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Hostile
06-28-2007, 10:48 PM
I'm chillin in Nap-town wit the fams,discussin decor
on the walls, that's when we hear a knock at the door
Some chick wit her kids, I never seen this gal before
Grandmama didn't like em, she called the youngest a whore
I'm peepin, she pretty decent, but she ain't payin attention
She caught up in her novel, grammy decided to mention
That she was close to my age and we should start chattin it up
But still givin me no mind, snooty gal, up she was stuck
Or maybe it was a good book, so I asked her about it
And when she got started she never ended, or closed her mouth
on and on about some romance garbage I wasn't into
A fast escape from this prison I quickly pursued
My cousin is chillin on the sofa watchin the tube
I asked her a question and a conversation ensued
Thank goodness I got away from motormouth over there
But I guess she didn't get the picture and entered cousins affairs
Talk Talk Talk, I got to know what Kinda person she was
Just from listening to her speak, total B-S to discuss
Never spoke to her again other than 'bye' when she was leaving
Had a bad encounter with her, still couldn't believe it.

Joined the organization, listenin during orientation
Peep a skirt beside me with a familiar facial
Couldn't quite put my finger on who it was but I knew
That I had seen her before, didn't know what to do
So I asked, she had no idea who I was, I felt bad
It was a shot to my confidence, behind the vest I had
Not kevlar, I'm talkin the feelings encased around me
Not the usual hate surrounding me
SO I was like 'fck it' cut the thoughts with the knife
Of not caring, Then again she entered my life
No Idea how we hooked up, but it wasn't conventional
At a point now where I'd bother to mention
that It was probably on my how we started talking
Probably me gawking at her physical, wide jawwed
Awoken in awe.
Then it hit me, I saw the chick up in Nap-Town
She was wit the fams so I guess I'll ask around
Got the info I needed from pops, nobody she wasn't...
What a shock, The girl ended up my cousin...

-my grandmama always told me 'you gotta know who ya peoples is so you wont end up marrying ya cousin.' Now I see what she meant.

LOC
06-28-2007, 11:17 PM
hahahahahaha, um yea it was all good, the flow was nice...i take it this was takin place at school/uni mayb in a liabary...why wuld ur grandma be there tho? neway...it was ok funny endin' know alot of cats that's happened too. haha.

Hostile
06-29-2007, 12:42 PM
I knew one person it's happened to lmao! Nah It's at my aunt's house...I had that in there at first but couldn't find a rhyme that would flow good.

The second part was during orientation for a non-profit organization to be on one of their councils. Only part that wasn't true was that I was feeling her.

Eyebagz
06-29-2007, 02:44 PM
lol story was sick. loved it was original aswell flow was tight through the whole thing turning out to be a nice lp

Hostile
06-29-2007, 02:57 PM
lol story was sick. loved it was original aswell flow was tight through the whole thing turning out to be a nice lp

Thanks for checkin it out.

BlackStar
06-29-2007, 05:20 PM
I'm chillin in Nap-town wit the fams,discussin decor
on the walls, that's when we hear a knock at the door
lol...great opener.....(pause)....NOT!
Some chick wit her kids, I never seen this gal before
Grandmama didn't like em, she called the youngest a wh
whore?
I'm peepin, she pretty decent, but she ain't payin attention
She caught up in her novel, grammy decided to mention
That she was close to my age and we should start chattin it up
cool...
But still givin me no mind, snooty gal, up she was stuck
Or maybe it was a good book, so I asked her about it
yepp...good start
And when she got started she never ended, or closed her mouth
lol
on and on about some romance garbage I wasn't into
LMFAO
A fast escape from this prison I quickly pursued
My cousin is chillin on the sofa watchin the tube
I asked her a question and a conversation ensued
good story telling by the way...
Thank goodness I got away from motormouth over there
motormouth...lol
But I guess she didn't get the picture and entered cousins affairs
Talk Talk Talk, I got to know what Kinda person she was
Just from listening to her speak, total B-S to discuss
Never spoke to her again other than 'bye' when she was leaving
Had a bad encounter with her, still couldn't believe it.
great verse! lol...

