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FranchizeTheKid
01-21-2008, 05:07 AM
[Intro]

It's Ya Boy!
Nike Airs (Check)
My Hat's Fitted (Check)
LRG On Deck (Check)
Fuck It
I Guess I Got...

[Verse 1]

All I Need Is Kicks, A Bus With A Back Seat
A Bitch With Mickey Mouse Ears, And Retarded Speech (Thems Was Rumors!)
Nah, I'm Fuckin' With You, Sonnin' These Dudes
You Got One Bitch, Son I'm Accustomed To Two (Ouch)
I'm In Ta... Big Spendin' And Coppin' Some Nike Airs
Ain't A Lefty, So You Know I Stay With The Right Pair (Uh)
I Got Global Attention, Half The World Just Hatin' On Me
Anticipating A Flop, Day Won't Come So What You Waitin' On B
And I'm Heavily Slept On, Despite The Strong Buzz Kid
Faggots Claimin' I Don't Drop Shit Like Life Long Grudges?
Fuck Them Though, They Can Suck A Fat Dick/
Like Nick Ain't Gonna Come In The Game And Make Classics (Yeah Right)
And Dudes Say I Dumb My Ish Down Just To Keep Ya Head Noddin'
Like You're Supposed To Black Out On Every Verse Like Electrical Problems?
The Real Keep Pushin', But The Cowards Make Excuses
That's Why I Never Stall And Stay Movin' (Cuz)

[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)

[Verse 2]

Now I Could Give A Fuck What You Think Of Me (Neva)
I Never Swagger Jack, It's Me 24/7, Frequently
I Told Y'all On The First Track That The Ruler's Back
Who's My Competition? All These New Dudes Is Wack (Who?)
Creative Lines Invade Ya Mind So Fuck The Chit Chatter
Cuz Y'all Subject Matter Is Subjects That Didn't Matter! (Emo Bitches)
Which Mean Ya Concepts Is Nonsense Ya Soft Bitch
Watch Me Pull What's Concealed Y'all All Flinch Now Stop It (No Fakin')
You See What I'm Rockin'? That Alone Just Proves My Worth
My Shit Groundbreakin' To The Point Where I Move The Earth
These Hoes Gimme Dome Like They Took Cranium Classes
And I Must Admit, Yes The Shit Is Stadium Status (Shouts To Kanye)
I Get Money For Playin' With Words, I'm Officially Slayin' These Herbs
So Much Lights Camera Action With Me That I'm Makin' Up Verbs (I'm A Star Haha!)
So Take That Into Consideration While You Layin' On Curbs (Bum Ass)
Kinda Like A Bond Flick, Cuz When I Hit You, You'll Be Shaken Not Stirred (Word?)

[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)


Swagger Type Of Joint, I Was Really Trying To Catch The Feel Of The Original Track Wit This One, Peep The Original Track And You'll Definitely Appreciate This A Lot More

Rate Outta 10

FranchizeTheKid
01-21-2008, 05:09 AM
I Spazzed On The 2nd Verse

Flash
01-21-2008, 11:00 AM
great flow
this is a dope banger
some nice punch lines
this is made for spittin

8/10

nice to see u back ill give it a bar to bar feed when ill have more time :D

tjjohnson
01-22-2008, 09:48 PM
The second verse was sick.

Sparx
01-23-2008, 01:58 AM
[Intro]

It's Ya Boy!
Nike Airs (Check)
My Hat's Fitted (Check)
LRG On Deck (Check)
Fuck It
I Guess I Got...

[Verse 1]

