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Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:41 PM
It's no fun being hit on the lip by a prossy
that fingered a chick with gonnoreaha on her clit
I see you spazzing out, bout passed drought
Dry jokes, when the worst happenings are comin out my mouth
Better pay up next time, spit ya best rhymes
Get that pay check, She makin the rest mine
I ain't no pimp, but I'll travel cross state with ya guts
Ain't that a trip? Ya lunch in my trunk? Get It?
You got a sore throat, you feelin the symptoms
No innards..Ya appetite getin limp huh?
Waves crashin on hammer smashin ya cranium
That s-curl is cute, but it ain't savin ya
Takin a bat to the Mecca, What a pilgrimage
The brand stitchin on ya shirt takin hits, never missed
Bet Strauss probly hate me by now
Goons tearin pants off ya chick while they rapin that cow
Old McDonald ya alias, catch you on the farm
Burried in the cornfield, no bodily harm
The worms savior you are now, makin em fat
You the feast for em. Family ain't takin you back
You're the disgrace, like you downin god's favor
Worms havin a good time, savor ya 5 flavors
You the life saver,need one, drown in my flows
Electrify ya enemies. I power your foes.
Tear ya funny bone out the socket. Hilarious
All ya loud screams sure ain't scaring us
Bringin tears to ya eyes. You laughin too hard
Time for the judgement. Betcha wish you knew god
I'm in the Jury with my TPX ready. No machette
Italian Job, turn ya body to spaghetti
What a hit, cuz you was thinkin with your dick
Brain in the wrong head, labotomized ya trick.

If you don't understand some....Ask lol.

BlackStar
06-25-2007, 12:09 PM
ok man, I'll try to get them


It's no fun being hit on the lip by a prossy
that fingered a chick with gonnoreaha on her clit
well...it was funny but couldn't find wordplays here...check the speeling of the venereal diseases again...
I see you spazzing out, bout passed drought
Dry jokes, when the worst happenings are comin out my mouth
well...drought and dry are word that describe a lack of water...
Better pay up next time, spit ya best rhymes
Get that pay check, She makin the rest mine
she making the rest mine? I can imagine a wordplay with mine but it would end horrible for me...
I ain't no pimp, but I'll travel cross state with ya guts
Ain't that a trip? Ya lunch in my trunk? Get It?
lol...the food of "him" is in his guts...so his lunch is in your trunk...
You got a sore throat, you feelin the symptoms
No innards..Ya appetite getin limp huh?
lol, good one
Waves crashin on hammer smashin ya cranium
That s-curl is cute, but it ain't savin ya
natural waves in the hairs, s-curl make it more prominent or such shit...just read it on wikipedia...mhhhh...maybe it destroys the natural waves...so there is a wordplay with waves crashing on hammer smashing...
Takin a bat to the Mecca, What a pilgrimage
The brand stitchin on ya shirt takin hits, never missed
Bet Strauss probly hate me by now
which strauss? There are too many people with this name
Goons tearin pants off ya chick while they rapin that cow
Old McDonald ya alias, catch you on the farm
lol...chick...cow...yea nice farm
Burried in the cornfield, no bodily harm
The worms savior you are now, makin em fat
lol...good line here...
You the feast for em. Family ain't takin you back
You're the disgrace, like you downin god's favor
Worms havin a good time, savor ya 5 flavors
nice party...but can't see any wordplays
You the life saver,need one, drown in my flows
ha! nice lil punch
Electrify ya enemies. I power your foes.
good line
Tear ya funny bone out the socket. Hilarious
socket...can use as an electrical outlet or mounting
All ya loud screams sure ain't scaring us
lol naw...Scream is funny...good connection to the film
Bringin tears to ya eyes. You laughin too hard
Time for the judgement. Betcha wish you knew god
I'm in the Jury with my TPX ready. No machette
wordplay with "betcha"? "bet ya"/"bat ya"? this could explain the using of TPX in the next line
Italian Job, turn ya body to spaghetti
lol
What a hit, cuz you was thinkin with your dick
Brain in the wrong head, labotomized ya trick.
rofl...thinking with your dick, brain in the wrong "head"...pretty nice! what the hell does labotomizedmean?

If you don't understand some....Ask lol.

wow, all in all a nice verse...I couldn't find many wordplays but I think it's just me. I used wikipedia and 3 dictonaries (for the slang lol). Well...good job!

Sparx
06-25-2007, 09:03 PM
It's no fun being hit on the lip by a prossy
that fingered a chick with gonnoreaha on her clit
I see you spazzing out, bout passed drought
Dry jokes, when the worst happenings are comin out my mouth
nice
Better pay up next time, spit ya best rhymes
Get that pay check, She makin the rest mine
I ain't no pimp, but I'll travel cross state with ya guts
Ain't that a trip? Ya lunch in my trunk? Get It?
sick line, lunch in the trunk, creative H
You got a sore throat, you feelin the symptoms
No innards..Ya appetite getin limp huh?
Waves crashin on hammer smashin ya cranium
That s-curl is cute, but it ain't savin ya
Takin a bat to the Mecca, What a pilgrimage
The brand stitchin on ya shirt takin hits, never missed
again sick... Mecca Clothes n Mecca in the middle east
Bet Strauss probly hate me by now
Goons tearin pants off ya chick while they rapin that cow
Old McDonald ya alias, catch you on the farm
Burried in the cornfield, no bodily harm
lol tight
The worms savior you are now, makin em fat
You the feast for em. Family ain't takin you back
You're the disgrace, like you downin god's favor
Worms havin a good time, savor ya 5 flavors
You the life saver,need one, drown in my flows
Electrify ya enemies. I power your foes.
crazy flow H and the wordplay is still sick
Tear ya funny bone out the socket. Hilarious
All ya loud screams sure ain't scaring us
Bringin tears to ya eyes. You laughin too hard
Time for the judgement. Betcha wish you knew god
nice
I'm in the Jury with my TPX ready. No machette
Italian Job, turn ya body to spaghetti
What a hit, cuz you was thinkin with your dick
Brain in the wrong head, labotomized ya trick.
fuckin CRAZY closer
If you don't understand some....Ask lol.

great Drop H... keep 'em comin!:smokin:

Hostile
06-25-2007, 09:05 PM
I'll just point out the words that were played with.


