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Hostile
08-07-2007, 10:51 AM
[AMOK]
put you in a KOMA easy as reversing my name
kid you better off reharsing the game
you need a head start. You ain't that smart
'A' imagine you paper mache and tear your legs apart
I see you don't get the point like Bart, or his haircut
Funeral ya not visible cuz ya casket shut
When you see me, ask for bucks, like I got cashflow
But that ain't something everybody got,like assholes
I blast foes, PSYCHE!!!
I'm not like those dudes on TV that be lying on the MIC
I cause lyrical tragedy, got press mad at me
I ain't a God, no blasphemy, wit ya travesties
Bet you gon have me on ya blackberry, RHAPSODY
Pretending you the real, thinkin you can rap wit me
In ya bed room thinkin you can act like me
Just think TRIUMPH when you ask for me. BITCH!

[Liable]
I'm not the regular real deal, just wait til you feel steel
I walk around, broad sword, yellow suit. lookin like I bill killed
Stop playing games, you just childish
Mess around and have ya parts trapped on separate Islands
Thinkin you can see me, detach your eyelids
Tear out your tongue, show you the real moment of silence
Just let it happen and close your eyes kid
You don't want to grow up the way that I did

[Loko]
I'll fck around and make bread in ya face
Cops catch me on the wrong shit, got me on a federal case
And ain't no tellin what I said to ya mate
So when it all comes down, you better tell me that she said it was great
The head was sick and I'm comin to her when I get out
She like to spit, and she love it when my dicks in her mouth
Don't worry bout a thang man you know that bitch doesn't pout
Just come and see me when you get to the south

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

[Hostile]
They call me H for one reason, leave ya bleedin
Spit heat all day, no matter what the season
These dudes ain't hard, The like Tinactin
Only 'tough actin' when they front about they blastin
Only one action, I take it, then I think I'll wear ya face
After I scrape it off with a rusty end of a rake
Stop watchin, ya time's up! How much longer it take?
If I don't kill you, I'll only make you stronger ya fake!
And If livin life is ya job, this is the last time you clockin
You'll get popped in the trunk locked that is...after I drop you
Then I'll make you kill yaself, and I won't try to stop you
Name one rhyme sayer iller than me...NOT YOU
Triumph, the word that describes Me takin over
You say my takeover's been fcked like I raped HOVA?
I'll put a gap in ya smile and leave ya Moanin
Never again try and put ya hate on me

[Inimical]
I'm a QUACK I'll have you piss in a cup and sip it, delicious
I don't think you understand how serious this shit is
I spit heat and he ain't fit to inhabit the same kitchen as me
High temp smother the fool, leave him bitchin and gasping
Don't mess with my ma, the people I've seen
I'll cut you so quick, I'll make sure the gashes are clean
I spit snickers when I rhyme, the bars are so sweet
Diabetic coma from messing with me, permanent sleep

[N-Mity]
Met my nemesis the other day, and her brother
Brought back memories of when I had her screamin under cover
Sought out jealousy speakin on mans that I ain't met yet
So I put hole in her heart, Made sure that she met death
Seen my new gal, she ain't too bright tho, just right for me
Better than those dime pieces that he claimin he might've seen
Think we'll hook up later on, ya chick on my nuts
And look around seekin out wins or maybe triumphs

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

[Shadow]
Okay you came this far to get beat out and it don't make sense
Probs because I left you with no more brain cells to focus with
I see you got alot of faith, with disease, hopin you sick
I'm Iller than the germs infesting the metal stick I'm poking you with
Better than me, well you know you ain't My kids go downtown
I make deposits on ya chick so she's my sperm bank
I speak grotesque leave kids with no necks
And like im counterfeiting ya nikes man, I leave em wit no checks
No cashflow coming in, no way to recieve funds
I started out heavenly when I spoke, like my moms concieved nuns
Open up hell when I breathe, yall fingering wordplay
TEXT is the only way you come hard, like cybersex on ya birthday
I'm the kid from the darkness, the one whose style you following
The one up top, if I spit in your mouth I bet you'd swallow it
Just so you could have a little bit of me inside of you
And laying ya dead body down ain't the only way I'll lie to you

