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Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-24-2007, 03:37 PM
http://www.myspace.com/thaominousmakeshift

LOOK AT ME NOW.....Makeshift Feat. Lowkey -STRYK9-

Off MICROPHONE SHOGUN MIXTAPE

C.O.A

MakeShift On Verse 1, Verse 3 And Tha Hookz

Lowkey On Verse 2

VTZ on tha Beat

http://www.myspace.com/thaominousmakeshift

Feedback Appreciated

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-24-2007, 03:50 PM
Lyricz For those that need it To My Verse

LOWKEY VERSE 2

Watch me Thru Tha Scope hatin tha Voice Box in my Throat
Hatin tha fact that you can quote every fuk’n thing I Wrote
Look at me Now How I Live Neva Smiled as A Kid
Livin in hell now My Bid tryin to dispel what I did
But I cant fuk’n Escape it KNowin demonz stand Adjacent
See me leanin gotta be Patient always scheming when im Faded
Cigarello’z out tha Box Blunted as we Circle tha Block
Out tha subz Blastin Pac We aint thugz but it wont stop
Reppin tha Nati we got stock grippin tha pen like it’s a glock
Look at me now we Diversify spit a verse im Hi
Look at tha hearse rollin by Im Diverse See Me Die
But itz a curse Testify Tha Truth Hurth ya Alibi
See I got my Money Correct Demonz Hunt me to tha Death
Wit tha Price On My Neck I think back in Retrospect
Flowz Nitro Out tha Deck Im Psycho Wit tha Text
Stryk9 Across My Chest Rip Linez Embossed tha Best We Blessed

.....

Hostile
06-24-2007, 04:36 PM
It doesn't work...

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:09 PM
we'll get it fixed....
sometimez these linkz-n-shit act fuk'd up....

we'll get it str8....

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-24-2007, 05:16 PM
i re uploaded it but shit still aint workin...

will see whatz up n let you know

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:17 PM
http://www.myspace.com/thaominousmakeshift

hit up my myspace page.....it workz there....
LOWKEY Edit your Thread and switch tha Linkz.....

Hook :
Like Pac Said It - I’mma Live Never Regret It -
Sippin Hennessy Headed - Death to Enemies Steppin...
To Perfection my Perception - Got you Guessin to tha Question -
Hellish Intersection Got you Stressin to this Hypertension...

Verse 1 :

Killa Locomotive in tha Villa Smokin a Pilla Chokin -
my Decision to Keep it Open - Composition in a Motion...
Innovation tha Culmination tha Situation Stall tha Nation -
All tha Hatin God Forsaken - Skullz are Breakin tha Law is Shakin....
Check yourself Bitch - Look in tha Mirror - Look at tha Fear -
Get It Clear Betta Steer - Ain’t no fuk’n Luv Here....
Still Facin Pill Lacin I’m tha Realist against tha Fakest -
Lyrical Sadist - goin to Hell no matter how long tha Wait Is....
Bustin a Bitch I’m Rippin their Shit (Look At Me Now)
Comin to Grips I’m Luvin tha Spit (Look At Me Now )
Comin to Light I’m Rippin tha Mic (Look At Me Now)
Luvin to Fight when I Spit a Rhyme (Look At Me Now)
Betta Look Closely - Never Approach Me -
Strappin tha Heat Attackin Beat - Stackin tha Weed Slowly....
Over Time tha World is Mine - ScarFace on tha Grind -
Our Place All tha Time - Our Gain Your Demise...

Hook :
Like Pac Said It - I’mma Live Never Regret It -
Sippin Hennessy Headed - Death to Enemies Steppin...
To Perfection my Perception - Got you Guessin to tha Question -
Hellish Intersection Got you Stressin to this Hypertension...

