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    ive been good lately on this shit ive been quiet but now its about time to break my silence
    im gonna speak out on people claiming they the ones bringing the lyrical violence
    dont quit your day job
    yeah it might be dead end
    but it sure beats going up against me when you cant defend against my flow
    but against yours im like a dam im a concrete block
    ever stong against your weak shit
    your flows like some little splash upon the rocks
    now i see some hardcore new talent trying to emerge with a vocal surge about thugs
    you might not think its fair but niesse p the only niccas u know are the ones that you wear
    i think theres people hear biting, stealing shit and claimin freestyles when they spent the last three weeks writing
    only to come up with something whack about six lines long tryna be gangsta when they faker then jewelery sold on the streets of hong kong
    im not over yet theres one more target to go
    and hes the ramil impersonator, the murda perpetrator
    who made you official kid stop playin people for suckas i couldnt see the black lines through you even if you was tracing paper

    ***thought i might just add an invitation for ppl to hit back, verbal assultor and niesse p

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    lmao...u targeting me?...u calling me out...r u serious?...it's whatever kid because it's not that serious homey...i ain't claimed nothing about "BRINGING THE LYRICAL VIOLENCE" it's just a name, u reading to much into shyt kid...i'm just doing me...

    u need ta take ur spoonz and dig u up a new style//
    homey it's just words so y u beefing with a child?//
    i kill dummies that bring envy to my situation//
    i'm just doing me making u think twice before u think to send another invitation//
    that's what wrong with kats always making newbie prove//
    that they a lyrical mastermind when homey they better than u//
    so don't fault me for a effortless dame//
    when ur spittin is the same o same//
    top notch spells my badge//
    lucidly i do surpass//
    i've already be acclaimed so i can care less bout ur ass//
    so what, i don't posses what ya got beneth ya belt//
    what makes u think u can target a dame who ain't no love for herself?//
    that thread i posted the other day that was old yea it took be a while to create and i admit ima lair//
    but i'm sly with mine and u wouldn't be hot if u was lit by fire//
    the english vernacular doesn't with hold enough words so like u, simple, that's the way i rip u//
    u would only be the best if i took ur spoons and dip u//
    within the best punch lines//
    niesse p aint the only one who hate u fag ass cats, "thugs," they claim they cluch nines//
    silly fagget u can't beat me son//
    i'll flip ur weak flow and then repeat it son//
    so take ur hands from round my neck nicca let me breath//
    i cause i can leave u hyperventlating like u a chick standing by to coceive//
    i'm versital so i got more extinctions than a hoes hair stitched with weave//
    my versitility can travel from sublines of happy and sad//
    have u ever notice the illest of them all r always lacking a dad?//
    but forget all that let me get back to the purpose//
    sticks and stones breaks my bones and ya petty words r immune to my surface// (lol that was simple as hell)
    so what i'm a rookie bastard//
    but i shine like meros that's been glazed and plastered//
    give in hang up jersey like they some christmas lights//
    and think twice before u place up ur spoonz to fight//
    cause u can hit me wit ur best and i'll get right back up like i'm a PCP dope feign//
    u can't tie me down cause i don't likey them rope things//
    slavery's over u can't master me cause my mind's levitated like i'm defying gravity//
    so yesa massa wouldn't fall from my boby part that has cavities//
    i can't paint u a picture clearer because i'm not Picasso but i can spit a masterpiece//

    ***don't hit me no garbage spoonz...the lesson of the day is think before u speak...i'm out***
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    2. To The Naked Eye
    3. Ex Renegade ft Loc ; Enzyme
    4. Quotes
    5. Shape Shifter
    6. Jack Of All Trades ft Odin
    7. Glass ft Eyebagz
    8. Nazereth Savage (Remix) ft. Leon Fluxx
    9. Everything Is Everything (Remix)
    10. Take Ya Breath Away
    11. Texting Is Dead ft The BC
    12. Goodbye


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    good stuff verbal_assultor... betta than spoonz... keep it up gurl ;)

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    thank u...and i state it now "spoonz ur a bitch" get over urself homey...
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    The Reinvention TXT LP


    1. Hall Of Fame ft. Enzyme
    2. To The Naked Eye
    3. Ex Renegade ft Loc ; Enzyme
    4. Quotes
    5. Shape Shifter
    6. Jack Of All Trades ft Odin
    7. Glass ft Eyebagz
    8. Nazereth Savage (Remix) ft. Leon Fluxx
    9. Everything Is Everything (Remix)
    10. Take Ya Breath Away
    11. Texting Is Dead ft The BC
    12. Goodbye


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    rookies these days think they can scratch me to get themselves a higher a place
    but im about to clip your nails your shit just got shutdown down like your locked up with no bail
    keep scratchin but the surface aint touched
    while your dabbling in rap im recording my demo and such
    put your badge away i know your name
    "verbal assultor"? if i was your moms i woulda named you "verbally a shame"
    damn that was a tough blow
    i dont think anyone here would of wanted to of been you
    its like if you were on a videogame you would of had to use your last continue
    the only thing levitating your mind is the PCP
    its got your so doped up you think you can see me
    spot me
    but still i appear unclear
    just a blurred image to you who cant touch what she cant get near
    you think i can be phased when you throwin every page of your rhyme book
    all you do is leave me wondering how look the rhyme took
    im the true lyrical master there'll be none after
    theres only one spot here for you to fill
    "lyrical disaster"