All I Need Is Kicks, A Bus With A Back Seat
A Bitch With Mickey Mouse Ears, And Retarded Speech (Thems Was Rumors!)
he lies... bitch was on her downs syndrome shit...
Nah, I'm Fuckin' With You, Sonnin' These Dudes
You Got One Bitch, Son I'm Accustomed To Two (Ouch)
his LEFT and RIGHT hand...
I'm In Ta... Big Spendin' And Coppin' Some Nike Airs
Ain't A Lefty, So You Know I Stay With The Right Pair (Uh)
smh.... you rappin about bitches just doesnt work for me, but ur flow is on point
I Got Global Attention, Half The World Just Hatin' On Me
Anticipating A Flop, Day Won't Come So What You Waitin' On B
swag but filler
And I'm Heavily Slept On, Despite The Strong Buzz Kid
Faggots Claimin' I Don't Drop Shit Like Life Long Grudges?
good punch... but you dont drop shit aka Girls Girls Girls
Fuck Them Though, They Can Suck A Fat Dick/
Like Nick Ain't Gonna Come In The Game And Make Classics (Yeah Right)
And Dudes Say I Dumb My Ish Down Just To Keep Ya Head Noddin'
Like You're Supposed To Black Out On Every Verse Like Electrical Problems?
good
The Real Keep Pushin', But The Cowards Make Excuses
That's Why I Never Stall And Stay Movin' (Cuz)
ok ending
[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)
hooks r solid
[Verse 2]

Now I Could Give A Fuck What You Think Of Me (Neva)
I Never Swagger Jack, It's Me 24/7, Frequently
I Told Y'all On The First Track That The Ruler's Back
Who's My Competition? All These New Dudes Is Wack (Who?)
Creative Lines Invade Ya Mind So Fuck The Chit Chatter
Cuz Y'all Subject Matter Is Subjects That Didn't Matter! (Emo Bitches)
Which Mean Ya Concepts Is Nonsense Ya Soft Bitch
Watch Me Pull What's Concealed Y'all All Flinch Now Stop It (No Fakin')
You See What I'm Rockin'? That Alone Just Proves My Worth
My Shit Groundbreakin' To The Point Where I Move The Earth
good... a lotta filler tho before...
These Hoes Gimme Dome Like They Took Cranium Classes
And I Must Admit, Yes The Shit Is Stadium Status (Shouts To Kanye)
lol ok good
I Get Money For Playin' With Words, I'm Officially Slayin' These Herbs
So Much Lights Camera Action With Me That I'm Makin' Up Verbs (I'm A Star Haha!)
So Take That Into Consideration While You Layin' On Curbs (Bum Ass)
Kinda Like A Bond Flick, Cuz When I Hit You, You'll Be Shaken Not Stirred (Word?)
good closer not bad verse
[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)


Swagger Type Of Joint, I Was Really Trying To Catch The Feel Of The Original Track Wit This One, Peep The Original Track And You'll Definitely Appreciate This A Lot More

Rate Outta 10

i think the first verse was better... but thats just me... i think the second was more freestyled, the first half lacked the punches of the first... flow was there throughout tho... basic verses, but still solid... ive seen better from u tho frannie... holla if ur still writing go on msn occasionally
:smokin:

Chopz
01-24-2008, 07:16 PM
Fuck you about telling me to rate it out of ten? Do you know who I am?

Hmm me personally, I thought it was a good piece of work although it did have a lot of fillers in. It had a nice consitent flow, not much content though, but that's the way it was planned im guessing. I see you put a lot of cockiness into this piece... Even though you have dropped like two songs on this site. Hooks were nice, not the best but gave a break between the verses and kept the flow constant (IMO)...

Anyways, nice piece start dropping more..

Peace...

FranchizeTheKid
01-25-2008, 06:48 PM
If This Instrumental Was Released, I'd Of Put This Shit Out On Audio Fam

That's Why I Always Keep The Flow Consistent Cuz Someday I Might Wanna Turn It Into Audio

JaTahChild01
01-26-2008, 01:11 PM
Cuz Y'all Subject Matter Is Subjects That Didn't Matter! (Emo Bitches)

haha most true story line anyone has written in a clip

Hostile
01-26-2008, 04:09 PM
The usual Fran That I am used to.

Why all the language tho? That from fran I am not used to.

It didn't seem like you to me. BUUt. It was a good piece of work. Sometimes I was like...uhh..and other times I was like...Wow.

Wow me more.

Eyebagz
01-28-2008, 03:01 PM
[Intro]

It's Ya Boy!
Nike Airs (Check)
My Hat's Fitted (Check)
LRG On Deck (Check)
Fuck It
I Guess I Got...