LOWKEY VERSE 2

Verse 3 :

Hey Mothafuka let me tell ya Like It Is -
I don’t give a Fuk about you Bitches - Let me Light a Spliff...
Put ya Middle Fingers Up were Runnin thru your City Kids -
Askin my Clique for Mercy we don’t know what Pity Is....
WestSide Cincinnati - Northern Ky -
to Columbus Dayton City know that Tha’9 Stay High...
Why Lie its Do or Die - there’s No Surprise -
Who Am I to Say tha World is Gettin Better so you shouldn’t even Try ?...
Funny, Money make ya Change (Look At Me Now)
Money Hungry in tha Game (Look At Me Now)
Gotta Hit It wit’ tha Flame ( Look At Me Now)
Microphone Done Hit tha Bank (Look At Me Now)
Know that I Drop a Bomb - Name Degraded like Sadaam -
Middle East Lebanon like a Battle for Babylon...
Napalm tha Signature - Fire Bomb tha Literature -
and we Do It Sinister - Administer tha Finisher...

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-24-2007, 05:25 PM
aight...switched tha linkz from Soundclick to Makeshiftz Myspace....

should be good now off myspace

Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:30 PM
Are both of you guys from KY?

Beat->Definitely could rip this one...I like the guitar.

Hook-> Believe it or not, the hook was off the chain...Not like your usual hooks...This one was more agressive. Multis were tight. It flowed wayy better. All around tight hook.

Verse 1: Didn't flow perfectly. Sounded like you tried to go faster than the beat, or you did. As usual the multis were tight. Too fast to notice any punches or anything...But i'm going on before I read the verse.

Verse 2:Tight. You was rappin for real on this one. Sick flow. I like the choice of words and the way they fit together too.

Verse 3: Opened up dope. The 'look at me now' part was no good. I think you should have kept on rapping. Then you wrapped it up nicely.

After the hook it all came to a halt..That's always good.

Overall, the best I've heard from you guys yet, but I suppose that every nw song you release will only be better than the one before. I don't even feel the need to say you're growing on me. You're at a point in my mind to where I could listen to you and not consider voice at all....I bet when I do audio they will complain about my voice LOL.

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:35 PM
Thanx fo' tha Listen Hostile....Glad you like my hook ...I thought it was dope.
I don't think I go to fast for anything, its jus my natural way of doing it,
but, its your opinion, hopefully tha lyricz help out on your first listenz...

once again, I appreciate your time listening,....
propz.

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-24-2007, 05:35 PM
im from Cincinnati...Born and neva left..haha....

Good lookin out on tha breakdown mayne....

its appreciated, and when you drop ya audio, you know Stryk9 will give it a bump and let you know whatz up.....

anybody else

Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:37 PM
That explains your accent! I'm from Nashville so imagine how mine is.

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:37 PM
and no.....listen to Verse 3 homey,....WestSide Cincinnati, Northern KY,....and so on...

we was both born-n-raised in Cincinnati OH....
I about 6 years ago or so, moved to KY.....

Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:38 PM
and no.....listen to Verse 3 homey,....WestSide Cincinnati, Northern KY,....and so on...

we was both born-n-raised in Cincinnati OH....
I about 6 years ago or so, moved to KY.....

I asked because you know how people move at a young age and dont rep their birthplace...Kanye west for instance.

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:39 PM
naw....I Rep Cincy to tha fullest and will never forget my birthplace.
but where I live now, is only 40 minutes away....so I rep tha whole Area,...
becuz its all become home to me.....

Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:47 PM
That's real.

BraNd
06-24-2007, 05:53 PM
LOVE THIS SONG!!!!
THA BEGINING WITH PAC'S WORDS........ALWAYS CLASSIC

Makeshift's verse ........I see you up'n tha lyrics big time on this......
hittin tha bar's right on this......

9/10

Lowkey's........wow, nice, see tha emotion on this is fire....lyrics, and flow, top line shit.....i see growth with each spit....

8.5/10

Makeshift......final.....nice....."Westside Cinncinati"...was wondering when you were gonna place them words on a song....made me smile....
flow on this is nice....better than your first cuz you displayed more emotion on this

9.2/10

Hook was cool.....see you been improvin on that also

9/10

OVERALL....THIS IS A BOMB AZZ JOINT TO LISTEN TO.....ENJOYED THIS THROUGHOUT.....

