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Hostile
06-23-2007, 06:54 PM
[Hostile]
Nose split down the carilage, carotid arteries severed
The kid never saw a death that he considered heavenly
He ignored the talk, and thought it was urban legend
Until he caught the stalker chattin it up with the reverend
When he pulled out a blade, I didn't wanna watch
but it entised me, like i was seeing grim's clock
And as he stabbed him repeatedly, I didn't gasp
It put a smile on my face just to witness wrath
But he wasn't finished as I sat eyes peeled on the scene
The blade slashed in and out, carvin the man's spleen
Slidin the edge over his face, splittin the nose in half
Never thought death was funny, I couldn't help but laugh
And I stopped and realized that I was becoming a monster
I was face to face with another demon to conquer
Washed my hands of that mess, at the door ready to flee
See reflection in water puddle...the killer was me...Damn

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-23-2007, 07:03 PM
i was feelin this whole verse mayne.....f'real...

dope content, raw shit....had a nice lil flow/vibe to it....

sicc type mentality....def' worth tha read....

propz on it

Hostile
06-23-2007, 07:08 PM
Thanx..Ayo the "Fingaz up" track on ur soundclick page don't work for me.

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-23-2007, 07:10 PM
aight...i'll see whatz up....i'd like to know what you think on that too...

Hostile
06-23-2007, 07:12 PM
NVM I'm listenin to it on myspace. I'll feed u when its done in ur other topic

Lowkey Tha Warrior
06-23-2007, 07:23 PM
[Hostile]
And as he stabbed him repeatedly, I didn't gasp
It put a smile on my face just to witness wrath
But he wasn't finished as I sat eyes peeled on the scene
The blade slashed in and out, carvin the man's spleen
Slidin the edge over his face, splittin the nose in half
Never thought death was funny, I couldn't help but laugh


thought this section was DOPE....again mayne...good shit....

Hostile
06-23-2007, 07:43 PM
Thanx...I'm doin a text-tape..i might record some of it but i always say that and never record. The whole tape is gonna be foul shit like that for the most part

Clasik
06-24-2007, 12:15 AM
h dat was nice man.. u stay to the topic well.. no fillers for sure.... i like how u put things togeter,,,,, stay with the sequence well...

Hostile
06-24-2007, 04:33 PM
My Specialty...Wait until you see the rest of the tracks.

MakeShift
06-24-2007, 05:41 PM
yeah,
this Text was dope..tha section Lowkey Quoted is Top Quality,...
nice-n-original literature...I like how you string your wordz together,..

Propz on a dope text verse....

Hostile
06-24-2007, 05:46 PM
yeah,
this Text was dope..tha section Lowkey Quoted is Top Quality,...
nice-n-original literature...I like how you string your wordz together,..

Propz on a dope text verse....

Thanks for peepin it.

BraNd
06-24-2007, 05:54 PM
And as he stabbed him repeatedly, I didn't gasp
It put a smile on my face just to witness wrath
But he wasn't finished as I sat eyes peeled on the scene
The blade slashed in and out, carvin the man's spleen
Slidin the edge over his face, splittin the nose in half
Never thought death was funny, I couldn't help but laugh
And I stopped and realized that I was becoming a monster
I was face to face with another demon to conquer


took this section.....this is my fav....all of it is good though

props

Sparx
06-25-2007, 09:09 PM
[Hostile]
Nose split down the carilage, carotid arteries severed
The kid never saw a death that he considered heavenly
He ignored the talk, and thought it was urban legend
Until he caught the stalker chattin it up with the reverend
good flow, nice lines, great vocab
When he pulled out a blade, I didn't wanna watch
but it entised me, like i was seeing grim's clock
And as he stabbed him repeatedly, I didn't gasp
It put a smile on my face just to witness wrath
But he wasn't finished as I sat eyes peeled on the scene
The blade slashed in and out, carvin the man's spleen
Slidin the edge over his face, splittin the nose in half
Never thought death was funny, I couldn't help but laugh
sick
And I stopped and realized that I was becoming a monster
I was face to face with another demon to conquer
again sick... im sure ppl can relate to that to an extent
Washed my hands of that mess, at the door ready to flee
See reflection in water puddle...the killer was me...Damn
great flip at the end

nice work H, ur on ur game lately... btw we still doin Warning?

Hostile
06-25-2007, 09:30 PM
Well...Yeah I want to do it still because it will be classic. But I'm in this mode of spitting some Raw, foul, sick, and maybe disturbing shit, so Iono how it will come out.