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    Artist: Montana Ft. Lil Sam
    Album: Joker EP
    Instrumental: Tha Realest,Swoop G, Twist And Lil C Style - Fuck Dre







    [Chopped And Screwed]
    All This Gun Talk and Claiming Ya'll Doper
    U Got Me Laughing So Much I Turned Into A Joker


    [Montana]
    Now I know, Y'all didn't think, I could'nt come with hard Shit
    Here it is, My last laugh, Y'all Funny to me, I started It (HAHA!)
    Knowledged up, I Done and mastered, My own Flow
    Got tracks for days, Done and chaperted, My own Flow
    Mentaly stored, Let me scalp y'all, To patiently Sore
    Above levels, Y'all will never reached, Y'all to Bored
    To even catch my attention, Imma continue to Ignore
    Every one of y'all, Stated that Imma kick the door Down
    To show y'all those lyrical graveyards, What y'all think Now
    Shut the fuck up, Quit acting hard, And just Enjoy the Sound
    ready to lyrically cremate y'all, To throw your Fuckin ashes Out
    Montana Just gettin started, But look I already got Classics Out
    Y'all, Ain't got enough To break, What it is you just Heard
    Who never thought to Give me another chance, Fuck you are My last words (HAHA!)

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)

    [Montana]
    I hate to take shit, This far theres really, No Need
    Ready to destroy, Everybody you kick it With, Y'all Bleed
    Buy A Gun Like Fluxx the OG, Naw y'all ain't worth Bullets (Ha)
    Due to y'all hiding, Each of y'all a pussy to the Fullest
    Gettin sweaty, So y'all wet, Manchester UK, I Fuckin Represent It
    Do a few tracks, Act like a big shot, You a sensitive, Bitch
    I Got Murkage Under Ma Belt, Bitches Low voltage No Sparx Are Being Felt
    Gonna make it myself Like Scarface, Fuck askin for pointless Help
    Im the greatest silence rapper, That could ever be Alive
    Stay Quiet But In A Few Bars, I'll destroy and emcee, What a Surprise
    Got enough to lyrically kill y'all, And let y'all Die There
    This is just a warning, Who gave the Fuckin Empression, That I Care
    I used to do this, To try and better myslef, And Who I care For
    Now Im ready to destroy Home Fire Emcees, Thats what their there For

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)

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    lmao.... that was a diss? u had time to write this shit but u dont have time for me to destroy u in our battle? sum1's scared.... step ya game up pussy...

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    People Generally Don't Go 2 School On Weekends If U Where Online Yesterday Night I Would Of Battled U I Will 2morrow If You Can. Stop Talking Shit. This Is Not A Straight Up Diss Either.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Montana View Post
    Artist: Montana Ft. Lil Sam
    Album: Joker EP
    Instrumental: Tha Realest,Swoop G, Twist And Lil C Style - Fuck Dre







    [Chopped And Screwed]
    All This Gun Talk and Claiming Ya'll Doper
    U Got Me Laughing So Much I Turned Into A Joker


    [Montana]
    Now I know, Y'all didn't think, I could'nt come with hard Shit
    Here it is, My last laugh, Y'all Funny to me, I started It (HAHA!)
    Knowledged up, I Done and mastered, My own Flow
    Got tracks for days, Done and chaperted, My own Flow
    Mentaly stored, Let me scalp y'all, To patiently Sore
    Above levels, Y'all will never reached, Y'all to Bored
    To even catch my attention, Imma continue to Ignore
    Every one of y'all, Stated that Imma kick the door Down
    To show y'all those lyrical graveyards, What y'all think Now
    Shut the fuck up, Quit acting hard, And just Enjoy the Sound
    ready to lyrically cremate y'all, To throw your Fuckin ashes Out
    Montana Just gettin started, But look I already got Classics Out
    Y'all, Ain't got enough To break, What it is you just Heard
    Who never thought to Give me another chance, Fuck you are My last words (HAHA!)

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)

    [Montana]
    I hate to take shit, This far theres really, No Need
    Ready to destroy, Everybody you kick it With, Y'all Bleed
    Buy A Gun Like Fluxx the OG, Naw y'all ain't worth Bullets (Ha)
    Due to y'all hiding, Each of y'all a pussy to the Fullest
    Gettin sweaty, So y'all wet, Manchester UK, I Fuckin Represent It
    Do a few tracks, Act like a big shot, You a sensitive, Bitch
    I Got Murkage Under Ma Belt, Bitches Low voltage No Sparx Are Being Felt
    Gonna make it myself Like Scarface, Fuck askin for pointless Help
    Im the greatest silence rapper, That could ever be Alive
    Stay Quiet But In A Few Bars, I'll destroy and emcee, What a Surprise
    Got enough to lyrically kill y'all, And let y'all Die There
    This is just a warning, Who gave the Fuckin Empression, That I Care
    I used to do this, To try and better myslef, And Who I care For
    Now Im ready to destroy Home Fire Emcees, Thats what their there For

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)
    NICE DROP MAN, I WAS FEELING IT. AND SAM'S HOOK WAS NICE TOO. JUST PUT MORE MULTIES IN IT NEXT TIME AND IT WILL BE MORE SPECTECULAR.

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    Ok ok I'll give this a bit of a break down lol...


    Hook/Sam


    The thing I don'tlike about the hook is that you didn't really think it through... I mean it has a good idea to it but, the fact of the matteris a Joker is a card in a game which is irrelivant... So if we associate that to the rap game you can see what my problem with this is...


    Montana 1


    The thing which I have to compliment about your verse the most is the flow... I feel as if it had a steady flow all the way through with a healthy syllable count... apart for the last line but I imagined you would spit it in a different light as it is the last line... None-the-less, to me that was the only part which really threw off the flow... Cockyness was a very big part of this verse and to me it threw the quality of it off.... I feel as if the similies and punches which you used were less cocky, and for example such things as laughing after certain punches weren't there... I would be able to see this verse in a much better light... the punches were nice at some parts... But were weak in others...

    This verse to me had a nice flow but was iffy with the punches, similies, and execution.. A good verse but definately not one of your best.


    Montana 2

    Again, a very nice flow and this didn't really have any stand out bars which threw off the flow... although some of the bars werelonger it seems as if the words made the line the same length as one which appears smaller... This verse had the same problem as the last with the similies / Punches... Inconsistancy...


    Overall


    An OK track... The hook imo was not that great... The verses had a good flow but the punches were inconsistent and the execution was not the best... I feel as if this was not one of your better drops... However, you are making songs and dropping them and for that you do get my respect... Keep up the good work and work on making your punches consistent and to a higher level of quality...

    Chopz. Nuff Said.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Montana View Post
    Artist: Montana Ft. Lil Sam
    Album: Joker EP
    Instrumental: Tha Realest,Swoop G, Twist And Lil C Style - Fuck Dre







    [Chopped And Screwed]
    All This Gun Talk and Claiming Ya'll Doper
    U Got Me Laughing So Much I Turned Into A Joker


    [Montana]
    Now I know, Y'all didn't think, I could'nt come with hard Shit
    Here it is, My last laugh, Y'all Funny to me, I started It (HAHA!)
    aight opener
    Knowledged up, I Done and mastered, My own Flow
    Got tracks for days, Done and chaperted, My own Flow
    The flow in this lines is a lil bit off
    Mentaly stored, Let me scalp y'all, To patiently Sore
    Yeh that's a sick line if I understood that wit "scalp ya" right
    Above levels, Y'all will never reached, Y'all to Bored
    To even catch my attention, Imma continue to Ignore
    Every one of y'all, Stated that Imma kick the door Down
    To show y'all those lyrical graveyards, What y'all think Now
    second bar is sick too cuz i read between the lines
    Shut the fuck up, Quit acting hard, And just Enjoy the Sound
    In my oppinion the link between the lines is a lil bit lost
    ready to lyrically cremate y'all, To throw your Fuckin ashes Out
    nice shit right here
    Montana Just gettin started, But look I already got Classics Out
    cool line :)
    Y'all, Ain't got enough To break, What it is you just Heard
    Who never thought to Give me another chance, Fuck you are My last words (HAHA!)
    pretty good closer fo the 1st verse in my oppinion

