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    Default Lost One -FUCK ALL Y'ALL

    Itís Not A Diss Song, Itís Just A Real Song.
    Feel Me?Ö


    Focus-
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    Some Think I Lost My Wits, So Maybe Itís Time For Focus To Call It Quits/
    But Remember This, Iím The Reason On Giving Birth On What Battleing Is/
    So I Say Cheers To My Loyal Fans, And Those Who I Targeted In My Attacks/
    Those Who I Collaborated In Raps, And Those Who Doubted The Greatest Comeback/
    Iím Blessed With 2 Daughters And 1 Son, 25 Years And Counting And Still Having Fun/
    Iím The Brightest Of My Family, Even Thoí College, I Didnít Attend To One/
    Streets Smarts And Courage Had My Confidence High, To Speak Whatís On My Mind/
    I Feel For Those Convicted Of Crimes, If Your Hustling To Feed Your Family, Well You Did Whats Right/
    Hold Your Head Up, I Also Know What Itís Like Being In The Wrong/
    I Was Betrayed For So Long, I Trusted My Associate Even Thoí He Had My Vision Smogged/
    You May Take My I.D., Still Not The Best, Iíll HaveYou Duckiní And Sucking/
    For DamirÖIf Theres A Will Theres A Way, For His Future Daughter To Inherit Nothing/
    Sorry To Rain On Your Parade, I Got All My Assets Lilí Nig, Your Plan Was A Bit Late/
    I Thank My Nigga Dermo On Your Info, Iíll Let Your Actions Now Decide Your Fate/
    Yíall Know Focus Has That Clout, My Exit Against You Lames Has You 10 Months Still Talking About/
    So Get Back To Wrighting Your Best, Just Know That Iím Done Knocking You Fucks Out/
    How The Hell Did I Lose To Leon Fluxx, The Difference Illustrates The Fact He Sucks/
    I Admit To My Losses, But If I Clearly Remember His Diss Record Came Off Wack As Fuck/
    Your Wasting Your Talent Star, We Can Put An End To This War And Stop This Fighting/
    The United Nations Should Hire You, Cuz You Cease Fire As Soon As You Start Wrighting/
    Our Differences Pulls Us Apart, Is It Because The Big Ego Stuff Weíre On?/
    I Feel We Can Come Together, WithYou Jacking Off And Me Fucking Your Momís/
    If I Chose To Leave? Its My Decisions To Disappear Like A Criss Angel Trick/
    Your Less Of A Man Than I Thought Sean, And All I Think About Is ChicksÖ


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    Lose One, Let Go To Get One
    Left One, Lose Some To Win Some (You Lost One)
    Sorry I'm A Champion, Sorry I'm A Champion
    You Lost OneÖ


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    Yes The Timing Was Right, Make Sure My Mind State Is Tight/
    Pen My Words On The Pad, Recite And Give Energy And Life To The Mic/
    The World Is Ugly Iím Sure Of It, Everyday Is A Struggle And Fight/
    Itís Dark Outside, But As Soon As I Listen To Hip Hop, I Feel A Ray Of Light/
    God Blessed Me With The Gift Of Talent, So Iím Destined To Shine/
    Hip Hop Goes In Full Circle, Iím Just Waiting In Single File Tilí Iím The Next In Line/
    If Yíall Donít Like Me? Even Pretended To Be, Well Stop Speaking To Me/
    Decepticon Niggas Never Succeed, I Donít Need Transformers To Be Part Of My Team/
    Iíd Call You S.O.B.ís, But How Can I You Be The Son Of Yourself/
    Iím Gunniní For Belts, And You Ainít Got None So..Youíll Be Runniní For Help/
    Your Scarred And I Could Tell, I Can Sense It In The Air Something Crazy/
    You Got That Crack Music To Go With Your Muthafuckiní Crack Baby/
    I Use Beef As A Marketing Tool, To Get More Reviews Than Most Of These Dudes/
    Quote Me On That Statement Untrue, I Use My Strategies To Rid Some Of You Fools/
    Change Up The Way The Older Heads Do Thangs, And Create Ridiculous Rules/
    Idiots Catch Feelings, And What Can I Do? Besides Winning And Making You Lose/
    Smile For Me Now As I Tell You To Turn That Frown Upside Down/
    You May Think I Lost One, But Think About The Ones I FoundÖ


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    Lose One, Let Go To Get One
    Left One, Lose Some To Win Some (You Lost One)
    Sorry I'm A Champion, Sorry I'm A Champion
    You Lost OneÖ


