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Lil' Infamous
01-04-2007, 09:54 PM
*to the music of Grew Up A Screw Up by Ludacris and Young Jeezy*


[Chorus]
Back on the grind, back, back on the grind
I’m, I’m one of a kind
The Top’s, the top’s the bottom line

[Verse 1]
Im BACK, all yall niggaz betta advance ya albums and mixtapes
Best believe I’m getting mine whether it be tomorrow or this day
Nigga I been waitin for my chance to shine, my chance to pop
I swear to God I aint gon stop until I get to the top
I see it, I want it, Im comin fuh that
I been patiently waitin now gimmie them stats
Everybody put ya hands up like a hold up
That’s what them otha rappers be sayin, well when do I get to blow up?
Naw betta than that, when do I get to start blowin out?
I aint showin talent, Im just showin out! (showin out)

[Chorus]

[Verse 2]
Unlike these niggas, I don’t need no fuckin chain to show the fuckin talent of my brain
Cuz that’s not why I came, I aint come fuh tha fame, shit I came fuh tha game
I swear to G-O-D you niggaz gonna rememba my name
Man I aint even gotta remind yall how far I done came
It don’t get no betta, I AM the top of the line
Aint nobody gonna tell me otherwise, believe im gonna grind
I’ll bust a muthafucka head tryin to keep me from mine, believe im gonna shine
And I aint stopping fuh no nigga, please believe its my time

[Chorus]

[Verse 3]
Im like Mr. T, I pity the fool that steps to me
If you want my spot, try and take it, I’ll wreck both you AND the beat
Want me to switch up my flow, I jus switched in and outta southpaw
Title me that rapper wit da ambidextrous flow, now that’s raw
Yea im a young nigga, only got fourteen years
But you aint gotta be old to be grown, the fuck I got to fear?
Only thing you good for is givin me problems and problems
In a few mo minutes ima be forced to fuckin’ solve em
You lookin fuh me, you can find me in the 8-0-Tres
Its ME muhfuckas, all day ery’day

[Chorus w/ occasional DJ scratches]


In The Mind Of A Mixbreed

Focus
01-05-2007, 07:06 PM
10 Views And No Reply's? This is The Problem That This Forum Has And Well....All Other Forums Are Alike!..If Theres No Beef To Read Then They Will Skip It, I Speak On This Issue On My Latest Track "Lost One".

As For My Review On "The Top Ten's Bottom Line"

Since I Have This Track I Felt The Vibe You Were In From The Start.

"Im BACK, all yall niggaz betta advance ya albums and mixtapes
Best believe Iím getting mine whether it be tomorrow or this day
Nigga I been waitin for my chance to shine, my chance to pop
I swear to God I aint gon stop until I get to the top
I see it, I want it, Im comin fuh that
I been patiently waitin now gimmie them stats
Everybody put ya hands up like a hold up
Thatís what them otha rappers be sayin, well when do I get to blow up?
Naw betta than that, when do I get to start blowin out?
I aint showin talent, Im just showin out! (showin out)"

I Tried Getting The Best Quotable From The 1st Verse But! The Whole Verse Was Very Good, Altho Advancing Our Albums And Mixtapes? I'll Rival You On That My Friend...Other Than That Glad To See You Ambition To Be The Best With Your First Verse


Your Second Offering Was The Same As Your First, I felt Like You'r Repeating Yourself In Messaging

"I swear to G-O-D you niggaz gonna rememba my name
Man I aint even gotta remind yall how far I done came"

I Believe Your Still Part Of Tha Untouchables With A Album Still In The Works.
The Only Problem Is....Your Activity And Ambition To Complete A Project.
Like You Say On Making Us Remember Your Name, Well...Give Us Consistency.

"Im like Mr. T, I pity the fool that steps to me"

No! Forced An Ol' Joke On The Youth Era Up In Here, I Don't Think These Youngsters Know Who Mr. T Is.

On Your Third Verse It Was Good To Rival Your 1st Aside The Mr T Line

"Yea im a young nigga, only got fourteen years
But you aint gotta be old to be grown, the fuck I got to fear?"

That Right There Was Woah!:eazy:

Final Opinion On Your Track, It Was Okay And It Matched The Vibe To Luda's Song, I Enjoyed The Read And Was Not Bored...Let's See More Of Your Consistency On The Forums Rtaher Than Just Songs Here And There..

U-Gang!


This Track Gets A......3 1/2 Out Of 5

Ttown MC
01-05-2007, 08:26 PM
would break it down but it was simple to me, not much depth in your writeing if its keystyled then ill understand the simplicity in this drop....try going a little more with your skills tho...an aihgt track overall 5/10 ish id give it. keep tryin

Cap
01-06-2007, 05:43 AM
You've Stepped Up Alot, Keep Making Good Music, Do A Text LP Or Something

lilsam
01-06-2007, 10:39 AM
Yeh word^^^^

Nice rap, would be better audio IMO

Lil' Infamous
01-06-2007, 03:01 PM
yea, this would be one of the first tracks i'd put to audio if i could. i wasnt really goin for lyricism on this one. it was more of a returning to my roots track cuz i aint start out with lyricism, i sorta grew into it.
thanx fo da feed

BlackStar
01-06-2007, 09:49 PM
I agree with Ttown here! was very simple...try to put some punches in it, more wordplays and similes! I think you know how to do it cause I saw better stuff by you befrore.

keep it up!

Cap
01-07-2007, 01:04 AM
No Fluxx Feed.

Lil' Infamous
01-07-2007, 03:41 PM
is there ever for me? lol