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Young DON
09-25-2009, 01:55 AM
Ay wats really good wit dis nigga liltez man....ha ha ha, dis nigga really suck ass and dat nigga brandondizzle or whateva the fuck his name is be on dis nigga dick so hard lol! It's unbelievable. But fuck it i'm back on dis bitch and i'm bout spit a nice little verse for ya'll niggas so here i go!!!

Verse:

M.i.a. Paper planes, my money so high/flier then them all...home's here, i'm living in the sky/successful thinking, got an empire state of mind/no i'm not jay-z, don't rep the n.y./cleveland nigga, kid cudi, all day n nite/still vision my dreams, naw nigga neva lost sight/blinded by the life, i'm jus tryin to see the light/despite the drama, and sins brought in, i keep ballin/liltez on his knees, like a baby he keep crawlin/got a hundred missed calls from brandondizzle why he keep callin/two dead men walking, somebody please bring the coffins/sweet bars ta ya ears, alicia keys, got em fallin/young don wit da calico, niggas betta lay it low/in the words of keyshia cole...fuck it! Jus gotta "let it go"/so i let em go, let em blow his brains out, now they on the floor/tez u an angel now, so let me see ya halo!!!...halooo!!!!/naw dis nigga a fagot, one of charlie's angels/pop niggas! At every different angles/brandondizzle, can't feel a nigga, unless he's given anal!/i'm jus saying, simple & plain, dey call me the ""hitman"/catch u ridin witcha family and shoot up ya family van/naw dis jus words, ain't nothin more than a battle man/and i ain't gotta say it dis muthafucka already kno who i better den!!!!/

r.i.p. Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Fuck wit me niggas...get at me niggas!!! Lol! Dis jus part 1 it's three parts of this shit.nobody can fuck wit me!

Redd
09-25-2009, 09:36 AM
lol i dunno how much my opinion counts for...but i actually thought that was nice. and thats not just coz i dont like lil tez. i actually was feeling this.

toprule
09-25-2009, 12:22 PM
i feel it too!!!!
u went at icon boy its OK but why Brando???
brando is my dude and dont diss him just cuz hes down with his boy...

anyway dope lyrics!!

Propz
09-25-2009, 01:07 PM
it was up to par fix ur structure tho in bars ya kno not tellin u how to do u its just easier to read if u do bars

Young DON
09-25-2009, 02:57 PM
i feel it too!!!!
u went at icon boy its OK but why Brando???
brando is my dude and dont diss him just cuz hes down with his boy...

anyway dope lyrics!!


Good look Toprule, u right man I shouldn't be dissin Brandondizzle even though I feel he's always taking Lil' Tez side and not jus be true to wats hot lol! but naw he's yo dude an i'm leave him out next time, thanks fa da love my nigga

Young DON
09-25-2009, 02:58 PM
it was up to par fix ur structure tho in bars ya kno not tellin u how to do u its just easier to read if u do bars

Yea u rite, i find hard to read it my damn self lol! but appreciate the help

brandondizzle
09-25-2009, 07:09 PM
Good look Toprule, u right man I shouldn't be dissin Brandondizzle even though I feel he's always taking Lil' Tez side and not jus be true to wats hot lol! but naw he's yo dude an i'm leave him out next time, thanks fa da love my nigga

i feel this joint, but u cant be comin at me dog lol...but i aint gonna front, it was nice...lol, but dont run to far cuz u keep droppin my name u hit a wall