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Nickolai
02-25-2007, 03:28 PM
**Hook Inspired By NaS' 'One Mic'**

Verse 1
[Chopz]

My hands sweat as I think of you, even our past makes me nervous;
I hate that we’re split, but am afraid that we never had a real purpose;
At the start of our relationship, I was captivated by your personality;
Your beauty was breathtaking, always there when my parents were mad at me;
You felt like an escape from reality, because you made me feel like I was more than a man;
You made me feel as if I was flying, you made me different to what I am;
You shaped my personality from a reckless figure to one that loves life;
We’re split now but I was always married to you, even if you weren’t my wife;
Many people died for you and they are the ones who will always be loved;
But will never be fully respected, as their names our surrounded by blood;
And now that I love you more than any thing else that I could ever fathom;
You move on to a different persona, change who you are in a disorderly fashion;
You find a new love in those who are problematic, like I used to be;
I cannot change who I am, you did that for me, but now your losing me;
I had to stop our love growing, or I would have died when we broke apart;
At least if I break us up, I know I couldn’t have done anything to save my heart;
Torn into shatters, the love I once had will always be there, just dwelling within;
Now upset when I acknowledge you, differed from when you used to make my mind split;
I always knew what to do, there was just the question of whether my girl would mind;
If I couldn’t meet up with her, because I was listening to music in my spare time;
The love for you is different to her, I appreciate you aesthetically and her thoroughly;
We used to be in love, intertwined, but now I pretend you are nothing to me;
The way you have changed to a life of “guns, ho’s and drugs” is a prodigious mistake;
I used to be married to the game, but the way that she changed, caused my heart to break

Hook

Yo, All We Need Is One Love…
…All We Need Is One Love….That’s All We Need…
…All I Need Is One Love…Its All I Need…
…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah…

Verse 2
[Kaukasian]

So Natural And Pure I Would Bump Her Til Dawn, It Was Love For Sure
But Lately, She’s Not Been The Same Way That I Adored, And For That Im Scarred And Torn
I Still See Her A Lot But Im Livin’ In The Past, How It Was In Primary School
So Young Then I Didn’t See Her At All, Until I Was Captivated By Her Presence As She Was Beautiful
All Them Feelingz And Emotionz I Once Held For Her Have Been Left To The Side
Cuz When Violence Came Into Her Life It Changed The Way I Saw Her Within My Soul & Eyez
I Was Metaphorically Torn Apart, And The Wrong Term Of Expression Was Emotionally Scarred
Cuz Something Inside Me, Something Now Dark, Physically Broke, And That Was My Heart
Back In The Day Her Wordz I Would Not Only Listen To, But Engage Within
She Was More Than Some One I Could Love, I Could Learn From Her Unlike Other Women
I Guess It’s A Debate Whether Or Not We Were Meant To Be
Cuz So Many Obstacles In Our Way Made Us Feel Like We Didn’t Sign Up For Marriage But The Army
Even Now Though, I Cant Let Her Go, No Matter What Mood Im In, She’s Still My Girl
Who Can Relate To My Thoughts Cuz We Are One, Its Like She’s My World
Her Elements Of Compassion & Her Moans Of Satisfaction Has No Distractions
Don’t Know Whats Happened, Thought We Were A Faction Until She Was Ate Away Bit By Bit Like Rationz
Now She’s Got A Split Personality, There’s Three Of Her, Contradicting Eachother
Hating Eachother, Alcoholics Cuz Of Them Trynna Get More ‘Units’ Than One Another
At Times This Heart Ache Has Had Me Thinking Im In ‘America’
Cuz I’m In A ‘State’, Time To Start Forgetting, She’s Movin On & Im Letting Her

Hook

Yo, All We Need Is One Love…
…All We Need Is One Love….That’s All We Need…
…All I Need Is One Love…Its All I Need…
…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah…

Verse 3
[Kaukasian]