[Severe]
I think It's crazy that I came here lookin for claims to fame
And got viler than a pedophile rapin the gurls i slayed
All of the games I played, You know the silent treatment
And I think back and our relationship didn't mean shit
I'm triumphant in the end, bitch you didn't win
And I'll win more if I never see your face ever again
Ties are severed my friend So just leave me alone
And I'll be back when I return all of the trash that you owned
I hate looking at your face now, I wanna rip you apart
I heard you got a glass jaw, I'll break you to shards
That smile that I glare at, It's not a glare of envy
It's a glare of despair, I know you miss me
The end was long ago and you can't seem to release
But keep holdin on and you'll be incomplete. Missin some teeth
The hostility between us is severe, You feel the enmity?
The whole world gonna be glad when I tell em that you're deceased

Eyebagz
08-07-2007, 06:19 PM
[AMOK]
put you in a KOMA easy as reversing my name
kid you better off reharsing the game

nice opener

you need a head start. You ain't that smart
'A' imagine you paper mache and tear your legs apart
I see you don't get the point like Bart, or his haircut
Funeral ya not visible cuz ya casket shut

dope

When you see me, ask for bucks, like I got cashflow
But that ain't something everybody got,like assholes

played line said million times

I blast foes, PSYCHE!!!
I'm not like those dudes on TV that be lying on the MIC
I cause lyrical tragedy, got press mad at me
I ain't a God, no blasphemy, wit ya travesties
Bet you gon have me on ya blackberry, RHAPSODY
Pretending you the real, thinkin you can rap wit me

flows dope here but no lines are like wow if get me

In ya bed room thinkin you can act like me
Just think TRIUMPH when you ask for me. BITCH!

[Liable]
I'm not the regular real deal, just wait til you feel steel
I walk around, broad sword, yellow suit. lookin like I bill killed
Stop playing games, you just childish
Mess around and have ya parts trapped on separate Islands

sick last line flows dope real nice man

Thinkin you can see me, detach your eyelids
Tear out your tongue, show you the real moment of silence
Just let it happen and close your eyes kid
You don't want to grow up the way that I did

dope verse

[Loko]
I'll fck around and make bread in ya face
Cops catch me on the wrong shit, got me on a federal case
And ain't no tellin what I said to ya mate
So when it all comes down, you better tell me that she said it was great

flows alright

The head was sick and I'm comin to her when I get out
She like to spit, and she love it when my dicks in her mouth
Don't worry bout a thang man you know that bitch doesn't pout
Just come and see me when you get to the south

alright verse

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

dope chorus
[Hostile]
They call me H for one reason, leave ya bleedin
Spit heat all day, no matter what the season
These dudes ain't hard, The like Tinactin
Only 'tough actin' when they front about they blastin

dont know what tinactin is but i guess tough action had something to do with it still dope ven though i dont get it

Only one action, I take it, then I think I'll wear ya face
After I scrape it off with a rusty end of a rake
Stop watchin, ya time's up! How much longer it take?
If I don't kill you, I'll only make you stronger ya fake!
And If livin life is ya job, this is the last time you clockin
You'll get popped in the trunk locked that is...after I drop you

flows sick

Then I'll make you kill yaself, and I won't try to stop you
Name one rhyme sayer iller than me...NOT YOU
Triumph, the word that describes Me takin over
You say my takeover's been fcked like I raped HOVA?

nice

I'll put a gap in ya smile and leave ya Moanin
Never again try and put ya hate on me

[Inimical]
I'm a QUACK I'll have you piss in a cup and sip it, delicious
I don't think you understand how serious this shit is
I spit heat and he ain't fit to inhabit the same kitchen as me
High temp smother the fool, leave him bitchin and gasping

opener was classic

Don't mess with my ma, the people I've seen
I'll cut you so quick, I'll make sure the gashes are clean
I spit snickers when I rhyme, the bars are so sweet
Diabetic coma from messing with me, permanent sleep

nice

[N-Mity]
Met my nemesis the other day, and her brother
Brought back memories of when I had her screamin under cover
Sought out jealousy speakin on mans that I ain't met yet
So I put hole in her heart, Made sure that she met death

nice

Seen my new gal, she ain't too bright tho, just right for me
Better than those dime pieces that he claimin he might've seen
Think we'll hook up later on, ya chick on my nuts
And look around seekin out wins or maybe triumphs

