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    Beat: Common - The 6th Sense (Produced By DJ Premier)
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    [Sparx]
    The Revolution will not be televised... the revolution is here.....


    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....


    Started off as a basement artform, composed of turntables, pops n locks, and windmills on cardboard,
    Tracksuits and fat laces, no freebases, we all knew the score, All before toting teks cash and faking hardcore,
    Before corporate intervention, dickriding the departed, n shouting out companies that feed you and your artists,
    The music business is the real black market, pushing materialism to children; executives should be the DAs target,
    Now the cultures half way gone, thanks to mtv pouring into homes, suburban white kids believe they street grown,
    So downtown they roam, thru projects and government housing they go, carrying they bb gun, swagger slow,
    Heads hooded, pretending to push blow, cuz America loves gangsters and the ghetto is its shit show,
    Some struggle and have no choice but to shovel snow, but 95% of hustlers are lazy and this we already kno,
    Shells send funeral parlours to vend crates and tend hate, cuz everyone wants a piece of those year-end dividends,
    Or a wipe of the plate, the 10 real ones left? Are prompted to skate, Q-Tip got 3 unreleased albums,
    Y u think they never made it out the gate? KRS n G Rap been on the rear burner since waaaay back,
    And without they fans dead prez couldn’t even afford an 8 track, Jay cakin, and half the industry hatin,
    Women degraded and on that theres no debating, booty rockin every where, the only worry in a girls life,
    Is the weave that was once her hair, and if she lackin a sufficient pair? Throw some D’s on that bitch…. and get the fuck back out there!

    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....


    The perseverance of a rebel, still here to unsettle, society shaken not stirred, disturbed with words on every level,
    Adults used to tell me not to meddle, I grew up and discovered that change will always inflame the devil,
    In people, they coat corruption with mirrors and smoke, until conforming to bullshit becomes rote,
    Society as a whole has issues taking a joke, sure there are rules but what happened to a little fucking sport?
    Pre-set elections provide the illusion of choice, democracy failed, the moment integrity was bought with a rolls-royce,
    Some say whats the use of a single voice, they’re just too pussy to be different, n ther ignorance keeps them moist,
    The planet is dying, humanity along with it, 100 miles high my minds flying, but I refuse to acquit it,
    Of immoral agendas that brew within it, I want to clear my conscience but I cant quite get in touch with it,
    They say, Sparx, ur a fuckin hypocrite, u rap bout guns too, u squeeze clips and would fuck a bitch,
    Even if u knew she’d sue…. Yea that’s true, but its all just a façade for you, a way into the big time,
    Then this is what i’d do, id put C4 on the core n every door and double in every CEOs and secretarys drawer,
    And send the fucking buildings to 600 ft. below the floor, cuz they way shits goin now? Hip Hop is fucking dead, and I don’t wanna deal with it no more….

    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....


    Sparx aka MrChrisBeats
    N.A. - S.O.N.S.

    Prime Time, It's "Mr. Go Left On A Bitch Who Can't Find Her Right Mind"
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    There it is... my remake of Common's classic...

    before yall get on my ass about the structure... thats how i rap, i dont need shorter bars to flow like a muthafuckin river... but yea... download the song if u havent heard it... classic shit...

    Sparx aka MrChrisBeats
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sparx View Post
    Beat: Common - The 6th Sense (Produced By DJ Premier)
    -----------------------------------------------------------------
    [Sparx]
    The Revolution will not be televised... the revolution is here.....


    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....


    Started off as a basement artform, composed of turntables, pops n locks, and windmills on cardboard,
    Tracksuits and fat laces, no freebases, we all knew the score, All before toting teks cash and faking hardcore,
    Nice Opening Bars, Structure Is A Lil Weird But It Works
    Before corporate intervention, dickriding the departed, n shouting out companies that feed you and your artists,
    The music business is the real black market, pushing materialism to children; executives should be the DAs target,
    Dope, I Like The DA Line, Real Shit
    Now the cultures half way gone, thanks to mtv pouring into homes, suburban white kids believe they street grown,
    So downtown they roam, thru projects and government housing they go, carrying they bb gun, swagger slow,
    Nice, This Shit Is True, A Lotta Kids(Not Just White) Think They Gangster Cuz They Can Emulate A Rap Video
    Heads hooded, pretending to push blow, cuz America loves gangsters and the ghetto is its shit show,
    Some struggle and have no choice but to shovel snow, but 95% of hustlers are lazy and this we already kno,
    Nice, Seems Like Filler But It's Still Good
    Shells send funeral parlours to vend crates and tend hate, cuz everyone wants a piece of those year-end dividends,
    Or a wipe of the plate, the 10 real ones left? Are prompted to skate, Q-Tip got 3 unreleased albums,
    Rhyme Scheme Switch Up Was Dope
    Y u think they never made it out the gate? KRS n G Rap been on the rear burner since waaaay back,
    And without they fans dead prez couldn’t even afford an 8 track, Jay cakin, and half the industry hatin,
    Nice Bar About The Industry, It's Exactly How It Is
    Women degraded and on that theres no debating, booty rockin every where, the only worry in a girls life,
    Is the weave that was once her hair, and if she lackin a sufficient pair? Throw some D’s on that bitch…. and get the fuck back out there!
    Hahahaha, Ill Closer, Love The Rich Boy Line
    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....