9/10

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-25-2007, 05:47 PM
up.........

LOC
06-25-2007, 05:54 PM
it was nice, hook was cool, flows were nice.

My audio comin soon.....

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-25-2007, 09:13 PM
aight mayne....thankz for listenin.....will peep yourz when you drop it

MakeShift
06-26-2007, 02:52 PM
Thanx fo' Listenin LOC...its appreciated...
like Lowkey said, when you drop your audio I'll be sure to peep it out in return.,....

any more criticism or feedback ?
HOlla

Sparx
06-26-2007, 05:01 PM
beats tight, fits well with ur voice n style... pac sample fits really nice... dont really like the chorus... ur voice is much better on this track... not monotone... lyrics are good, nothing too crazy, 'Keys verse comes off a little clearer compared 2 urs Shift... nice track guys... stay up

MakeShift
06-27-2007, 10:23 AM
^^ thanx fo' tha Feedback Sparx...its Appreciated...

anyone else. ?

BlackStar
06-29-2007, 05:37 PM
1st verse
sounds ok...doesn't flow that good, text is ok

2nd verse
well if the would be the whole verse long like in this part:
But I cant fuk’n Escape it KNowin demonz stand Adjacent
See me leanin gotta be Patient always scheming when im Faded
it would be sick as fuck
but it isn't...ok verse

3rd verse
( Look At Me Now) fucking annoying! for real!
Know that I Drop a Bomb - Name Degraded like Sadaam -
Middle East Lebanon like a Battle for Babylon...
dope part here...that's the only part where you're flow perfect in my eyes...ok verse again

hook - ok hook...not that catchy...

beat- sucks, I don't like it...but that's me...fits to the track...so it's ok in this point.

I heard mistakenly "Look Now" at first...I liked this one more than "Look at me now"

MakeShift
06-30-2007, 05:33 PM
BlackStar, your tha 1st Person to say tha Beat Sux....but that's on you...
everyone else seemz to be feelin it.

I guess thanx fo' tha Listen and takin tha time,...
I also don't think my flow is off in verse 1, otherwise I wouldn't beable to flow it, but once again that's on you and what you hear and think...

tha "Look at Me Now" section....Glad its annoyin you...I hope it stickz in yo head....

once again, I appreciate tha Listen and takin tha time.

and,
Propz fo' listenin to my solo "Look Now".....(even if it was on accident)

Sparx
06-30-2007, 06:43 PM
BlackStar, your tha 1st Person to say tha Beat Sux....but that's on you...
everyone else seemz to be feelin it.


u gotta remember shift... everyone has different tastes... for example, i like the beat, but i would never pick it as a beat for me to rap over... just not my style... and its not Star's either (i kno cuz ive made beats for him)...

btw, u ever record over that beat i sent u?

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-30-2007, 07:16 PM
i thought tha beat was dope.....i neva heard a beat i couldnt spit to, but its like ya said, i only flow on tha onez im vibin off......this one is Dope...VTZ alwayz comes thru wit nice beatz....

appreciate tha lookz

MakeShift
07-01-2007, 09:10 AM
Sparx, I know where your comin from, and Star may have his own tastes, which is fine..

and I haven't got around to that beat yet, tho I still have it.
it might be a while, cuz I've been short on time lately.....

Lowkey Tha Warrior
07-02-2007, 02:57 PM
good lookin out to tha people that peeped it, especially to those that Hate me so much, they wont peep it...hahahaha.....

get a mic Odin....

we'll be droppin anotha track off MICROPHONE SHOGUN in a minute.....

peace

MakeShift
07-02-2007, 04:44 PM
^^ tha whole album is gonna drop as Soon as we lace up your last partz on Swing-n-Move...
then its a wrap...

FranchizeTheKid
07-02-2007, 08:03 PM
VTZ? He's An Okay Producer, But I Think Epik And Kooman Are Better When It Comes To SC Producers

I Might Have To Peep Later

Lowkey Tha Warrior
07-02-2007, 09:24 PM
yeah...vtz gotta library of dope shit....