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Hostile
04-18-2007, 06:21 PM
[Liable]
Everything you told me was bullshit but I fed off of it
I was in love with your words and wanted to wed because of them
You were the cause of my rise and fall, demise so to speak
You created the hatred I felt; You pushed me to the brink
Fear was the cliff I stood at the edge of wanting more
Of your false securities which were the safetey gear, your lies the bungy cord
And with wind caressing me in the most beautiful way
I felt plunging head first toward the ground was how I'd see death's face

Dernno
04-19-2007, 08:00 AM
You never really had a chance since you had to follow my poem 1,2...33. But this was shit anyway

Hostile
04-19-2007, 09:10 PM
Huh?......

Dernno
04-20-2007, 07:37 AM
...amateurs

Hostile
04-21-2007, 11:57 AM
What????????

ALEXE
04-21-2007, 05:46 PM
this is really deep
short but full of meaning, and very well worded
amazing drop, thanks for the read
keep it up

Hostile
04-21-2007, 06:05 PM
Thnx for the feed.

CopOnDr.Monkley
04-22-2007, 10:23 AM
Thnx for the feed.

Thats what i said to you auld one this morning after breakfast.



Not really I legged it when she fell asleep