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Latrice
01-09-2008, 02:07 AM
it's been a minute since i seen ya boy
you said you needed sometime,but you'll
be back one day
so i kept ya love on lock, lock
than one week tuns in to two
than two tuns into four i just
can't take no more
i don't know what's up wit
you, but i know what i gotta do

chours i gotta say bye,bye
i just can't keep livin a lie, lie
it's time to move forward
no more wasn't my time
sittin here why,why, it's
just so hard to do but i
gotta get over you

when i first met ya boy
you had nothing but the shoes
on ya feet,nowhere to eat,
so i let you come stay wit me
you did have a dime so i
helped you pull ya self together
then the sun stop shinein
soon came the stromy weather
oops i played the fool again

it's been a while since i
seen ya one week turns into
two than two turn into four
i can't it no more i don't whats
up wit you but i kown wit i gotta do

chours x2

i'm tired of sittin up cryin
while your out there bumpin and grindin
but there won't be no tears tonight
i'm tired of waitin,waitin
i just can't take it, take it
i gotta so bye.....

repeat chours 2x

ALEXE
01-09-2008, 05:33 AM
really dope drop
really feeling it
dope chorus, great bridge, great verses
very well displayed
keep it up
5/5

tjjohnson
01-10-2008, 12:46 AM
This is good. Keep it up.

Hostile
01-10-2008, 10:16 AM
This is good. Keep it up.

This is the shit I be talking about.

Latrice, Im beginning to wonder If you actually sing, or are u just a writer?

This was basic. And As stated I would have to hear it to give any feedback, bcuz the words are simple as HELL. Well...Sorry to say but until you drop some audio for my ass I won't be peeping you anymore.

MAW
01-10-2008, 12:49 PM
This is the shit I be talking about.

Latrice, Im beginning to wonder If you actually sing, or are u just a writer?

This was basic. And As stated I would have to hear it to give any feedback, bcuz the words are simple as HELL. Well...Sorry to say but until you drop some audio for my ass I won't be peeping you anymore.

pure trueness

Nickolai
01-10-2008, 12:58 PM
Read like N*Sync