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    I'm chillin in Nap-town wit the fams,discussin decor
    on the walls, that's when we hear a knock at the door
    Some chick wit her kids, I never seen this gal before
    Grandmama didn't like em, she called the youngest a whore
    I'm peepin, she pretty decent, but she ain't payin attention
    She caught up in her novel, grammy decided to mention
    That she was close to my age and we should start chattin it up
    But still givin me no mind, snooty gal, up she was stuck
    Or maybe it was a good book, so I asked her about it
    And when she got started she never ended, or closed her mouth
    on and on about some romance garbage I wasn't into
    A fast escape from this prison I quickly pursued
    My cousin is chillin on the sofa watchin the tube
    I asked her a question and a conversation ensued
    Thank goodness I got away from motormouth over there
    But I guess she didn't get the picture and entered cousins affairs
    Talk Talk Talk, I got to know what Kinda person she was
    Just from listening to her speak, total B-S to discuss
    Never spoke to her again other than 'bye' when she was leaving
    Had a bad encounter with her, still couldn't believe it.

    Joined the organization, listenin during orientation
    Peep a skirt beside me with a familiar facial
    Couldn't quite put my finger on who it was but I knew
    That I had seen her before, didn't know what to do
    So I asked, she had no idea who I was, I felt bad
    It was a shot to my confidence, behind the vest I had
    Not kevlar, I'm talkin the feelings encased around me
    Not the usual hate surrounding me
    SO I was like 'fck it' cut the thoughts with the knife
    Of not caring, Then again she entered my life
    No Idea how we hooked up, but it wasn't conventional
    At a point now where I'd bother to mention
    that It was probably on my how we started talking
    Probably me gawking at her physical, wide jawwed
    Awoken in awe.
    Then it hit me, I saw the chick up in Nap-Town
    She was wit the fams so I guess I'll ask around
    Got the info I needed from pops, nobody she wasn't...
    What a shock, The girl ended up my cousin...

    -my grandmama always told me 'you gotta know who ya peoples is so you wont end up marrying ya cousin.' Now I see what she meant.
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    hahahahahaha, um yea it was all good, the flow was nice...i take it this was takin place at school/uni mayb in a liabary...why wuld ur grandma be there tho? neway...it was ok funny endin' know alot of cats that's happened too. haha.
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    I knew one person it's happened to lmao! Nah It's at my aunt's house...I had that in there at first but couldn't find a rhyme that would flow good.

    The second part was during orientation for a non-profit organization to be on one of their councils. Only part that wasn't true was that I was feeling her.

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    lol story was sick. loved it was original aswell flow was tight through the whole thing turning out to be a nice lp

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eyebagz View Post
    lol story was sick. loved it was original aswell flow was tight through the whole thing turning out to be a nice lp
    Thanks for checkin it out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hostile View Post
    I'm chillin in Nap-town wit the fams,discussin decor
    on the walls, that's when we hear a knock at the door
    lol...great opener.....(pause)....NOT!
    Some chick wit her kids, I never seen this gal before
    Grandmama didn't like em, she called the youngest a wh
    whore?
    I'm peepin, she pretty decent, but she ain't payin attention
    She caught up in her novel, grammy decided to mention
    That she was close to my age and we should start chattin it up
    cool...
    But still givin me no mind, snooty gal, up she was stuck
    Or maybe it was a good book, so I asked her about it
    yepp...good start
    And when she got started she never ended, or closed her mouth
    lol
    on and on about some romance garbage I wasn't into
    LMFAO
    A fast escape from this prison I quickly pursued
    My cousin is chillin on the sofa watchin the tube
    I asked her a question and a conversation ensued
    good story telling by the way...
    Thank goodness I got away from motormouth over there
    motormouth...lol
    But I guess she didn't get the picture and entered cousins affairs
    Talk Talk Talk, I got to know what Kinda person she was
    Just from listening to her speak, total B-S to discuss
    Never spoke to her again other than 'bye' when she was leaving
    Had a bad encounter with her, still couldn't believe it.
    great verse! lol...

    Joined the organization, listenin during orientation
    Peep a skirt beside me with a familiar facial
    Couldn't quite put my finger on who it was but I knew
    That I had seen her before, didn't know what to do
    mhhh....
    So I asked, she had no idea who I was, I felt bad
    doh!
    It was a shot to my confidence, behind the vest I had
    Not kevlar, I'm talkin the feelings encased around me
    dope wordplay here! shot behind the vest and a bulletproof vest is made out of kevlar...
    Not the usual hate surrounding me
    SO I was like 'fck it' cut the thoughts with the knife
    ok meta
    Of not caring, Then again she entered my life
    No Idea how we hooked up, but it wasn't conventional
    At a point now where I'd bother to mention
    that It was probably on my how we started talking
    Probably me gawking at her physical, wide jawwed
    Awoken in awe.
    Then it hit me, I saw the chick up in Nap-Town
    She was wit the fams so I guess I'll ask around
    Got the info I needed from pops, nobody she wasn't...
    What a shock, The girl ended up my cousin...
    LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! OWNED!!!!!

    -my grandmama always told me 'you gotta know who ya peoples is so you wont end up marrying ya cousin.' Now I see what she meant.
    word is bond grandama!
    lol...very nice drop! nothing deep just telling a story...that's cool 'cause it was a funny story. The storytelling in the first verse was better than in the 2nd.
    Cool track, keep it up!

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    Oh yeah that is supposed to say whore thnx for pointing that out.

    *Goes back and edits*

    Man the murder collab isnt gonna be released until I'm 60 huh?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hostile View Post
    Oh yeah that is supposed to say whore thnx for pointing that out.

    *Goes back and edits*

    Man the murder collab isnt gonna be released until I'm 60 huh?
    Chopz has some personal stuff to do...which I just can support. But without him it won't be complete

    use it as a bonus track for your LP!

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    Nah It's your track. I'm good.

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    Very Gd Drop Great Story Telling And Nice Twist U Seem Better At This Than Punchline Rapping. Entertaining Read Nice One Man.

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