
    It churns… within his stomach and changes the person who he is,
    No longer a loving person, I am now more than just a kid,
    As my body temperature rises, I feel the beads of sweat drip off my neck,
    And I am slowly surprised, as this feeling is better than having sex,
    It lets, and helps me to forget about the problems around me,
    And if I meet somebody I want it let’s me explore outside the boundaries,
    It lets me touch them slowly, and whisper into their ears forbidden words,
    That I will never remember, even though their stamped to the brain of hers,
    Alcohol has been my saviour, but it has also cast me into hell,
    I have seen what it can do to people, and I can honestly say I’m as bad as them,
    I’m a different person while intoxicated, my face becomes inflated,
    Not through allergies or such, but anger that I’ve been saving,
    As my face changes colour my whole demented embrace is discovered,
    And I put blades to people and kill them off as only blood satisfies this hunger,
    It’s like war mongering, I stir up trouble by simply drinking myself into a spell,
    Where I’m untouchable, and everybody around me can already tell,
    That if they fuck with me then they better have company,
    Because the Whisky let’s me, release my rage and have fun for free,
    Well, when I say for free I do not properly explain the cost,
    I can never have a lover again, as me and drink have already tied the knot,
    I could say that it has changed me, but that would be an understatement,
    It has moulded me into a new person, and taken up any room that was vacant,
    It has changed my mind for the better, as now I can see through the fašade,
    That is put up by the people around me, as they slowly pick up their arms,
    I can see the politicians, plotting a mission, to go to a war without a cause,
    So people feel empathy for the choice that’s made, and votes without a thought,
    For the very people who had just sent their loved ones away,
    Not knowing if their coming back, could end up dead or wandering astray,
    It let’s me see through the schools, the education that’s corrupt enough,
    To let us learn about sports, but not why the law lets murderers off,
    In special circumstances, as if it were actually ever condoned as right,
    As if no punishment will come out of slitting your throat with a knife,
    And yet when I’m drunk, these seem like a joke to me,
    How we can see it when we’re drunk but when we’re sober miss it so easily,
    We don’t care for other people, we all think we’ve been through strife,
    Until our best friend is on the phone us, slitting their wrists at night,
    Because nobody loves them, their father was never there to care for them,
    Their mother has no money left and the last of their savings spent, and then,
    They had an idea that it would’ve been better if they were never brought to earth,
    And so they set an example to others showing them that it actually works,
    Killing yourself, at first puts others through hell but can actually improve life quality,
    But how could the quality of life be right? Billions of years later without racial equality,
    So as I dig into the bottom of a bottle, perhaps calling it Jim and not Gin,
    I finally see the world for what it is, and myself for him,
    And I see him for myself, alcohol let’s me discover my own truths,
    About how in my view, Ireland and Britain never should have resorted to troops,
    And now as the children shoot, on their games we’re preparing them for war,
    There have been two world wars in the last sixty years,
    So by twenty one hundred, will their have possibly been two more,
    Or perhaps even four, the ego of people is slowly eradicating the population,
    And as the worlds people grow agitated, there are much more trials and tribulations,
    There are many more people who think that alcohol is good then bad,
    And there are perhaps even people who love it even when it makes them sad,
    The things I see when on alcohol is frightening, as the world is really a scary place,
    It is full of evil discontent and blasphemous views which we all must face,
    And even though I hate it so much, I can’t put down the bottle from the neck till the end,
    Alcohol, my saviour and condemner, I suppose it’s both my enemy and friend…

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    dope the flow was nice and the concpet was real good loved how you told it some of the rhyme words were simple though. probbally the best newcomer weve had as you actually use concepts.

    As my body temperature rises, I feel the beads of sweat drip off my neck,
    And I am slowly surprised, as this feeling is better than having sex,

    dont agree wit that bar lol

    The things I see when on alcohol is frightening, as the world is really a scary place,
    It is full of evil discontent and blasphemous views which we all must face,
    And even though I hate it so much, I can’t put down the bottle from the neck till the end,
    Alcohol, my saviour and condemner, I suppose it’s both my enemy and friend…

    It has changed my mind for the better, as now I can see through the fašade,
    That is put up by the people around me, as they slowly pick up their arms,

    my fav bars keep up and give feed to others aswell

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    thanks for that man... aha...
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    WOW.that was nice...seriously it was hypnotizing I realy liked it,and it speaks the truth.Alcohol is a drug like any other,it can make your world better one minute and a mess the next...anwaysy just wanted to say thanks 4 posting that,good reading!!

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    wow, either just commented by Irish Mastermind Artemis Fowl or the Female Goddess of the Hunt and the Moon.. either way, thanks for the read, ahahah..
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    Lmao,yes my Greek name does mean the goddess of the hunt and the moon,also fertility and childbirth lol....but seriously I really liked it.You should keep a copy of that if you don't have it,and maybe send it to me too! :)

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