View Full Version : freestyle - AK

06-05-2007, 03:10 PM
You dont know me sittin all day up in this bitch
Break-fast bitches gettin high up in this bitch
I fuck a bitch so hard her pussy start to itch
When I rock I rock strictly dope with my clique
Maybe ya niggaz dont know how to react to this shit
What i be erradicating and attacking yo ass wit
Yo Mc's talk shit on the daily, high up wit that e
Thus I be fucking your mother up in the ass... well maybe
You see when I spit I spit raw
I cause confusion from hear to the dancefloor
Fuck a dancefloor who the fuck be there
Im likely to be in the crib puttin it all up in the air
Alot a niggaz are phy-chic and think they know the forecast
I see right through your fake ass better than hawk eye
Im not the type of nigga to express myself thru rap, aight
Il rather take my .45 and stick it up your mothers beehive
You dont know what a beehive is? Pull up your mothers dress
See what thee possess and see if thy carress
Who shall be the one to confess that incest is the only way to express oneself protest of nature, i be-tcha
Yo moms name nikita, my ex bitch name felicia, we all go to the restuarant and go eat some keish-a

I got my gat in my hand these niggaz dont understand yeah
I pop that shit like a motherfuckin pay per clip
hahaha hahaha I got more clips, west $ide till I die nigga
AK-47's itz whateva!

06-05-2007, 05:52 PM
Soundz Lik Yu Juz Startin Writing No Offense. Good Rhyming and Flow You'll Improve. PM me If Yu Wan My Help

06-05-2007, 07:28 PM
Yeah my first attempt ever writing this shit, il be sure to drop ya a PM.
I think I fucked up with the beehive shit, lol.
More feedback from the rest of you, pls.

06-05-2007, 07:29 PM
you want feedback yet you gave noone else feedback

06-05-2007, 07:45 PM
Soundz Lik Yu Juz Startin Writing No Offense. Good Rhyming and Flow You'll Improve. PM me If Yu Wan My Help

Wut The Fuck You Gonna Teach Him? How To Use Ctrl+C And Ctrl+V To Copy Others Rhymes?

06-05-2007, 08:32 PM
not too bad for ur 1st i guess...too much stereotypical shit in there to, sed bitch too many times...and fuck ur bitch so hard i gave her a itch, dats called sexual diseases buddy.

Stay up

06-06-2007, 02:46 AM
Yeah I guess, never thought of it like that.