View Full Version : clasik ( audio ) dear summer beat

06-04-2007, 01:28 PM
http://download.yousendit.com/0D3AC6410987C428 download the song..


title: Chasing

Im breaking this down simple, this fire cannot be kindle
Leaving it unlit, therefore theirs not part of me to offend you
I know you want to get in 2 and ignite this fuse
I just need the right amplitude becuz our love is not current to move
Playing love guessing disturbing this erection
Let me eleviate this pain of mine , hoping it will lessen
Its hard for me to say , I appreciate your love
In acceptance I run away so how can their be 2 of us
A heart cannot lie , therefore it will never work
Their are many fishes in the sea, however this one won't come first
I hope you can understand, Im in my own situation
Trying not to play heartbreaking , but to create less complications
See what Im facing, Im a relection of my own in recarceration
Have you ever had a love that love you more than your worth?
Its a curse becuz you can't even bother to giver her cover
becuz your heart is busy following another;... trouble

They say, if the relation has no emotion, then its just an open ocean
Floating.. separately, living a missing life so happily?
Arguements meet and now your " asking me"
Be 2gether is just a fraction to me , practically
I rather be alone from your attractions please,
and No its not my love intuition,
but theirs no part of you in me, for this to fruitition
I know its my lost and yes I know the cost
Becuz our feeling is like a business, " how can it operate with no jobs?'
No purpose to belong, I don't want to do you wrong
keep strong , Im gone to vacade this hurt
To evade abraision of the heart so its best we not keep in touch
Cast my name , remember me is a waste of energy
Forgive me, Im a hazard to my own worst enemy
The best is yet before me, but yet Im chasing along
The guidance of the wind, and in the end; I have nothing to hold on; gone

Im full of mix emotion unstable in this composure
not sayin that is over, maybe we are beta off not gettin any closer
Its not that i don't like u , im makin right do
you gave my first kiss, im forever in you sky view
but its only right to , let your heart shift in buildin this relation
love in this standing man, so never mind me to keep u waiting
you had me on your edge, maybe its time off the ledge
Im an anchor that is holding u down, its clear u can see it now
clear to let your mind refresh , and yet through these hard times
I will will always have a shoulder for u to rest
so don't take this in the wrong way
im just a breeze of the wind floating away
its hard to say stay, to see how high this love can ascend
becuz at the end of the day, im at the beginin where my heart has just begun
and here comes the hardest part, a closure to the end
I don't want to say goodbye, but can we be just bestfriends

06-04-2007, 01:44 PM
pretty nice yo!

aiight...slow down a bit...take time to speak the words clearly (I have to learn that shit too lol). Maybe some more feelings...I don't know man..like I said, I've to learn that all too.

I like this track...but I wouldn't play it too often...

keep it up G...

have you got myspace?

06-04-2007, 02:00 PM
thanks for the feed yo... yea i got to practice that to...


06-04-2007, 03:25 PM
not that good...if you recitate slow,you should do it more understandable and the flow its fucked up...also that ITS ALLLRIGHT shit is fuckin up!You still need to work!The quality is nice thats good,but everthynig else needs mad work!Keep it up!

06-04-2007, 04:49 PM
mmmmm....it was ok.....

The lyrics are nice, the speed is fine really i see wat ur steez is on...but SPIT IT...u dont have to spit it with agression, but a lil more passion will help the flow, mayb double ur vocals too...def make tha words a lil more clear with adlibs and wat have u.

Sorta sounds like ur jus talkin, but i culd see where u were goin with it...where u from?

06-04-2007, 04:54 PM
Mmmm, Flow Does Kinda Go Off Abit
Agree Wit LOC About More Passion
Need That Kinda Presence In Yur Tracks To Draw People In
Nice Pick Of A Beat
Lyrics Aint That Bad

06-04-2007, 05:14 PM
Im from vietnam.... Im gonna try to redo it.. i did it on my computer by myself,, if u guys want to know. I got more audios on the way though... thanks for feeds.

06-04-2007, 06:31 PM
This reminded me of "Stan". The flow anyways.I always give u the same feedback for all of ur audios.

Flow..let it flow.