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    *Throws Imagine Instrumental By Snoop Dogg Feat. Dr. Dre And D'Angelo On The Turntable And Sets The Needle On The Record*

    I Was Watching CNN Right Now And I Saw How Fucked Up The World Is, Bombs Going Off In Countries, Little Kids Getting Arms Chopped Off In Sierra Leone, And It Just Inspired Me To Write This Right Now, My Fingers Just Started To Tap Along The Keys... So Listen


    If I Ruled The World Today... Man Imagine That
    Imagine If There Was No Such Thing As Terroist Attacks
    Imagine If We All Lived In A Better World
    Where Everyone Was Rich And Had The Freshest Girls
    Imagine If There Was No Poverty In Cities Across The Land
    Imagine If Every Dope Artist Could Form Into One Band
    Imagine If You Could Walk At Night Without Lookin' Back Ova Ya Shoulda
    Imagine If Everyone Had Top Dollars Without Cookin' Crack On The Stove Son
    Imagine If Where Respect Was Due, It Was Given
    Imagine If We Could Uncover The Message That's Hidden
    Or If No Subliminals And Lies Were Ever Told To The Youth
    There's No Hope For Me, So I Try My Best To Grow In This Booth
    Imagine If I Could Make It To The Top And Sell A Million CD's
    Can't Do Anything Right, I Wonder Why People Wanna Be Me
    Plus My Family's Fed Up With My Tendencies And Ways
    So I Fall Into A Dream Land And Try To Imagine It Away


    Beat Fades Out...

    Last edited by FranchizeTheKid; 06-17-2007 at 06:13 AM.
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    well...nice idea but it wasn't that great in my eyes. The concept is the same like the Ja Rule song Imagine...maybe it was the same beat...whatever

    there aren't many feelings in it...you said that you watched how lil kids lost their arms...why don't you use it in your drop? The "imagens" could be more detailed...they show general problems but no solutions. I really love this song by Ja and I don't want to compare it with your drop. But I thought about the same concept, how I would do it. And yea...yours wasn't really deep and didn't move me...sorry

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    It's Not By Ja, It's By Dre And Snoop, If You Listen To The Original, It's Kinda The Same
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    Its on the Blue carpet treatment.

    Some good points made, it was alright.
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    Quote Originally Posted by FranchizeTheKid View Post




    *Throws Imagine Instrumental By Snoop Dogg Feat. Dr. Dre And D'Angelo On The Turntable And Sets The Needle On The Record*

    I Was Watching CNN Right Now And I Saw How Fucked Up The World Is, Bombs Going Off In Countries, Little Kids Getting Arms Chopped Off In Sierra Leone, And It Just Inspired Me To Write This Right Now, My Fingers Just Started To Tap Along The Keys... So Listen


    If I Ruled The World Today... Man Imagine That
    Imagine If There Was No Such Thing As Terroist Attacks
    Imagine If We All Lived In A Better World
    Where Everyone Was Rich And Had The Freshest Girls
    Imagine If There Was No Poverty In Cities Across The Land
    Imagine If Every Dope Artist Could Form Into One Band
    Imagine If You Could Walk At Night Without Lookin' Back Ova Ya Shoulda
    Imagine If Everyone Had Top Dollars Without Cookin' Crack On The Stove Son
    Imagine If Where Respect Was Due, It Was Given
    Imagine If We Could Uncover The Message That's Hidden
    Or If No Subliminals And Lies Were Ever Told To The Youth
    There's No Hope For Me, So I Try My Best To Grow In This Booth
    Imagine If I Could Make It To The Top And Sell A Million CD's
    Can't Do Anything Right, I Wonder Why People Wanna Be Me
    Plus My Family's Fed Up With My Tendencies And Ways
    So I Fall Into A Dream Land And Try To Imagine It Away


    Beat Fades Out...

    jacking ja style so not cool!!!!!!!!nut one problem..you are wack!
    Last edited by Flash; 06-17-2007 at 06:37 PM.

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    Star and Flash, u both need to get the fuck off Ja Rule's dick... The original song IS by Snoop and Dre... Ja is on the remix... and Ja is still wack...

    FTK... in all honesty i wouldnt have posted this if i were u... i see what ur trying to do with the concept... u just didnt excecute it properly... Star is correct about one thing tho... for a track called Imagine, u didnt really use ur imagination very well... u could have put way more effort into this... u want that best new comer cat in the awards? step ya muh fuckin game up...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flash View Post
    jacking ja style so not cool!!!!!!!!nut one problem..you are wack!
    Why The Fuck Are You Even Posting Here?

    And In All Honesty, I Was Bored And Watching CNN, Just A Quick Freestyle, I Will Do A Full Version Prob
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sparx View Post
    Star and Flash, u both need to get the fuck off Ja Rule's dick... The original song IS by Snoop and Dre... Ja is on the remix... and Ja is still wack...
    chill lol...I don't like Ja that much...and I listen to Snoop when I'm pumping the No Limit albums lol...but this imagine track is still dope as fuck...don't matter who did it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sparx View Post
    Star and Flash, u both need to get the fuck off Ja Rule's dick... The original song IS by Snoop and Dre... Ja is on the remix... and Ja is still wack...

    FTK... in all honesty i wouldnt have posted this if i were u... i see what ur trying to do with the concept... u just didnt excecute it properly... Star is correct about one thing tho... for a track called Imagine, u didnt really use ur imagination very well... u could have put way more effort into this... u want that best new comer cat in the awards? step ya muh fuckin game up...
    Ja has one of the best verses on the remix so you can only hate and im not on his dick!And i agree Franchize should do it deep,if he is watching cnn and was nervous bout the childrens and shit...he should bring more emotion..this was just random!

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    FRENCHISE, UrE STRATE UPP GARBEGE SUN, GIT OUTTA HERRE WIT HTIS!
    Last edited by Michael; 06-18-2007 at 11:07 AM.

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