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    The Nerve Of These Bitches, As Soon As Focus Go On A Rampage Rippin' Some Skins/
    Tha New Era Is Coming Too, Go Gather Your Writtens And Spits/
    You Pussy Too, Wheres The Expose' Bullshit At Now?, It's Your Very Own Downfall/
    It's Known By All, You Pulled More Bitch Moves In The Post Than Womens Basketball/
    For 6 Years With My Enemies And Niggaz, I'm Tha Illest When I'm Destroying Some Lines/
    And I'm Not Talking About Hairstylists When I Tell You To Curl Up And Dye/
    Untouchables Indeed Has Died, When Your Losing Your Faith/
    You Speak As If It Died With You Buddy?, No Nigga! Your Comments Were Made A Mistake/
    Crack That Subliminal God, On A Battle Tip...Creativity, Punches, Multies, Your Worthless/
    I Spit Bars That Will Put You In Jail, And I Bet You'll Be Dropping Tha Soap On Purpose/
    I'm A Legend On His Own, I Started From Scratch, Dial-up Trying To Connect/
    I Upgraded My Skills While They Laughed, Dsl Cable'd Them Up Posting My Texts/
    Is This My Triumphant Return, Battled Tha Champ? I Know I Beat You..You Don't Have To Ask Me/
    Your Verse Vs. My Verse C'mon Mayne, Harder Shit's Come Out My Ass Cheeks/
    Crew Hoping Is Scarry,It's Becoming A Reality, So Focus Gotta Distribute A Fatality/
    3 Crews In A Year?, Slice You In Half, Leaving You More Than Just A Split Personality/
    It's Disgusting Yo! But I Leave On A Good Note, I Won't Strike!, Til' Struck Upon/
    Think About This A Minute, Before You Get Struck'd By God!.....

    Hook-
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    Lose One, Let Go To Get One
    Left One, Lose Some To Win Some (You Lost One)
    Sorry I'm A Champion, FOCUS Your A Champion
    You Lost OneÖ


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    Track Title: Lost One
    Artist: Focus
    Arranged By: Focus
    Album: Fuck All Y'all
    Focus Appears Courtesy Of Tha Untouchables New Era
    Track Inspired By Jay-z's Lost One
    Last edited by Focus; 01-12-2007 at 03:10 AM.

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    Lil Sam

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    i thought youre going to come with fire gess your comeback is shit!

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    Focus uppin ma nigga

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    [Game]You 25 And You Still Texting...... Uggggghhhhh[/Game]

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    damn! Def one of the hottest tracks by you!

    I like the hook, very good!

    thx for the shout out!

    one of my fav lines:
    I Spit Bars That Will Put You In Jail, And I Bet You'll Be Dropping Tha Soap On Purpose/
    lol!

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    hmmm lol am i mentioned in hurrr?
    still waiting on my battle
    Record:
    42 wins
    2 losses
    30 KO's


    .:.:.WoRd pLaY kInG.:.:.


    ~Tha Commission~

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    Thank's For The Overwhelming Views And The Constructive Feedback.
    Aside Tha Fact That My Fanbase Of "Flash" Sam" Ans Poc's" Appearance On My Thread...All Is Good.
    I'm Glad You Kinda Notice My Mention Of You Odin, I Do Speak Abouyt You In A Sense But! As A Take Notice Kinda Shot! I Wasn't On A Dislike On You, More Of A I See You Kinda Verse...As For Black's Comment Thank's, The Whole Lp Of Fuck All Y'all Will Be My Best Work Ive Ever Done As Far As Remaking Song Selections Arranging Verses, Best Written Verses, And Marketing...I Rushed This Track Out Really To Keep My Name Relevant.
    But Wait Til' I Drop The Whole Lp As One.

    Thank's For Checking The 4th Single Off The Lp.

    Lil Sam.....Keep Promoting The Lackluster Movement.
    Flash.....This Ain't Dope........Envy What Is To Be A .....Classic!
    Poc.....Who Are You And Whats Your Agenda Against Fo'?



    FUCK ALL Y'ALL COMING SOON...

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    I really want to hate this because I had made my own version of this, I just hadn't released it.. But I can't...

    Flow.. It was hot, I could feel a constant flow all the way through, I am feeling that it fell of once or twice but was quickly picked up again.. I didn't really catch many meta's in there.. Maybe one or two but when used they were nice, not sure if they were on purpose or just incorporated without concious thought. You had some nice punches in there which is something you have always prided yourself with. You did have some personals in their that were pretty nice and you used some multiple rhyming to your advantage.

    Anyways.. It was a nice drop.. one of your hottest drops, well written and not posted with annoying colours. I think you should drop it with a few more similies and perhaps try bringing a more metaphorical side to the drops as it makes people think more... anyways a pretty nice drop, keep up the good work.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chopz View Post
    I really want to hate this because I had made my own version of this, I just hadn't released it.. But I can't...

    Flow.. It was hot, I could feel a constant flow all the way through, I am feeling that it fell of once or twice but was quickly picked up again.. I didn't really catch many meta's in there.. Maybe one or two but when used they were nice, not sure if they were on purpose or just incorporated without concious thought. You had some nice punches in there which is something you have always prided yourself with. You did have some personals in their that were pretty nice and you used some multiple rhyming to your advantage.

    Anyways.. It was a nice drop.. one of your hottest drops, well written and not posted with annoying colours. I think you should drop it with a few more similies and perhaps try bringing a more metaphorical side to the drops as it makes people think more... anyways a pretty nice drop, keep up the good work.
    Well Recieved, I'll Give It A Try On The Thing's You'v Mentioned.
    I Know I Need My Wrighting Teqniques To Be Up To Date With The Multi Style Generation We're In, To Be Honest Chopz, Lately On My Writtens...I'm Just Too Involved With Story And Messages, I Just Don't Want People To Come In This Thread And Read It Once...I Want To Get The Audience Attention And Make Them Remember Quotables.

    Maybe You Can Help Me Out On My Next And Future Projects.

    Once Again Thank You For Your Thoughts.

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