[Verse 1]

All I Need Is Kicks, A Bus With A Back Seat
A Bitch With Mickey Mouse Ears, And Retarded Speech (Thems Was Rumors!)

dope bar

Nah, I'm Fuckin' With You, Sonnin' These Dudes
You Got One Bitch, Son I'm Accustomed To Two (Ouch)

yawn

I'm In Ta... Big Spendin' And Coppin' Some Nike Airs
Ain't A Lefty, So You Know I Stay With The Right Pair (Uh)

yawn

I Got Global Attention, Half The World Just Hatin' On Me
Anticipating A Flop, Day Won't Come So What You Waitin' On B

the world dont give a fuck about you

And I'm Heavily Slept On, Despite The Strong Buzz Kid
Faggots Claimin' I Don't Drop Shit Like Life Long Grudges?

Nice

Fuck Them Though, They Can Suck A Fat Dick/
Like Nick Ain't Gonna Come In The Game And Make Classics (Yeah Right)

you wont

And Dudes Say I Dumb My Ish Down Just To Keep Ya Head Noddin'
Like You're Supposed To Black Out On Every Verse Like Electrical Problems?

yawn

The Real Keep Pushin', But The Cowards Make Excuses
That's Why I Never Stall And Stay Movin' (Cuz)

yawn
[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)

mhhh
[Verse 2]

Now I Could Give A Fuck What You Think Of Me (Neva)
I Never Swagger Jack, It's Me 24/7, Frequently

flows nice

I Told Y'all On The First Track That The Ruler's Back
Who's My Competition? All These New Dudes Is Wack (Who?)

filler

Creative Lines Invade Ya Mind So Fuck The Chit Chatter
Cuz Y'all Subject Matter Is Subjects That Didn't Matter! (Emo Bitches)

do not get really

Which Mean Ya Concepts Is Nonsense Ya Soft Bitch
Watch Me Pull What's Concealed Y'all All Flinch Now Stop It (No Fakin')

filler

You See What I'm Rockin'? That Alone Just Proves My Worth
My Shit Groundbreakin' To The Point Where I Move The Earth

dope second line

These Hoes Gimme Dome Like They Took Cranium Classes
And I Must Admit, Yes The Shit Is Stadium Status (Shouts To Kanye)

yawn

I Get Money For Playin' With Words, I'm Officially Slayin' These Herbs
So Much Lights Camera Action With Me That I'm Makin' Up Verbs (I'm A Star Haha!)

yawn

So Take That Into Consideration While You Layin' On Curbs (Bum Ass)
Kinda Like A Bond Flick, Cuz When I Hit You, You'll Be Shaken Not Stirred (Word?)
alright wordplay
[Hook]

All I Need...
Fresh Gear... (Check)
Nike Airs... (Check)
Mean Fitted... (Uh Huh)
Wildin' Out With Some Chicks That's Really Wit' It (Yeah)
And They All By My Side, Let's Ride
All I Need...
That New Release (Got That)
Diamond Chain And A Pocket Full Of Cheese (Got Those)
A Sunny Day Some Chicks That Wanna Stay
And I'll Be On My Way (Listen)


Swagger Type Of Joint, I Was Really Trying To Catch The Feel Of The Original Track Wit This One, Peep The Original Track And You'll Definitely Appreciate This A Lot More

Rate Outta 10

to be fair did not like

Nickolai
01-28-2008, 06:32 PM
Meh.......

FranchizeTheKid
02-02-2008, 01:03 AM
I Guess A Lot Of It's Considered Filler Cuz I Write My Shit As If It Were Audio... I Ain't Tryna Spazz Every Bar, You Shouldn't Either, It's Better To Keep The Flow Smooth With An Outstanding Bar Every Once In A While, Than Have Every Bar Ridiculous And The Flow Be Choppy

Sparx
02-02-2008, 02:10 AM
I Guess A Lot Of It's Considered Filler Cuz I Write My Shit As If It Were Audio... I Ain't Tryna Spazz Every Bar, You Shouldn't Either, It's Better To Keep The Flow Smooth With An Outstanding Bar Every Once In A While, Than Have Every Bar Ridiculous And The Flow Be Choppy

thank you lil wayne for your dumbing down of radio friendly tracks
:eazy: :eazy: :eazy:
:glare:

:smokin: