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Cap
06-09-2007, 11:45 PM
Niggas Talkin Hard, But I Know He In The Burbs,
Only Time He 'Step' Up To 'Plate', When He's Eating His Words
That Phony Is A Nerd, And Anytime He Slowly Getting Burned
And If He Step To Cap Or Kai, Its Cause Homie Didnt Learn/
Cuz Anyone That Approach Me Getting Served
And I Shit On These MC's Lives, Their Careers Is Messy Turds/
It Appears To Stress These Herbs
That We Keep Taking Their Food, Till Their Bellies Hurt/
Breaking Their Rules, With Deadly Perks
And Taking All Their White, Now We Got Heavy Work/
Rowdy Plots, Catch These Birds
And Hold All This Weight, Till Our Backs Be Hurt
Make Deals? Well Act Me First
Ayo They Badly Hurt, Cause My Mob Gets More Than Crack Be Worth/
With All These Boring Cats We Murk
I Work Legal And Illegal, Let The Government Tax The Work
As We Stuck In The Traps Each Verse
And If I Gotta Go Past The Church,
Kai Gonna Find The Money I Left In The Back Of The Hearse
Aim At The Stomach, Shoot Til His Abdomen Burst
This Is The Life, So I Won't Change That For Nothin'
Where Lame Cats Get There Chain Snatched For Frontin'
Ayo Kai, I'll Pull The Mac And Snuff Em

FranchizeTheKid
06-10-2007, 12:02 AM
Dope, Throw This On An Album As An Interlude Or Something

Kai Millz
06-10-2007, 12:06 AM
A Line For Line Breakdown Would Be Nice

FranchizeTheKid
06-10-2007, 12:09 AM
Lmao... It Would Be Nice Huh

But I'll Feed It Line For Line Later, A Bit Busy

Montana
06-10-2007, 12:15 PM
Ill Pull The Mac And Snuff Em LOL

Cap
06-10-2007, 01:01 PM
Cuz Mah Coke Is Raw

I Lol At That Daily

Montana
06-10-2007, 01:54 PM
Wel Yur A Sad Bastard Cuz Dat Wuz Part Of Da Bar About Scarface So It Fitted. Lol U Alwayz Rap About Guns And Drugs I Cud Quote 1000'z

Cap
06-10-2007, 01:56 PM
Wel Yur A Sad Bastard Cuz Dat Wuz Part Of Da Bar About Scarface So It Fitted. Lol U Alwayz Rap About Guns And Drugs I Cud Quote 1000'z

Do You, I Did What I Rhyme About. Can You Say The Same? No, Because You Dont Create Your Own Rhymes

Kai Millz
06-10-2007, 01:58 PM
If You're Not Gonna Leave Feedback, Don't Post In Here

Kai Millz
06-10-2007, 05:42 PM
Uppin, Feed Will Be Appreciated

Chopz
06-10-2007, 05:57 PM
Okay first of all it would be a lot easier to see who is who if you simply put who was spitting in which type of text... Just a thought...

First of all, I thought that the flow was off in this, I know you're both your own MC's but I also thought that you should have tried to match up the syllable counts, as to me it feels as if I have to read the text as if you're both rapping at different speeds... The lyrics were alright, not bad for a cypher but they didn't have much depth or context... What you were rapping about you pulled off rather nicely but I still think that you should both try to rap about different things.. I actually thoughtit started out like a story, if you had continued it like that it would have been a lot better than it was...

If I am talking about each of you individually I think that both flows were nice, but together it was a bit off... I know a cypher is off of the dome but I still think you should have continued on from the beggining to make it into a story with some type of plot or somewhat... anyway nice free', keep up the good work and practisce.

Sparx
06-10-2007, 07:13 PM
Rowdy Plots, Catch These Birds
And Hold All This Weight, Till Our Backs Be Hurt
Make Deals? Well Act Me First
Ayo They Badly Hurt, Cause My Mob Gets More Than Crack Be Worth/
With All These Boring Cats We Murk
I Work Legal And Illegal, Let The Government Tax The Work
As We Stuck In The Traps Each Verse
And If I Gotta Go Past The Church,
Kai Gonna Find The Money I Left In The Back Of The Hearse
Aim At The Stomach, Shoot Til His Abdomen Burst
This Is The Life, So I Won't Change That For Nothin'
Where Lame Cats Get There Chain Snatched For Frontin'
Ayo Kai, I'll Pull The Mac And Snuff Em

last half of the verse was the best, love the hearse line... Kai's last few bars were crack Cap ur closer was plain lazy lol...

lyrics were good overall, but like chopz said.. flow was kinda fucked... u gotta adapt to each others styles if ur gonna do stuff like this

Lil' Infamous
06-10-2007, 07:41 PM
"messy turds"....i love it. haha jk
i liked it Cap

FranchizeTheKid
06-10-2007, 08:31 PM
last half of the verse was the best, love the hearse line... Kai's last few bars were crack Cap ur closer was plain lazy lol...

lyrics were good overall, but like chopz said.. flow was kinda fucked... u gotta adapt to each others styles if ur gonna do stuff like this

Honestly, I Thought "Yo, I'll Pull It Back And Buss Em" Woulda Been Better, I Dunno?

LOC
06-10-2007, 08:38 PM
it was tight, got no time to break it down line for line...u dont need it neway, if u do u must be insecure lol....

Keep it up bruvz

Michael
06-12-2007, 03:11 PM
Dope, Throw This On An Album As An Interlude Or Something
Up On The Text Game