alright

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

[Shadow]
Okay you came this far to get beat out and it don't make sense
Probs because I left you with no more brain cells to focus with
I see you got alot of faith, with disease, hopin you sick
I'm Iller than the germs infesting the metal stick I'm poking you with

nice section

Better than me, well you know you ain't My kids go downtown
I make deposits on ya chick so she's my sperm bank

sick line

I speak grotesque leave kids with no necks
And like im counterfeiting ya nikes man, I leave em wit no checks

sick again

No cashflow coming in, no way to recieve funds
I started out heavenly when I spoke, like my moms concieved nuns

again sick

Open up hell when I breathe, yall fingering wordplay
TEXT is the only way you come hard, like cybersex on ya birthday

sick again

I'm the kid from the darkness, the one whose style you following
The one up top, if I spit in your mouth I bet you'd swallow it
Just so you could have a little bit of me inside of you
And laying ya dead body down ain't the only way I'll lie to you

alright

[Severe]
I think It's crazy that I came here lookin for claims to fame
And got viler than a pedophile rapin the gurls i slayed

dopeness

All of the games I played, You know the silent treatment
And I think back and our relationship didn't mean shit
I'm triumphant in the end, bitch you didn't win
And I'll win more if I never see your face ever again

nice

Ties are severed my friend So just leave me alone
And I'll be back when I return all of the trash that you owned
I hate looking at your face now, I wanna rip you apart
I heard you got a glass jaw, I'll break you to shards

dope

That smile that I glare at, It's not a glare of envy
It's a glare of despair, I know you miss me
The end was long ago and you can't seem to release
But keep holdin on and you'll be incomplete. Missin some teeth
The hostility between us is severe, You feel the enmity?

Nice

The whole world gonna be glad when I tell em that you're deceased

had a dope ending real nice song some really really dope bits some bits jus alright flow was sick throughout man like all the different personalitys shit was dope

Hostile
08-08-2007, 12:09 PM
Thanks for reading it. I didn't think anybody would check it because it was soo long, and alot of it was keystyled.

I don't think of them as personalities though. The majority of them are just screen names from other sites and stuff that I thought I'd make a song with. I don't have like 2 sides anymore...after TI did it the whole idea became lame.

Montana
08-08-2007, 03:57 PM
[AMOK]
put you in a KOMA easy as reversing my name
kid you better off reharsing the game

sikk and simple

you need a head start. You ain't that smart
'A' imagine you paper mache and tear your legs apart

Lol

I see you don't get the point like Bart, or his haircut
Funeral ya not visible cuz ya casket shut

ok

When you see me, ask for bucks, like I got cashflow
But that ain't something everybody got,like assholes

lame

I blast foes, PSYCHE!!!
I'm not like those dudes on TV that be lying on the MIC
I cause lyrical tragedy, got press mad at me
I ain't a God, no blasphemy, wit ya travesties

great flow pal

Bet you gon have me on ya blackberry, RHAPSODY
Pretending you the real, thinkin you can rap wit me
In ya bed room thinkin you can act like me
Just think TRIUMPH when you ask for me. BITCH!

haha sikkizle flow still ill

[Liable]
I'm not the regular real deal, just wait til you feel steel
I walk around, broad sword, yellow suit. lookin like I bill killed
Stop playing games, you just childish
Mess around and have ya parts trapped on separate Islands

lol nice

Thinkin you can see me, detach your eyelids
Tear out your tongue, show you the real moment of silence
Just let it happen and close your eyes kid
You don't want to grow up the way that I did

flowz gd soundz like em

[Loko]
I'll fck around and make bread in ya face
Cops catch me on the wrong shit, got me on a federal case

bit shyt

And ain't no tellin what I said to ya mate
So when it all comes down, you better tell me that she said it was great

haha

The head was sick and I'm comin to her when I get out
She like to spit, and she love it when my dicks in her mouth
Don't worry bout a thang man you know that bitch doesn't pout
Just come and see me when you get to the south

bit shyt but flows sikk

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

hook iz dope pal

[Hostile]
They call me H for one reason, leave ya bleedin
Spit heat all day, no matter what the season
These dudes ain't hard, The like Tinactin
Only 'tough actin' when they front about they blastin

great 2 bars

Only one action, I take it, then I think I'll wear ya face
After I scrape it off with a rusty end of a rake
Stop watchin, ya time's up! How much longer it take?
If I don't kill you, I'll only make you stronger ya fake!