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)
    random hook...rugh line wit the tumour

    [Montana]
    I hate to take shit, This far theres really, No Need
    Ready to destroy, Everybody you kick it With, Y'all Bleed
    again aight opener..but nothin special tho
    Buy A Gun Like Fluxx the OG, Naw y'all ain't worth Bullets (Ha)
    Due to y'all hiding, Each of y'all a pussy to the Fullest
    That's a fuckin sick bar...i mean really sick...i used my imagination and it gave me the sickest stuff i've ever seen..great work
    Gettin sweaty, So y'all wet, Manchester UK, I Fuckin Represent It
    In my vision the first part of this line is related to the bar above...if this is the case it's fuckin hot
    Do a few tracks, Act like a big shot, You a sensitive, Bitch
    hahahaha
    I Got Murkage Under Ma Belt, Bitches Low voltage No Sparx Are Being Felt
    nice comparison
    Gonna make it myself Like Scarface, Fuck askin for pointless Help
    I see u like Scarface
    Im the greatest silence rapper, That could ever be Alive
    nice line...if i read tight between the lines
    Stay Quiet But In A Few Bars, I'll destroy and emcee, What a Surprise
    i dont really like the ending of the line...or maybe i jus dont get it
    Got enough to lyrically kill y'all, And let y'all Die There
    This is just a warning, Who gave the Fuckin Empression, That I Care
    Damn if i got this here right it's a great line
    I used to do this, To try and better myslef, And Who I care For
    Now Im ready to destroy Home Fire Emcees, Thats what their there For
    Dont really get the last line

    [Lil Sam] Hook

    The Last Laugh
    End It With Humour
    Ya Head Ripped Apart
    Like Operating On A Tumour

    This Aint Stand Up Comedy
    Cos U Be Fallin As U Go Broke
    Like Fuckin Monopoly
    Ya'll Paying Up No Joke (X2)
    Yeh fukin nice joint...u used some cool wordplays but not that much (or maybe i didnt understand every of them)...the hook was aight by Sam..but nothin really special...in most parts of this drop the flow is a little bit off...u definitly have to improve your flow...but all in all it was a nice drop...with at least one sick wordplay.....Keep it up Montana!
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    The Flows Sick, Constant And Never Really Off, Coulda Invision It Audio Wise. Some Nice Lines Here, Ive Seen U Drop Better But ThiS Is Nice, Some Decent Wordplay. Lol Manchester u live In Wigan AKA Pieland Lol J/k Oj Mate, Mnchester Is Where We Born ST MARYS STAND UP! The Concepts ALlright And Is Kinda Like A Keystyle, I SAY 8.5/10

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    are u guys like brothers r sumet?
    u were both born in Mans, and now u both live in Wigan? confusin lol
    on the drop, call me weird, ok i am, but i loved the Hook! it was my fave part of the drop! seriously it was a nice hook imo!
    i cud here it, u aint jetted that of channel u or owt have ya? lol jokin. no seriously? na jokin. jus answer it lol
    Montana, where to begin? well i wasnt really watchin the flow, i thot u worked that well, however(!) i wasnt so sure on i dunno, erm... the whatchacallit... like the style or tecnique u wrote it in, i dont think its ur usual (aint read ur shit ina while, so dunno, maybe it is, i jus think it doesnt allow u to go into the line deep enuff to get anywhere. i may not b makin sense, if thats the case, awell lol jus ignore me, but if u get me, either use it n think about it or fuck it, either way its upto u. some good lines in there, altho like i said, i dont think the sturucture n style of writin really lets u get many good lines in. nice concept, and a try at sumet diff.

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    Naw Montana lives in Wigan and Lilsam lives near Manchester or somethin like that.

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    we both similar differences from Manchester
    but we born there BRAP

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