    The perseverance of a rebel, still here to unsettle, society shaken not stirred, disturbed with words on every level,
    Adults used to tell me not to meddle, I grew up and discovered that change will always inflame the devil,
    Flow Right Here Is On Point, Smooth Like Butter, Favorite Bar So Far
    In people, they coat corruption with mirrors and smoke, until conforming to bullshit becomes rote,
    Society as a whole has issues taking a joke, sure there are rules but what happened to a little fucking sport?
    Nice, Mirrors And Smoke Bit Was Ill
    Pre-set elections provide the illusion of choice, democracy failed, the moment integrity was bought with a rolls-royce,
    Some say whats the use of a single voice, they’re just too pussy to be different, n ther ignorance keeps them moist,
    Good Bar, Describes Most Rap Fans Today
    The planet is dying, humanity along with it, 100 miles high my minds flying, but I refuse to acquit it,
    Of immoral agendas that brew within it, I want to clear my conscience but I cant quite get in touch with it,
    Truth In A Dope Form
    They say, Sparx, ur a fuckin hypocrite, u rap bout guns too, u squeeze clips and would fuck a bitch,
    Even if u knew she’d sue…. Yea that’s true, but its all just a façade for you, a way into the big time,
    Seemed Like Filler To Me
    Then this is what i’d do, id put C4 on the core n every door and double in every CEOs and secretarys drawer,
    And send the fucking buildings to 600 ft. below the floor, cuz they way shits goin now? Hip Hop is fucking dead, and I don’t wanna deal with it no more….
    Dope Closer, Gets Your Attention Very Easy
    [Hook]
    And you know, yes you know
    This is Rap for real, somethin you feel
    x4
    This is rap for my people.....

    I Give It A 8.9/10, A Lot Of Parts I Liked, Sometimes The Flow Went A Lil Sour But Overall, You Remade The Track Very Good, Common Would Salute You
    illmatic.
    &midnight marauders.
    &the blueprint.
    &donuts.
    &diplomatic immunity.


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    i'd say a 4/10, delivered poor and the lines were far too stretched

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    thanks Franchize...

    And Sam... well... dont worry.... u'll get yours...

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    Common Wouldn't Be Dissapointed. Nice Joint Ninja, Please Keep It Up. 8.9/10
    I Got You 'On The Lamb', Like You Killa's Assailants...

    - Capo

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cap View Post
    Common Wouldn't Be Dissapointed. Nice Joint Ninja, Please Keep It Up. 8.9/10
    Haha That Sounded MAD Homo
    IM tryin to get out da hood.. and ur lil white cracker fuckin ass might keep me in here foreva now.. my deal might be fucked up cuz of u and summer.. u do realize that dont u??? I HOPE U Live in the US.. cuz if i find out ya real name and i loss my record deal for dat bullshit.. Imma serious fucking kill u.. I aint playin man.. at all.. u dont know how much u just fucked me.. and i hope ur happy.. cuz if u didnt have a vendetta.. u shouldve cuz u just ruined me.. seriously - Fluxx

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickolai View Post
    Haha That Sounded MAD Homo
    u kno whats mad homo? u taking mine and chopz' track... thats mad homo

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    Taking?? What Track?
    IM tryin to get out da hood.. and ur lil white cracker fuckin ass might keep me in here foreva now.. my deal might be fucked up cuz of u and summer.. u do realize that dont u??? I HOPE U Live in the US.. cuz if i find out ya real name and i loss my record deal for dat bullshit.. Imma serious fucking kill u.. I aint playin man.. at all.. u dont know how much u just fucked me.. and i hope ur happy.. cuz if u didnt have a vendetta.. u shouldve cuz u just ruined me.. seriously - Fluxx

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nickolai View Post
    Taking?? What Track?
    lol nah u didnt take it, me n chopz had planned on doin I Have A Dream for his album

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