In This Plant Like World She Was My Stem, My Back Bone, Factors Of The Man I Am Today
While The Leaves Were The Memories Folded With Love That Not Even Rain Could Wash Away
She Blossomed In The Summer Chapter Of Our Soul Kindling Relationship
So That Her Inner Beauty Was Shown To The World But Still She Dint Want A Mingling Relationship
Said I Was The One, And That Literally She’ll Be A Stung Nettle If I Left Her Alone
Told Her If She Ever Needed Me, I’ll Be Sitting By The Phone, Just To Hear Her Voices Tone
And With That Said, Talked So Much That The Bottom Stair Became My Bed
And I Did Indeed Rest My Head Cuz, With The Phone To My Ear So I Can Hear Her Breathe
Took Me To Another Dimension, Another Formality, A Place Where I Was In Bliss For Eternity
Felt New Born & Hoped I Wasn’t In A Ward For Maternity, Didn’t Wanna Have To Repeat The Things Hurting Me
But I Remembered Where I Was Again, I Was Holding Her In Her Room, Mind Skipped A Page
In Fact, Probably Skipped All Of Them Cuz I Thought We Were Happily Ever After, Ive Now Accepted Im Insane
In Love Im ‘Brain Dead’ Cuz I ‘Cant Even Think’ About Not Being With Her
Nothing In This World I Wouldn’t Give Her, And No Other Girl Like Her Can Make Me Shiver
Thought I Was On The Edge Of A Mountain The Way I Fell For Her
So Crushing And Scary, Cant Even Eat Unless She’s At A Table Wit Me, Havin Dinner
If Life Has Taught Me Anything At All In My Sixteen Years Of Hate And Stressing
Is That, Don’t Let The Ones You Truly Love Go, Or Else You’ll End Up Regretting
And Asking The Same Questions Over Again, What If? Guess I’ll Never Know
Cuz, I Let Some One Go, And They Made Some Else Happy, Kinda Puts Things Into Perspective Yo

Hook

…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah…
…All We Need Is One Love…That’s All We Ever Need In This World, Fuck Cash…
…All I Need Is One Love…Fuck The Cars, The Jewellery…
…All We Need Is One Love…To Spread Warmth To The Whole World…

[Whispered]

.....Volante.....

Enzyme
02-25-2007, 04:29 PM
Who Is Kaukasian? Its Was Deep, I'll Edit With Feed Later On..Uppin!

Chopz
02-25-2007, 06:59 PM
Just so everybody knows, I'm not sure about Nik but I based my verse around the beat "Birds Eye View" by "Zion I." I think it flows pretty well to that beat but whatever. Nice verses nik, definitely heat. Uppin'.

POC Was Here
02-27-2007, 10:28 AM
**Hook Inspired By NaS' 'One Mic'**

Verse 1
[Chopz]

My hands sweat as I think of you, even our past makes me nervous;
I hate that we’re split, but am afraid that we never had a real purpose;
At the start of our relationship, I was captivated by your personality;
Your beauty was breathtaking, always there when my parents were mad at me;
Nice Opener Chopz, Nice Storytelling And The Imagery Is Nice
You felt like an escape from reality, because you made me feel like I was more than a man;
You made me feel as if I was flying, you made me different to what I am;
You shaped my personality from a reckless figure to one that loves life;
We’re split now but I was always married to you, even if you weren’t my wife;
The Second Bar Was The Better One, Explains How A Lot Of People Feel Like Hip-Hop Lets Them Express Their True Selves
Many people died for you and they are the ones who will always be loved;
But will never be fully respected, as their names our surrounded by blood;
I Liked This Bar, Shows The Stereotypes Surrounding Hip-Hop Which Isn't Helped By Deaths Over Beef
And now that I love you more than any thing else that I could ever fathom;
You move on to a different persona, change who you are in a disorderly fashion;
Dope Bar, Talking About How Hip-Hop Has Changed...... Very Nicely Done Choppo
You find a new love in those who are problematic, like I used to be;
I cannot change who I am, you did that for me, but now your losing me;
I had to stop our love growing, or I would have died when we broke apart;
At least if I break us up, I know I couldn’t have done anything to save my heart;
Nice Little Segment, Keeps The Story Going
Torn into shatters, the love I once had will always be there, just dwelling within;
Now upset when I acknowledge you, differed from when you used to make my mind split;
I always knew what to do, there was just the question of whether my girl would mind;
If I couldn’t meet up with her, because I was listening to music in my spare time;
The love for you is different to her, I appreciate you aesthetically and her thoroughly;
We used to be in love, intertwined, but now I pretend you are nothing to me;
Dope Whole Segment....... Liking This Whole Verse Choppo
The way you have changed to a life of “guns, ho’s and drugs” is a prodigious mistake;
I used to be married to the game, but the way that she changed, caused my heart to break
Nice Closer...... Nice Verse Overall Choppo, Good Work.

