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Hostile
07-01-2007, 09:22 PM
Cast
Hostile
Liable


[Hostile]
Cot damn, they raped her, Took her virginity
Mad me so mad, I sit back and wish it was me
She was more than the world to me, my best friend
And if it wasn't for the fams she would be my next of kin

[Liable](Hostile)
You know you wanna fuck your cousin, you on some other shit
To where if anybody found out, you'd kill the witnesses
And you'd probably kill that bitch, that way she couldn't snitch
And if the shit got out, you'd proably slit her wrists
To the tendon and she couldn't even finish her fish
As she lied beside the dinner table drowning in piss
You misfit, this don't fit together it's puzzling
The delimma you're face with, you befuddled, need a muzzle
it's criminal the things that go thru your mind
You should be confined you asshole, for the rest of all time
They should lock you up and throw away the key
I know how you think, because you are me
And any harm you see due to disarming
One man army with an ill disposition swarming
Plaguing your head, raking your brain instead
Just take the raping in vain and listen to what I said

[Hostile]
No you trick That's nasty as hell and it's not the case at all
I'm just saying that I wish I would have taken the fall
Why not me instead of her? I wish it wouldn't have happened

[Liable]
So what, I guess now you gon get the gat and start clappin?
You're sick H I know you feel an attraction
No you're a moron, Talking nonsense for your own satisfaction
I can see it in your eyes everytime she comes around
You get happy all of a sudden, too nervous to make a sound
Then she says 'hey' and I can see the hearts floatin in air
Too bad she got fucked before you could, oh my the despair
You didn't even know you were family until I told you
You're too weak H, You shouldn't let your emotions control you
All those wet dreams are passed, so foreward I'll send ya
Now you should sit back and think about this Moral Delimma

$tate
07-02-2007, 03:25 AM
Oh $hit, this joint is pass fire, Liable's first 10 lines set the tone but couldnt back it up later on. Hostile with only 8 lines, isnt it your joint?

9.2/10

FranchizeTheKid
07-02-2007, 03:38 AM
Liable Is His Other Personality

This Shit Is Fire

$tate
07-02-2007, 03:48 AM
Oh yeah I remember that shit, "Hostile AKA Liable".

Dope.

BlackStar
07-02-2007, 01:13 PM
Cast
Hostile
Liable


[Hostile]
Cot damn, they raped her, Took her virginity
Mad me so mad, I sit back and wish it was me
She was more than the world to me, my best friend
And if it wasn't for the fams she would be my next of kin
strong beginning!

[Liable](Hostile)
You know you wanna fuck your cousin, you on some other shit
To where if anybody found out, you'd kill the witnesses
And you'd probably kill that bitch, that way she couldn't snitch
uhhh...the evil site lol
And if the shit got out, you'd proably slit her wrists
To the tendon and she couldn't even finish her fish
her fish? sounds like a filler here
As she lied beside the dinner table drowning in piss
You misfit, this don't fit together it's puzzling
first line here is sick! good imagery
The delimma you're face with, you befuddled, need a muzzle
it's criminal the things that go thru your mind
yea...a lil bit!
You should be confined you asshole, for the rest of all time
They should lock you up and throw away the key
word!
I know how you think, because you are me
SICK LINE!!!
And any harm you see due to disarming
One man army with an ill disposition swarming
Plaguing your head, raking your brain instead
could help!
Just take the raping in vain and listen to what I said

[Hostile]
No you trick That's nasty as hell and it's not the case at all
I'm just saying that I wish I would have taken the fall
Why not me instead of her? I wish it wouldn't have happened
the good site!

[Liable]
So what, I guess now you gon get the gat and start clappin?
You're sick H I know you feel an attraction
No you're a moron, Talking nonsense for your own satisfaction
the discussion could be...more complex
I can see it in your eyes everytime she comes around
You get happy all of a sudden, too nervous to make a sound
Then she says 'hey' and I can see the hearts floatin in air
nice meta
Too bad she got fucked before you could, oh my the despair
sick line! Looks like Liable is gleeful
You didn't even know you were family until I told you
again sick line! I like the way how Liable controls you
You're too weak H, You shouldn't let your emotions control you
All those wet dreams are passed, so foreward I'll send ya
Now you should sit back and think about this Moral Delimma
strong and good ending here!

A very nice track! I like the way both parts act. Liable looks stronger and dominates.
The story itself looks like the next part of the story with "your" cousin. The imagery is pretty good in here and it has a nice flow.

Kepp up the work!

Hostile
07-02-2007, 01:45 PM
A very nice track! I like the way both parts act. Liable looks stronger and dominates.
The story itself looks like the next part of the story with "your" cousin. The imagery is pretty good in here and it has a nice flow.

Kepp up the work!

It went like this...I wrote this one first, and it leave alot unsaid, so I did the one about meeting my cousin as a 'prequel' to this one so they both go together.

Thnx for the feed!

Montana
07-02-2007, 02:35 PM
Diz Iz Sikk Great Idea And Came Off Well. U Lack Wordplay But Lotz Of Wordplay Wouldnt Match The Song, Flow Iz Ill. Simple But Dope 8.3/10

Hostile
07-02-2007, 02:42 PM
Diz Iz Sikk Great Idea And Came Off Well. U Lack Wordplay But Lotz Of Wordplay Wouldnt Match The Song, Flow Iz Ill. Simple But Dope 8.3/10

Yeah wordplay wasn't necessary for this..I just wanted to get the descriptive torture and gore across, and the constant struggle between Love & Hate, Good & Evil, Moral Vs Immoral, ect.