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Hostile
06-26-2007, 04:18 PM
My lip bled, I tasted the blood and felt at ease
Now I'm ready to bring any of your boys to knees
I see him sittin there beggin me please, want me to stop
Pull a 9millimeter out to his temple and POP
They gave me some generic brand chap stick
What a way to make me mad, I slap stick em
I ain't talkin comedy. Sit still and don't bother me
When I get angered I go hulk, change occurs bodily

Foulness flows through my veins, terror reigns
Invincible to your thoughts, my brain never slain
An Ill Transition, explicit content never mentioned
Bad disposition, mess around and end up missing
My imagination runs wild, I probably won't kill
For real but on the other hand, I think that I will
I'll try to limit it to sprayin and stompin roaches
My lip's bleeding again, My wrath approaches

Clasik
06-26-2007, 06:55 PM
Nice..interlude.. ill transistion for sure.. hey i got this idead for a song.. which i think me an u can record... i can give u a sample of it if u want to get on... holla at me man...

Hostile
06-26-2007, 09:22 PM
What's up? Talk to me.

Clasik
06-26-2007, 11:38 PM
i sent u a pm. ...

koncret
06-27-2007, 12:01 AM
What a way to make me mad, I slap stick em
I ain't talkin comedy. Sit still and don't bother me
When I get angered I go hulk, change occurs bodily

HOT segement flow on point and the slap stick word play was nice

overal a decent 2 versesthe flow was on threw out both wasnt Spectacular but not many bad things i can say

Hostile
06-27-2007, 03:11 PM
Thanks for the feed.

JaTahChild01
07-02-2007, 01:43 AM
My lip bled, I tasted the blood and felt at ease
Now I'm ready to bring any of your boys to knees
^first line was really nice when you stop and think about it, second line wasnt just ok

I see him sittin there beggin me please, want me to stop
Pull a 9millimeter out to his temple and POP
^alittle simplistic but gets the point across

They gave me some generic brand chap stick
What a way to make me mad, I slap stick em
^mehh

I ain't talkin comedy. Sit still and don't bother me
When I get angered I go hulk, change occurs bodily
^very nice flow here


Foulness flows through my veins, terror reigns
Invincible to your thoughts, my brain never slain
^very nice

An Ill Transition, explicit content never mentioned
Bad disposition, mess around and end up missing
^flow is a bit off, i see what u going for though

My imagination runs wild, I probably won't kill
For real but on the other hand, I think that I will
^seems simple at first gl;ance but its interesting to think about because we prolly all feel that way, that we could and could not kill

I'll try to limit it to sprayin and stompin roaches
My lip's bleeding again, My wrath approaches
^I really like how u tied the first line back into the end that was def nice.