Hook

Yo, All We Need Is One Love…
…All We Need Is One Love….That’s All We Need…
…All I Need Is One Love…Its All I Need…
…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah…

Hook Is Nice, So Props For That Nick

Verse 2
[Kaukasian]

So Natural And Pure I Would Bump Her Til Dawn, It Was Love For Sure
But Lately, She’s Not Been The Same Way That I Adored, And For That Im Scarred And Torn
Nice Opener, Describing Your Relationship To Hip-Hop, Flow Was A Bit Wobbly Though
I Still See Her A Lot But Im Livin’ In The Past, How It Was In Primary School
So Young Then I Didn’t See Her At All, Until I Was Captivated By Her Presence As She Was Beautiful
The Primary School Shit Was Dope And The Way You Worded That You Still Listen To Old School hip-Hop, Flow Again Is A Bit Wobbly
All Them Feelingz And Emotionz I Once Held For Her Have Been Left To The Side
Cuz When Violence Came Into Her Life It Changed The Way I Saw Her Within My Soul & Eyez
I Was Metaphorically Torn Apart, And The Wrong Term Of Expression Was Emotionally Scarred
Cuz Something Inside Me, Something Now Dark, Physically Broke, And That Was My Heart
Dope Segment, Very Descriptive And Great Storytelling
Back In The Day Her Wordz I Would Not Only Listen To, But Engage Within
She Was More Than Some One I Could Love, I Could Learn From Her Unlike Other Women
Lol, Nice Bar. Shitting On Women Though Lol
I Guess It’s A Debate Whether Or Not We Were Meant To Be
Cuz So Many Obstacles In Our Way Made Us Feel Like We Didn’t Sign Up For Marriage But The Army
Even Now Though, I Cant Let Her Go, No Matter What Mood Im In, She’s Still My Girl
Who Can Relate To My Thoughts Cuz We Are One, Its Like She’s My World
Nice Segment, Nothing Really Standout But Nice And It Continues The Whole Song And Story Quite Well
Her Elements Of Compassion & Her Moans Of Satisfaction Has No Distractions
Don’t Know Whats Happened, Thought We Were A Faction Until She Was Ate Away Bit By Bit Like Rationz
Nice Multies, Very Tidy And Didn't Seem Forced
Now She’s Got A Split Personality, There’s Three Of Her, Contradicting Eachother
Hating Eachother, Alcoholics Cuz Of Them Trynna Get More ‘Units’ Than One Another
Nicely Done..... The Alcoholics Part Was Dope
At Times This Heart Ache Has Had Me Thinking Im In ‘America’
Cuz I’m In A ‘State’, Time To Start Forgetting, She’s Movin On & Im Letting Her
Nice Closer, Nice Little Bit Of Wordplay...... Dope Verse Overall

Hook

Yo, All We Need Is One Love…
…All We Need Is One Love….That’s All We Need…
…All I Need Is One Love…Its All I Need…
…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah…