Lol crack keeps flowin ill

And If livin life is ya job, this is the last time you clockin
You'll get popped in the trunk locked that is...after I drop you
Then I'll make you kill yaself, and I won't try to stop you
Name one rhyme sayer iller than me...NOT YOU

ok

Triumph, the word that describes Me takin over
You say my takeover's been fcked like I raped HOVA?
I'll put a gap in ya smile and leave ya Moanin
Never again try and put ya hate on me

end line ruined it

[Inimical]
I'm a QUACK I'll have you piss in a cup and sip it, delicious
I don't think you understand how serious this shit is
I spit heat and he ain't fit to inhabit the same kitchen as me
High temp smother the fool, leave him bitchin and gasping
Don't mess with my ma, the people I've seen
I'll cut you so quick, I'll make sure the gashes are clean
I spit snickers when I rhyme, the bars are so sweet
Diabetic coma from messing with me, permanent sleep

top flow some nice lines but all lines ended rhyming but 1
overall the verse wuz very good

[N-Mity]
Met my nemesis the other day, and her brother
Brought back memories of when I had her screamin under cover
Sought out jealousy speakin on mans that I ain't met yet
So I put hole in her heart, Made sure that she met death
Seen my new gal, she ain't too bright tho, just right for me
Better than those dime pieces that he claimin he might've seen
Think we'll hook up later on, ya chick on my nuts
And look around seekin out wins or maybe triumphs

haha real sikk favorite bit so far

[Hook - Seekr]
They call this the Triumph, and if you feel it put ya guns up!
PSYCHE!!! put that shit down lookin like a dumb fuck
Don't need a gat to rap sick, fuck this rap shit
You all fake, now show me where ya mask is. Trick!

[Shadow]
Okay you came this far to get beat out and it don't make sense
Probs because I left you with no more brain cells to focus with
I see you got alot of faith, with disease, hopin you sick
I'm Iller than the germs infesting the metal stick I'm poking you with
Better than me, well you know you ain't My kids go downtown
I make deposits on ya chick so she's my sperm bank
I speak grotesque leave kids with no necks
And like im counterfeiting ya nikes man, I leave em wit no checks
No cashflow coming in, no way to recieve funds
I started out heavenly when I spoke, like my moms concieved nuns
Open up hell when I breathe, yall fingering wordplay
TEXT is the only way you come hard, like cybersex on ya birthday
I'm the kid from the darkness, the one whose style you following
The one up top, if I spit in your mouth I bet you'd swallow it
Just so you could have a little bit of me inside of you
And laying ya dead body down ain't the only way I'll lie to you

decent verse some good wordplay. cybersex shyt iz played

[Severe]
I think It's crazy that I came here lookin for claims to fame
And got viler than a pedophile rapin the gurls i slayed
All of the games I played, You know the silent treatment
And I think back and our relationship didn't mean shit
I'm triumphant in the end, bitch you didn't win
And I'll win more if I never see your face ever again
Ties are severed my friend So just leave me alone
And I'll be back when I return all of the trash that you owned
I hate looking at your face now, I wanna rip you apart
I heard you got a glass jaw, I'll break you to shards
That smile that I glare at, It's not a glare of envy
It's a glare of despair, I know you miss me
The end was long ago and you can't seem to release
But keep holdin on and you'll be incomplete. Missin some teeth
The hostility between us is severe, You feel the enmity?
The whole world gonna be glad when I tell em that you're deceased

dope verse opened very well pal, flow on lock agen




Sikkizle Idea Very Orginal Man Didnt Know U Had All These Other Characters.
I Liked Alot Of It But The Bits I Thought Wer Poor Stil Had Gd Flow.

Severe And N-Mity Wer My Favorite Characters

When U Hav Time Vote In My Battle Wit State.

$tate
08-09-2007, 11:30 AM
Dope as hell, lol i was thinking who the fuck was these people.
Flow was good, everything was on point except i didnt like the hook.
Nice wordplay aswell.

8.5/10

MAW
08-16-2007, 12:42 PM
Oh yeah...crazy shit with all the people...i dunno why but somehow i knew from the beginning all these guys are you....well like i said sick concept and sick execution....flow was pretty dope...wordplays were good....all in all cool shit....keep it up Hostile!

Hostile
08-16-2007, 06:13 PM
Thanks for feedback.