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06-05-2007, 03:01 PM
Look who want i from me this Mc to sic
i show Mc's how to be rappers (admit it)
Celly is the best dont need you to admit it
but still i spit flame like its common 2 do it
who the best to ever do it p-a-c (who's next)
Thats Me spittin cold Ice on no beat thats neat
step to me ya head a be gone so use it wisely (Mcelly)
im Back if you didnt notice im hot where's the fan (Thank u)
im great, who better, them never -Murder Ave-
Today i might murder half of ya team Cell i own half of ya team
thats means im the under-boss listen
I'll send you away lik rockets got it
Money on my mind anydude mess with it ,will get it
Who be the Best after me no one why cus i does it all
Inside the Rules I bend em like new shoes
Air force ones on my feet ice on my heat

06-05-2007, 03:06 PM
wow...erm...aiight...here we go:

1st...find words that rhyme
2nd...use a rhyme scheme
3rd...don't rhyme the same word twice
4th...put some wordplays in it or similes
5th...read other verses here...that will help you to improve

06-05-2007, 05:52 PM
I don't get it...