Verse 3
[Kaukasian]

In This Plant Like World She Was My Stem, My Back Bone, Factors Of The Man I Am Today
While The Leaves Were The Memories Folded With Love That Not Even Rain Could Wash Away
Dope Opener, Real Nice Son
She Blossomed In The Summer Chapter Of Our Soul Kindling Relationship
So That Her Inner Beauty Was Shown To The World But Still She Dint Want A Mingling Relationship
Dope As Dude, The Whole Thing Of Hip-Hop As A Flower Is Nice As Hell
Said I Was The One, And That Literally She’ll Be A Stung Nettle If I Left Her Alone
Told Her If She Ever Needed Me, I’ll Be Sitting By The Phone, Just To Hear Her Voices Tone
Nice Multies Again, Nice Segment. Nothing Standout, But Nice
And With That Said, Talked So Much That The Bottom Stair Became My Bed
And I Did Indeed Rest My Head Cuz, With The Phone To My Ear So I Can Hear Her Breathe
Decent Multies, But The Flow Was Lot At The End Of the Second Line
Took Me To Another Dimension, Another Formality, A Place Where I Was In Bliss For Eternity
Felt New Born & Hoped I Wasn’t In A Ward For Maternity, Didn’t Wanna Have To Repeat The Things Hurting Me
But I Remembered Where I Was Again, I Was Holding Her In Her Room, Mind Skipped A Page
In Fact, Probably Skipped All Of Them Cuz I Thought We Were Happily Ever After, Ive Now Accepted Im Insane
Lol @ The Insane Part, Nice Segment Though, Continued The Story Well
In Love Im ‘Brain Dead’ Cuz I ‘Cant Even Think’ About Not Being With Her
Nothing In This World I Wouldn’t Give Her, And No Other Girl Like Her Can Make Me Shiver
Nice Multies And The Little Bit Of Wordplay Was Nice
Thought I Was On The Edge Of A Mountain The Way I Fell For Her
So Crushing And Scary, Cant Even Eat Unless She’s At A Table Wit Me, Havin Dinner
You Listen To Music While Eating Dinner? What The Fuck? Lol
If Life Has Taught Me Anything At All In My Sixteen Years Of Hate And Stressing
Is That, Don’t Let The Ones You Truly Love Go, Or Else You’ll End Up Regretting
Nice
And Asking The Same Questions Over Again, What If? Guess I’ll Never Know
Cuz, I Let Some One Go, And They Made Some Else Happy, Kinda Puts Things Into Perspective Yo
Dope Closer And A Nice Verse Overall

Hook

…All We Need Is One Love…Yeah, Yeah, Yeah, Yeah…
…All We Need Is One Love…That’s All We Ever Need In This World, Fuck Cash…
…All I Need Is One Love…Fuck The Cars, The Jewellery…
…All We Need Is One Love…To Spread Warmth To The Whole World…

[Whispered]

.....Volante.....

Overall: 9.0/10

Nice Verses From Both Of You, Concept Was Good. Nice Change From The Usual Tracks That People Put Out, Good Job.

Chopz
02-27-2007, 01:43 PM
Thanks for the feed...

Critisize
02-27-2007, 03:57 PM
Excellent man good to see not everyone is about gunz n drugnz

Chopz
02-27-2007, 04:44 PM
Thanks for the feed, uppin' for Nick,

Critisize
02-27-2007, 04:54 PM
no probs check out my new kid thread

Nickolai
02-28-2007, 12:19 PM
Thx For The Feed And Yh POC My Flow Was A Lil Off In This Drop
Needta Use Shorter Lines
~Uppin~

POC Was Here
02-28-2007, 02:14 PM
Thx For The Feed And Yh POC My Flow Was A Lil Off In This Drop
Needta Use Shorter Lines
~Uppin~

Nah It Wasn't The Line Length, that Shit Is Fine. It Was Just Some Words Didn't Really Rhyme, That's All.