It's no fun being hit on the lip by a prossy
that fingered a chick with gonnoreaha on her clit
'Prossy' is a prostitute. It's slang that I use..I don't know if anybody else in the world says that though lol.
I see you spazzing out, bout passed drought
Dry jokes, when the worst happenings are comin out my mouth
Better pay up next time, spit ya best rhymes
Get that pay check, She makin the rest mine
No real wordplay in these lines...other than 'dry jokes', and 'bout passed drought' meanin that the jokes are soo dry...they are beyond a drought.
I ain't no pimp, but I'll travel cross state with ya guts
Ain't that a trip? Ya lunch in my trunk? Get It?
'she makin the rest mine' refers to the 'get that pay check' and 'pay up next time' so if you pay the prostitute that hit you in the mouth, she'll give the rest of the money to me. But then the 'I ain't a pimp' comes in, but pimps do some pretty foul stuff...mostly beatin peoples asses. But I'll take out yur guts hypothetically lol. You got the 'lunch in my trunk' line though.
You got a sore throat, you feelin the symptoms
No innards..Ya appetite getin limp huh?
Sore throat is a symptom of gonorrhea. You got the appetite part because his guts are in my trunk.
Waves crashin on hammer smashin ya cranium
That s-curl is cute, but it ain't savin ya
You pretty much understood the 's-curl' and 'waves crashing' part.
Takin a bat to the Mecca, What a pilgrimage
The brand stitchin on ya shirt takin hits, never missed
'Mecca' is a clothing brand...so the 'brand stitching' is taking hits from my bat. And I'm sure you've heard of a Muslim 'pilgrimage to mecca?'
Bet Strauss probly hate me by now
Goons tearin pants off ya chick while they rapin that cow
Old McDonald ya alias, catch you on the farm
Burried in the cornfield, no bodily harm
I mean Levi Strauss...It's a clothing brand more famous for their blue jeans thus he hates us because they 'tear pants off ya chick'...his pants lol. And you got the farm lines.
The worms savior you are now, makin em fat
When you die you 'feed the worms'
You the feast for em. Family ain't takin you back
You're the disgrace, like you downin god's favor
'diss-grace' rather than disgrace. dissing grace could be 'downing god's favor in a sense. And families don't like disgraces. (Mine doesn't anyways)
Worms havin a good time, savor ya 5 flavors
You the life saver,need one, drown in my flows
'Life Savers' is a candy that comes in 5 flavors. ANd Life Savers are the same as 'Life preservers'
Electrify ya enemies. I power your foes.
'Electrify'...'power'...Pretty simple. 'enemies'...'foes'..more simple.
Tear ya funny bone out the socket. Hilarious
All ya loud screams sure ain't scaring us
Bringin tears to ya eyes. You laughin too hard
The screams are of pain because your arm is torn out of socket, and it's your funny bone so you're laughing and it's hilarious. When people laugh really hard it draws tears, and if my arm was torn off I'd probably cry..as would anybody.
Time for the judgement. Betcha wish you knew god
I'm in the Jury with my TPX ready. No machette
God judges people. Judges have Juries. And the TPX is a Louisville Slugger bat. Which goes all the way back to the 'brand stitching taking hits from my bat' line you saw earlier.
Italian Job, turn ya body to spaghetti
I think you got this one.
What a hit, cuz you was thinkin with your dick
Brain in the wrong head, labotomized ya trick.
You got the wrong head part, and 'Lobotomize' means to remove a section of the brain. It was used long ago to treat mental illnesses, and it obviously didn't work.

If you don't understand some....Ask lol.


There you go BlackStar and anyone else who read this and had no idea where the wordplay was.

BlackStar
06-26-2007, 04:38 AM
lol too many proper names for me!:D

Hostile
06-26-2007, 04:02 PM
lol That's how I doo...I use wordplay all the time and people don't notice it or it goes over their heads.

BlackStar
06-26-2007, 04:30 PM
lol That's how I doo...I use wordplay all the time and people don't notice it or it goes over their heads.

usually you write proper names with a capital letter at the beginning...that's why I don't get them all...a lot of members are writing every word with a capital letter at the beginning...you didn't use the correct writing of proper names always...live savor or s-curl are just examples...how should I get such things? :roll:

Hostile
06-26-2007, 04:45 PM
I always thought you just searched for what you didn't know. Some propper names are cap'd, but That's just how I type. I had actually planned on explaining the wordplay in this song anyways...It was just a display of how well I could use it to my advantage.

BlackStar
06-26-2007, 05:26 PM
I always thought you just searched for what you didn't know. Some propper names are cap'd, but That's just how I type. I had actually planned on explaining the wordplay in this song anyways...It was just a display of how well I could use it to my advantage.

yea...I checked s-curl and TPX...but life savor? come on...that doesn't look like a proper name lol...

Hostile
06-26-2007, 05:47 PM
That's what makes it so tight...You have to think about every word in the song.

BlackStar
06-26-2007, 06:22 PM
That's what makes it so tight...You have to think about every word in the song.

smart...I'm gonna write a random track and just say there are wordplays in it...I don't know where...but there def are lol...just think about every word j/k