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Clasik
06-04-2007, 11:11 PM
Dear mama download link http://download.yousendit.com/89C40EA009A9D700
Oh girl remix download link http://download.yousendit.com/A4B08E2C1A69941E


tell me wat u guys think... thanks

dear mama lyrics



hey mama, I just want to lighten the weight off your shoulders,
Lighten the world up through the days that got dark and colder,
from the suffering you part take, and the weight that you had to carry,
left blue veins behind your legs that weak and weary,
Well, Im here to add braces to put an end to that , and begin a great,
can't continue, knowing what you put up that wasn't even on your plate,
you played it out like you was ready for more,
but in my heart , I knew you were weak and sore,
Ran it out even though the chances were impossible at hands,
so you showed out two, and their you stand,
I want to thank you , even during the time when u had nothing to give,
That im not mad, but even realized the greater gift,
that I was yours and you was mine,
placed me first even through all the obstalce that was in our line,
I just want you to know , Im standing straight , and ready to shift to uplift your weight ,
Because I know you care but I been learn to crawl,
I done walk so Im ready to run at all cost.


verse 2

Hey mama, Its my turn, Ques my role,
To take part in what a son should show,
respect, encount for all, even specs that was serve on tables,
To give back through the years when I was able to
provide , because its my turn to give,
best of the world and Im not talking giftcards and dollar gifts,
company, be their unlike some see you soon cards,
Present what life truly offers and fingerless jobs,
Because Im here to take those dishes out your hands,
Dont have to grow another gray hair cuz im a man,
worry free, and don't lift a thing while Im around,
You been working all your life so its your turn to take a rest , and a sitdown ,
Take five is what you outta do,
Ill continue where you left offf and make things anew,
Because times can change , sit back and feel the effects,
you dont have to wait just receive and check,


verse 3

hey mama, Im not embracing becuz your a mom that inquires deserve,
Its fromt the top of my heart thats purer than true love,
From the affection to warmth of comfort,
made me feel special even though our class were mere middle, just under
Every penny you saved up was consist of no more than sweat and tears,
of your life saving that took precious years,
I remember when I was only about five, when you made me feel this big,
Just to set me equal to the other fortunate kids,
to have the same , live up to the measures,
I dont care if its just an inch, your my treasure,
Your golden light , is what balance my life,
Nothing else becuz you are the highlights, of mine,
Like a light bulb that out shine to fill the room ,
with the right atmosphere that keeps the mood in tune,
Always turn the bad situation into its opposite like the sun,
that I thank you, Im proud to be your son,

oh girl lyrics: i already posted so this,, just if u want to follow along with the song...



Ohhh girl, I'd be in trouble if you left me now
Cause I don't know where to look for love, I just don't know how
Ohhhhhhhh girl, I'd be in trouble if you left me now
Cause I don't know where to look for love, I just don't know how
Ohhhh.. {*cut off and echoes*}




So where do I look for love
Well....I knew this girl from the 6th grade
yet we haven't shared a word
It all started about my junior year, the time was their
kowning she needed some tender love to wipe away her cryin tears
Wanted comfort in arms, fantazing if we really belong
together , the emotion for each other was growin strong
A Dummy how shy I was, on a corner view with a exploding crush
She walks by, both gazin eyes yet we shared no touch
Senior year now strolls by
One of us had to make a move
So she asked me if wanted to catch a movie after school
I hesitated to answer but it didn't took to long
Awaited by impatient of time, now its time to move along
Filled with endless laughter , She made my day
Neither of us wanted the time to end but later the weeks took play
The time of my life , But is it enough
So is this where I look for love

chorus

So where do I begin
This girl is constantly on my mind , like bad sins
Im askin, should i disregard the sacrifices and let her walk in
The heart wins, but the path bends,
questions run pass friends
A narrow route is unlikely to be easily tresspassed
But the love we have, goes beyond our laughs
Im missin the special time we shared
Now Im sitting here reminicing old memories of wonder years
See that I care,
Im like wine how i age with time, so you know im sincere
I cherish memories us swingin by the park
Sharing life thoughts,
words soon became silent, now our hands began to talk
Wishing the sunlight stayed
knowin how I have to leave before the night is dark
Just when we feel like we are so close
Destiny strikes and here is our toast
Challenges becomes harder, split our obstacle in half
As if god don't want us together,
we both goin to college into two seprate paths

chorus

So is this where I start
To regroup the broken life pieces that were torn apart
Shatter our middle and high school lives
Finally our eyes met , awaken and alive
It becomes strenuous now our road to happyness dies
If I could I would, give you the whole world
Be a selfious boy and have you all to myself, as a complete girl
Give you my heart and all
And if you need a kidney or a liver
Don't hestiate to give me a call
I want to be an answer to all your problems, avoid intrusions
Make you smile everyday, think of me as your solution
And if I could have my way
We be livin at skyview in each others arm all day
So don't be sad if Im not always by your side
Just think of me, I will be reborn inside
of you, Im sowing the seeds
To make up for the past year
and move forward becasue our future is here
chorus

LOC
06-04-2007, 11:35 PM
Now i know who u sorta remind me of u sound like fort minor a lil haha.

Dear Mama:

Neway...it was alright, the lyrics were nice...u seem to not have ne clue to where tha hook is tho...either that or u dont care lol...first verse u kept goin after the hook, then on the second u stopped short before the hook...

And there was no hook period lol, shulda made one wulda been better...flow was ok in some parts...sloppy alot tho.

Oh Girl:

You just talkin is it rap or is it a poem thats wat u needa think...if u aint sweatin at least a lil or breathing hard then u aint rappin...it doesnt have to be over the top...but ur voice is too blant or atleast double ur shit up see how that sounds.

Both are just ok...u jus needa get ur spit right, flow will follow.

Clasik
06-04-2007, 11:48 PM
yo thanks for the reply man.. good or bad don't matter... i apreciated

I don't know how u double the thing up.. i know wat u talkin about though... im using a crappy software.. and its only recording in raw format.. its the best i can do with recordin on my laptop for now... thanks for da feed.. oh yea.. i didn't care for a chorus for the dear mama. i just spit the whole way cuz i did it with one take.. no cut outs lol

FranchizeTheKid
06-05-2007, 01:42 AM
With Doubling Vocals, All You Do Is Create Another Vocal Track And While Your Other Track Says Your Lyric, You Say It At The Same Time So It Creates Like A Layered Effect, Good Luck

Flash
06-05-2007, 05:14 AM
try not to read!Get more passion---you see ja and pac are so good cuz of the passion the put in the track try that it would help the flow and the feeling when you listen to tha song!

lilsam
06-05-2007, 11:38 AM
Lol @ Ja And Pac In Same Category...^

Flash
06-05-2007, 12:07 PM
Lol @ Ja And Pac In Same Category...^

yeah Sam!they got the same passion in theyre tracks!

lilsam
06-05-2007, 12:11 PM
But Ja....Isnt A Tenth of Pac

Flash
06-05-2007, 12:13 PM
But Ja....Isnt A Tenth of Pac

yeah he is better!

Clasik
06-05-2007, 12:29 PM
thanks for the advice

lilsam
06-05-2007, 12:36 PM
Ja Better Than Pac! Thats Shocking To Say, Ja Isnt Even Better Than 50 When Hes Rappin Well

lilsam
06-05-2007, 01:58 PM
Nice enough (Dear Mama) but the flows quite off at times, yet nice enough