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Summer_heat
06-23-2008, 08:32 PM
-Welcome Home Doormat-

I picture myself in your eyes; Iím your welcome home doormat,
Whenever you need me, you use me till my heart lies flat,
Step on, stop off, itís all so like a soap for you, youíre so conniving,
Every step has a motive, wipe your sins off on me as your arriving,
And as soon as youíre done... thereís the dead silence...
No consideration for my feelings, dismay at your show of defiance,
It doesnít matter to you, that there is a reason I put up with it...

~~Look at what youíve done now foolish heart??? Itís not the first time,
Youíve stepped into this puddle of tears before and were left sour as a lime~~

Never one to be walked on, but I allowed you the pleasure,
The reason is simple, Ďcos I love you, but I guess thatís sumet u just donít treasure...
Now what happens if next time you come home, Iím not here??
The doormat u once took for granted is gone, does it fill you with fear?
I want to know, will u even shed a tear; it may fill your insides with remorse,
How will you wipe away your sins then? I imagine it will only get worse,
So make amends while Iím still here, donít let this chance go to waste,
Because... unlike other doormats, I canít be replaced.

Nickolai
06-23-2008, 10:13 PM
I'm sorry for the way I treated you :(.....

Anywayz, this was nice. Short n sweet. Liked your end rhyming, wasn't basic shit. And the whole comparing yourself to a doormat ting. Solid like snake.

Keep up

Summer_heat
06-24-2008, 07:22 PM
hahaha yeaaa thanks Nikolai, appreciate the feedback!
after i wrote it, it felt like a rap, was meant to be poetry, but then again its one n same, so itll do!