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    congrats u making a demo, well good for u//
    u say u still appear unclear, then whop-d-do//
    i'm not tryna scratch u off i'm tryna abolish u//
    as far as rookie these days goes who put u above that ranking//
    homey i'm better than u cuz ain't no room for debating//
    moms naming me verbally a shame?//
    homey look at my last thread "the stars" on it says i'm lyrical acclaimed//
    look in the sky it's a bird it's a plane//
    nah it's an australian rookie that verbal_assultor has once again puttin' to shame//
    lyrical disaster? nah i'm filling a void//
    cause remember u recording a demo, u about to be newly employed//
    sike, that's bullshit just like them words that u type//
    i'm still flashing my badge is it now clear in ur sight?//
    u a lyrical master, word? the only thing true in that line is "there'll be none after" u in place//
    cause after i cease of u them other garbage freestylers wont even show they face//
    i don't have a rhyme book son but i'm a make one and every page will be dedicated to u//
    and before i write, my thoughts will be mediated upon u//
    i'll make a art out of it like it's calypso or kong-fu//
    u right nobody would want to be me//
    cause the only thing that gives me pleasure is knowing that u never gonna see me//
    u aint got no other punchs to blow//
    cause i'm telling them i'm young, i'm a female, and i ain't got a pops so?//
    now what u gonna type, so more garbage that u the champ and u weighing like a feather, light//
    like, i said get over urself cause it's making u foul//
    don't say u don't need help because the 1st symptom to lyrical disasters is denial//
    read my members text i overwhelm the average mind in massive ways//
    and i'm taking ur bitch ass belt just call me Cassius Clay// (Ali)
    i ain't a lyrcial god and i ain't close to perfect//
    but look how i put ur shit down, flipped it, and reversed it// (lol)

    ***spoonz it's over...so stop imbarassing urself...but if u want i can keep going...i'm out
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    The Reinvention TXT LP


    1. Hall Of Fame ft. Enzyme
    2. To The Naked Eye
    3. Ex Renegade ft Loc ; Enzyme
    4. Quotes
    5. Shape Shifter
    6. Jack Of All Trades ft Odin
    7. Glass ft Eyebagz
    8. Nazereth Savage (Remix) ft. Leon Fluxx
    9. Everything Is Everything (Remix)
    10. Take Ya Breath Away
    11. Texting Is Dead ft The BC
    12. Goodbye


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    embarassin MYself what about YOU
    you think you can answer my punches with shit like "whop-d-do"
    your way too overconfident
    theres no substance to your raps
    and the only void you gettin filled
    is the one thats in your lap
    i can tell you didnt spend as long on that rhyme
    you hardly even dissed me
    you think you droppin bombs but aint realisin that they missed me
    yeah im australia now you understand it
    bloody useless yank sheila in the aussie tongue youre branded
    are you lyrically acclaimed to bad you're not lyrical in the brain
    you can spit yourself insane but the facts will remain the same
    im better
    and i tell you i figure that becuase as i said before
    theres no substance in your rap
    your talking about you flipped my verse on me
    without putting a single curse on me
    good for you? fuck that shit more like i got the goods do you?

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    my flow is supposed to be simple cause there's no means to battling u//
    i called ya out ya name and u took it like i was flattering u//
    i'm overconfident because there's a substance to my spittin//
    u ain't beating me cause i can hit u with shit and viewers be like ah ha, oh no no, no she didn't//
    drop shit, bloody mouth like popped lips//
    watch this, if u jumped on threads u couldn't top shit//
    u dropping demos, u must like dicks cause u thinking a head//
    how u droppin demos when u sink, like u lil kim's face in a nicca's pelvic area, on thread//
    homey, iím taking u out, like a snitch face n society//(Snitches arenít wanted in Cities)
    my words will leave you empty and stressed like castration anxiety//
    the only time you can spit shit is if you were eating fecies// (look it up)
    u bleak, now its time to start deleting ur species//
    watching this distortion rots//
    it get spoonz more nervous then christians with abortion thoughts//
    please, ya verses are never something new//
    the only time someone actually reads ya verses is when you click preview//
    u can preview ya verse before u post it//
    the only reason they viewing this one because i'm so sick//
    i mean this aint running but learn ya pace//
    spoonz i'll give you back your spot then beat u again so u know i earned my place//
    ur unaware of what u hiting at cause u throwing blind punchs//
    u gettin served like u b2k or like tickets for kids for free lunchs//
    yea i got the goods and it's custom fitted//
    my flow is like horny dikes cant no nicca fuck wit it//
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    The Reinvention TXT LP


    1. Hall Of Fame ft. Enzyme
    2. To The Naked Eye
    3. Ex Renegade ft Loc ; Enzyme
    4. Quotes
    5. Shape Shifter
    6. Jack Of All Trades ft Odin
    7. Glass ft Eyebagz
    8. Nazereth Savage (Remix) ft. Leon Fluxx
    9. Everything Is Everything (Remix)
    10. Take Ya Breath Away
    11. Texting Is Dead ft The BC
    12. Goodbye


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    niesse p where u at...he invited both of us...but u aint gotta respond cause i can handle utensils...
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    The Reinvention TXT LP


    1. Hall Of Fame ft. Enzyme
    2. To The Naked Eye
    3. Ex Renegade ft Loc ; Enzyme
    4. Quotes
    5. Shape Shifter
    6. Jack Of All Trades ft Odin
    7. Glass ft Eyebagz
    8. Nazereth Savage (Remix) ft. Leon Fluxx
    9. Everything Is Everything (Remix)
    10. Take Ya Breath Away
    11. Texting Is Dead ft The BC
    12. Goodbye


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    woo u killin it verbal assaulter

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