Joined the organization, listenin during orientation
Peep a skirt beside me with a familiar facial
Couldn't quite put my finger on who it was but I knew
That I had seen her before, didn't know what to do
mhhh....
So I asked, she had no idea who I was, I felt bad
doh!
It was a shot to my confidence, behind the vest I had
Not kevlar, I'm talkin the feelings encased around me
dope wordplay here! shot behind the vest and a bulletproof vest is made out of kevlar...
Not the usual hate surrounding me
SO I was like 'fck it' cut the thoughts with the knife
ok meta
Of not caring, Then again she entered my life
No Idea how we hooked up, but it wasn't conventional
At a point now where I'd bother to mention
that It was probably on my how we started talking
Probably me gawking at her physical, wide jawwed
Awoken in awe.
Then it hit me, I saw the chick up in Nap-Town
She was wit the fams so I guess I'll ask around
Got the info I needed from pops, nobody she wasn't...
What a shock, The girl ended up my cousin...
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!! OWNED!!!!!

-my grandmama always told me 'you gotta know who ya peoples is so you wont end up marrying ya cousin.' Now I see what she meant.
word is bond grandama!

lol...very nice drop! nothing deep just telling a story...that's cool 'cause it was a funny story. The storytelling in the first verse was better than in the 2nd.
Cool track, keep it up!

Hostile
06-29-2007, 05:37 PM
Oh yeah that is supposed to say whore thnx for pointing that out.

*Goes back and edits*

Man the murder collab isnt gonna be released until I'm 60 huh?

BlackStar
06-29-2007, 05:42 PM
Oh yeah that is supposed to say whore thnx for pointing that out.

*Goes back and edits*

Man the murder collab isnt gonna be released until I'm 60 huh?

Chopz has some personal stuff to do...which I just can support. But without him it won't be complete :unsure:

use it as a bonus track for your LP!

Hostile
06-29-2007, 09:44 PM
Nah It's your track. I'm good.

Montana
06-30-2007, 03:02 PM
Very Gd Drop Great Story Telling And Nice Twist U Seem Better At This Than Punchline Rapping. Entertaining Read Nice One Man.

Hostile
06-30-2007, 03:25 PM
lol Yeah I am 1000x better at this than punchline rapping. I hate punchline rapping. That's why I don't battle.

Summer_heat
06-30-2007, 07:35 PM
feelin the story, altho i had kinda guessed shed turn out to be ur cuz after u guys met at a familly home, wud b weird a stranger walkin in!
at start rhymin caused flow to b a lil akward, but only a lil.
besides that it got on track n it flowed good, but that werent what it was all bout! it was the story, n u worked the imagery n all that jus right. nice one.

Hostile
06-30-2007, 09:27 PM
feelin the story, altho i had kinda guessed shed turn out to be ur cuz after u guys met at a familly home, wud b weird a stranger walkin in!
at start rhymin caused flow to b a lil akward, but only a lil.
besides that it got on track n it flowed good, but that werent what it was all bout! it was the story, n u worked the imagery n all that jus right. nice one.

Thanks. I've never gotten feedback like that from you I don't believe. Thanks again.

Montana
06-30-2007, 09:28 PM
feed me man lol^^^^^

Hostile
06-30-2007, 09:29 PM
feed me man lol^^^^^

Oh my bad, I got yours and lil sams drops confused because yours has his name in the title. I'm on it.

BraNd
06-30-2007, 10:03 PM
Of not caring, Then again she entered my life
No Idea how we hooked up, but it wasn't conventional
At a point now where I'd bother to mention
that It was probably on my how we started talking
Probably me gawking at her physical, wide jawwed
Awoken in awe.
Then it hit me, I saw the chick up in Nap-Town
She was wit the fams so I guess I'll ask around
Got the info I needed from pops, nobody she wasn't...
What a shock, The girl ended up my cousin...


wow.....thats crazy.....i was kinda trippin off this flow cuz whil i read it, i try and spit it......thats nutts.....flow on it can be crazy....
i was diggin into it.....

props

$tate
07-01-2007, 04:29 AM
Good joint, story was well put out, U got another one coming out soon perhaps? lol

8.4/10

Hostile
07-01-2007, 07:13 AM
Thanks for checkin it out branded...

State, yea I got 2 more comin out but they aren't stories.

BlackStar
07-01-2007, 07:50 AM
Thanks for checkin it out branded...

State, yea I got 2 more comin out but they aren't stories.

and a bonus track with a big story!

$tate
07-01-2007, 08:28 AM
Hostile, What about the one with the girl? Or doesnt it make the cut.

Hostile
07-01-2007, 10:14 AM
I'm still waiting on Eyebagz and Nickolai hasn't replied to me yet.

$tate
07-01-2007, 11:08 AM
Why the fuck are they taking so long? Was it not only 8 lines...
Its whateva

Hostile
07-01-2007, 08:40 PM
Eyebagz is busy. Iono what Nick is doing...I don't even know if he's going to do it.