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    Default Click Click (Intro) - My Enemy's Stunt EP

    Artist: MAW
    Title: Click, Click (Intro)
    Album: My Enemy's Stunt EP
    Track Number: 01

    Beat: Yukmouth's "Get Rich or Die Snitchin'"

    [Intro]
    Haha, 'sup? Tell me, you know this feeling you ain't got anymore rhymes in your
    mind, you shot all bullets? I don't!

    [Verse 1]
    You think you got a full loaded, glistenin Fo-Fo
    aiming at me, squeeze the trigger but nothin blows
    Click, Click! You stripped the chamber long time ago
    You didn't done loadin it up till now, ma bro
    Remember this cold winter in december 2004
    You try to shoot me with your nine 9 times in a row!
    (Chorus: In vain Motherfuckers, in vain you hoe!)
    But I put slugs in the clip till now, you nothin
    here you got some lines as a little somethin

    [Hook]
    Click Click, sound of an empty mag
    Click Click, no bullets in the bag
    Click Click, you haters got rhyme lack
    noise of an empty chamber, Click Clack

    [Verse 2]
    You always use the same recipe to create your lines
    Change it! For example put some more flour in your rhymes
    You just throw too less yeast in it, it has to grow up
    But be warned and pay attention, coz too much 'n it'll blow up
    Try to stir it slowly, so the structure will be the best
    Don't mix your special cake too strong, or it'll be a mess
    Haha ya think the whole work is done now. Am I right?
    Finally put it in the oven. 200 degrees, the result'll be tight!

    [Hook]
    Click Click, sound of an empty mag
    Click Click, no bullets in the bag
    Click Click, you haters got rhyme lack
    noise of an empty chamber, Click Clack

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    IM tryin to get out da hood.. and ur lil white cracker fuckin ass might keep me in here foreva now.. my deal might be fucked up cuz of u and summer.. u do realize that dont u??? I HOPE U Live in the US.. cuz if i find out ya real name and i loss my record deal for dat bullshit.. Imma serious fucking kill u.. I aint playin man.. at all.. u dont know how much u just fucked me.. and i hope ur happy.. cuz if u didnt have a vendetta.. u shouldve cuz u just ruined me.. seriously - Fluxx

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    feeeeeeeed pleaze!

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    this is a good intro!Gess the Ep would be nice!i like it!looking for the rest!Keep it up!you improved a lot!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MAW View Post
    Artist: MAW
    Title: Click, Click (Intro)
    Album: My Enemy's Stunt EP
    Track Number: 01

    Beat: Yukmouth's "Get Rich or Die Snitchin'"

    GOOD SO FAR, LIKED THIS BEAT

    [Intro]
    Haha, 'sup? Tell me, you know this feeling you ain't got anymore rhymes in your
    mind, you shot all bullets? I don't!

    [Verse 1]
    You think you got a full loaded, glistenin Fo-Fo
    aiming at me, squeeze the trigger but nothin blows

    NOT BAD, FLOWS NICE

    Click, Click! You stripped the chamber long time ago
    You didn't done loadin it up till now, ma bro
    Remember this cold winter in december 2004
    You try to shoot me with your nine 9 times in a row!

    WHO U TALKING TO AND ABOUT? ABIT CONFUSING, FLOWS ONE OF YA STRONG POINTS, BUT IN THESE BARS THERES NUTTIN THAT REALLY MAKES ME GO WOW OR MAKES ME THINK, JUS RHYMING LINES TO ME, SHUD USE MORE SIMILIES, METAZ AND WORDPLAY TO MAKE PEOPLE THINK

    (Chorus: In vain Motherfuckers, in vain you hoe!)
    But I put slugs in the clip till now, you nothin
    here you got some lines as a little somethin

    PRETTY WACK, SORRY,

    [Hook]
    Click Click, sound of an empty mag
    Click Click, no bullets in the bag
    Click Click, you haters got rhyme lack
    noise of an empty chamber, Click Clack

    NOT BAD, NICE FLOW AND CAN PICTURE IT IN AUDIO

    [Verse 2]
    You always use the same recipe to create your lines
    Change it! For example put some more flour in your rhymes

    CAN SEE WHERE UR TRYNNA GO WIT THIS, MAYBE IF IT WAS WORDED BETTER THIS BAR CUDDA BEEN REAL DOPE. FOR INSTANCE, IN STEAD OF ADDING 'FLOUR' TO THIS GUYS RHYMES, CUDDA SED SUMMIT LIKE COKE OR SUMMIT, SUMFING THAT CAN SURPRISE PEOPLE, BUT I LIKE WOT U WERE TRYNNA DO

    You just throw too less yeast in it, it has to grow up
    But be warned and pay attention, coz too much 'n it'll blow up

    LIKING THE METAPHORS, 2ND LINE DONT THINK IT REALLY CONNECTS WIT THE 1ST

    Try to stir it slowly, so the structure will be the best
    Don't mix your special cake too strong, or it'll be a mess

    UVE GOT SUMFING GOOD GOING ON BUT UR WORDING AND WOT U ACTUALLY SPIT IS RUINING, UVE GOT THE IDEA BUT ONCE AGEN THE 2ND LINE THROWS IT OFF, FLOWS NICE THO

    Haha ya think the whole work is done now. Am I right?
    Finally put it in the oven. 200 degrees, the result'll be tight!

    NOT BAD BAR, INSTEAD OF 'TIGHT' CUDDA SED 'HOT' OR SUMFING THAT CONNECTS WIT AN OVEN OR THE ACTUAL TEMPERATURE TO MAKE IT MAKE MORE SENSE AND TIGHTER

    [Hook]
    Click Click, sound of an empty mag
    Click Click, no bullets in the bag
    Click Click, you haters got rhyme lack
    noise of an empty chamber, Click Clack
    WELL NOT THE BEST DROP FROM U BUT THE CREATIBITY WAS BETTER THAN USUAL
    2ND VERSE THE BEST, LIKED WOT U WERE TRYNNA DO
    WORDING IS SUMMIT U NEEDTA WORK ON AND IF YA DO ULL SEE A BIG IMPROVEMENT IN YA RHYMES
    THIS SONGS TOPIC NOT REALLY MY STYLE BUT ITS SA'LL GOOD
    HOPE U COME WIT SUM HEAT IN UR NEXT FEW DROPS
    I'LL GIVE DIS A 7/10
    IM tryin to get out da hood.. and ur lil white cracker fuckin ass might keep me in here foreva now.. my deal might be fucked up cuz of u and summer.. u do realize that dont u??? I HOPE U Live in the US.. cuz if i find out ya real name and i loss my record deal for dat bullshit.. Imma serious fucking kill u.. I aint playin man.. at all.. u dont know how much u just fucked me.. and i hope ur happy.. cuz if u didnt have a vendetta.. u shouldve cuz u just ruined me.. seriously - Fluxx

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    Thanks. I know it wasnt my best track, but it's just the intro.

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    Well, it was okay. It wouldn't take too much to make it a lil' better but it's okay. And I know it was an intro but I think since there was a hook, you had to make it longer... :P

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    If you want a collabo..."Holla My Name" looks mighty inviting

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