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    Default Troops (The Best/Realest I Ever Done)

    Artist:Lilsam
    Album:The Portrait


    Crack In His Hand, A Man Approaching, Buys A Bag And Quickly-Leaves
    And Even Thought He Wasn't A Killer, Wasn't In A Click-With-Thieves....
    It Felt So Wrong, But Kids Were Living Off Food Past Sell-By-Date
    And This Man A Soldier At Heart, Helping Kids, Thinking 'Hell-My-Fate'
    On The Cold Streets, Kids With Uncleaned Sheets, Living Off Adversity
    When His Precious Asked What He Doing, He Said 'Don't Be Observing-Me'
    Not Because He Wanted Her Gone, Didn't Want Her To See-His-Good-Willing-Sins
    But Never Once Did He Boast, Never Acted A Gee..His-Hood-Killing-To-Win
    Never Laid A Hand On Nobody, No Wife To Help, Just Him And His Reason-To-Live
    Didn't Spend The Money On His Own Pleasure, No Leisure, Just Treason-To-Give
    No Real Jobs, Didn't Go To School, Poverty Always-Been-An-Opposition
    And Throughout His Life And Different Locations, Always-Seen-Decomposition
    Looked Into A Mans Eyes As He Died, Tears Swelled, Man Had A Heart-Attack
    Seen A Man Depart-A-Back, From Seeing Crack Babies To Actually Carting-Crack
    And That Was The Whole Problem, A Women Asked For Crack-And-He-Cried
    He Didn't Sell It And Decided To Quit, A Job In A Dainty Shack-He-Applied
    As He Settled Into A New Routine, Happy, He Winced As He Saw-an-Addict
    Demanded Some Crack, 'I Got None', They Beat Him Up, Four-Of-Them-At-It
    He Felt A Piercing Blow Inflitate His Spine, Been Stabbed, Knew-He-Was-Dying
    They Ran, Kids Came In Flying, “We've Come To Visit You, Who-Left-You Crying?”
    “Some Bad Men, I Love You Both, Come Kiss Me”, They Didnt Understand-His-Tears
    Noticed Blood On Their Hands As They Hugged, Now They Could Apphrehend-His-Fears
    “Bye, I Love You Kids Forever”, And Through The Force Of Tears They Replied Sadly
    “I Love You Too, You Like A Soldier”, He Slouched Dead, “Who Killed My Daddy?”

    (Hook)
    Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
    Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
    Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
    Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity
    They Live On

    I Am In The Trenches, Gun In My Hand, Life In My Grasp, Refusing To Drop-It
    As I Held A Gun, A Man At Mercy, Saw Myself In An Enermy..Couldn't Pop-It
    We Looked Deep Into Each Others Eyes, Gun Facing Each-Of-Our-Heads
    Both Holding Guns, Finger On The Triggers, Shoot? Or Reach-For-Their-Lead
    Try And Steal His Artillery? So We Both Lived? No Words Just Concentration
    Must Focus On The Enermy With Concentration, UK v Germans, Felt Like Same-Nation
    As His Enermy Wept, I Shared The Tears, My Leader Called “Kill Him Or I Will!”
    I Picked Up My Weaponery Feeling Ill, Heard A Pop, Struck My Arm, 'Still-He-Goes-To-Kill?”
    The Man Who Wept In Front Of Me Shot Me, But I Knew He Had-To-Pop
    My Weak Arm Started To Flop, But I Fired Back, I'd Be Surely Mad-To-Stop
    I Shot Him In His Chest Consecutively, As He Stopped Breathing He-Looked-Me-In The-Eye
    Collapsing, He Leaned Up, Gasping For Air, Amazingly He Shook-Me- I-Wondered-Why
    He Let Out A Weak Smile, “Do Yourself Proud, Friend” Before He Stopped-Breathing
    By Then My Arm Was Seething, He Encouraged Me, So Swiftly I Popped-Believing
    As I Pulled Each Trigger I Thought Of The Man's Final Words, With 'Friend'-Repeating
    And His Inspiring Attitude Transpired Into My Gun, Desperately Trying To Defend-A-Beating
    My Arms Pain Was Lessened, My Strength Of Heart Helped Soothed-The-Pain
    But As A Shot Entered My Chest, The New Danger Swiftly Removed-The-Gain
    Death Was Staring Me In The Face, As I Fell To The Floor, Mixing Face-With-Grit
    I Realised My Loss Wouldn't Be Detrimental, Because They Could Replace-My-Hit
    I Grasped The Floor, A Stone Was In My Hand, Slipped Away, Like My Survival-Grasp
    I Was Desperately Desperately In Need Of Treatment To Save Me, Needed An Arrival-Fast
    But It Never Came, I Started To Go Dizzy, Dozens Of Thoughts Ringing-In-My-Ears
    But One That Stood Out, From My Late Father, Was “ Remember The Stining-Off-The-Tears”

    (Hook)
    Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
    Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
    Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
    Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity...
    They Live On
    Last edited by lilsam; 12-22-2006 at 08:48 PM.

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    deep good topic executed well loads of multis, i dont like the hook i can see what your looking for though lots of quality lines but sam lots of multis isnt good for me in a drop like this, and uve used lots of little questions to fill up ya lines, defo prefered second verse overall about 8/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Focus View Post
    No Replay Value Huh?
    Your Marketing Is Rookie.
    Just Curious Sam, When Are You Planning To Drop "The Portrait"?

    By The Way.......

    FUCK ALL Y'ALL 12/25/06
    Dude, Shut The Fuck Up.

    Seriously, You Contribute Nothing To This Place, You Show Up Once In A Blue Moon, Mouth Off For No Reason And Always Try Ressurect A Crew That's Been Dead.

    Talking Slick At Sam Cause He Shit All Over Kill4Hire, You's A Hooooooo

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    Focus sucks Ballz

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    hey man I gotta pull a 8-9 hour work day today. I dont wanna leave u quick feed cuz ik u said u put alot into this so I''ll try and get u feed tongiht when i get home.
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