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lilsam
12-22-2006, 08:26 PM
Artist:Lilsam
Album:The Portrait


Crack In His Hand, A Man Approaching, Buys A Bag And Quickly-Leaves
And Even Thought He Wasn't A Killer, Wasn't In A Click-With-Thieves....
It Felt So Wrong, But Kids Were Living Off Food Past Sell-By-Date
And This Man A Soldier At Heart, Helping Kids, Thinking 'Hell-My-Fate'
On The Cold Streets, Kids With Uncleaned Sheets, Living Off Adversity
When His Precious Asked What He Doing, He Said 'Don't Be Observing-Me'
Not Because He Wanted Her Gone, Didn't Want Her To See-His-Good-Willing-Sins
But Never Once Did He Boast, Never Acted A Gee..His-Hood-Killing-To-Win
Never Laid A Hand On Nobody, No Wife To Help, Just Him And His Reason-To-Live
Didn't Spend The Money On His Own Pleasure, No Leisure, Just Treason-To-Give
No Real Jobs, Didn't Go To School, Poverty Always-Been-An-Opposition
And Throughout His Life And Different Locations, Always-Seen-Decomposition
Looked Into A Mans Eyes As He Died, Tears Swelled, Man Had A Heart-Attack
Seen A Man Depart-A-Back, From Seeing Crack Babies To Actually Carting-Crack
And That Was The Whole Problem, A Women Asked For Crack-And-He-Cried
He Didn't Sell It And Decided To Quit, A Job In A Dainty Shack-He-Applied
As He Settled Into A New Routine, Happy, He Winced As He Saw-an-Addict
Demanded Some Crack, 'I Got None', They Beat Him Up, Four-Of-Them-At-It
He Felt A Piercing Blow Inflitate His Spine, Been Stabbed, Knew-He-Was-Dying
They Ran, Kids Came In Flying, “We've Come To Visit You, Who-Left-You Crying?”
“Some Bad Men, I Love You Both, Come Kiss Me”, They Didnt Understand-His-Tears
Noticed Blood On Their Hands As They Hugged, Now They Could Apphrehend-His-Fears
“Bye, I Love You Kids Forever”, And Through The Force Of Tears They Replied Sadly
“I Love You Too, You Like A Soldier”, He Slouched Dead, “Who Killed My Daddy?”

(Hook)
Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity
They Live On

I Am In The Trenches, Gun In My Hand, Life In My Grasp, Refusing To Drop-It
As I Held A Gun, A Man At Mercy, Saw Myself In An Enermy..Couldn't Pop-It
We Looked Deep Into Each Others Eyes, Gun Facing Each-Of-Our-Heads
Both Holding Guns, Finger On The Triggers, Shoot? Or Reach-For-Their-Lead
Try And Steal His Artillery? So We Both Lived? No Words Just Concentration
Must Focus On The Enermy With Concentration, UK v Germans, Felt Like Same-Nation
As His Enermy Wept, I Shared The Tears, My Leader Called “Kill Him Or I Will!”
I Picked Up My Weaponery Feeling Ill, Heard A Pop, Struck My Arm, 'Still-He-Goes-To-Kill?”
The Man Who Wept In Front Of Me Shot Me, But I Knew He Had-To-Pop
My Weak Arm Started To Flop, But I Fired Back, I'd Be Surely Mad-To-Stop
I Shot Him In His Chest Consecutively, As He Stopped Breathing He-Looked-Me-In The-Eye
Collapsing, He Leaned Up, Gasping For Air, Amazingly He Shook-Me- I-Wondered-Why
He Let Out A Weak Smile, “Do Yourself Proud, Friend” Before He Stopped-Breathing
By Then My Arm Was Seething, He Encouraged Me, So Swiftly I Popped-Believing
As I Pulled Each Trigger I Thought Of The Man's Final Words, With 'Friend'-Repeating
And His Inspiring Attitude Transpired Into My Gun, Desperately Trying To Defend-A-Beating
My Arms Pain Was Lessened, My Strength Of Heart Helped Soothed-The-Pain
But As A Shot Entered My Chest, The New Danger Swiftly Removed-The-Gain
Death Was Staring Me In The Face, As I Fell To The Floor, Mixing Face-With-Grit
I Realised My Loss Wouldn't Be Detrimental, Because They Could Replace-My-Hit
I Grasped The Floor, A Stone Was In My Hand, Slipped Away, Like My Survival-Grasp
I Was Desperately Desperately In Need Of Treatment To Save Me, Needed An Arrival-Fast
But It Never Came, I Started To Go Dizzy, Dozens Of Thoughts Ringing-In-My-Ears
But One That Stood Out, From My Late Father, Was “ Remember The Stining-Off-The-Tears”

(Hook)
Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity...
They Live On

lilsam
12-23-2006, 05:13 AM
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yung Kanon
12-23-2006, 06:10 AM
deep good topic executed well loads of multis, i dont like the hook i can see what your looking for though lots of quality lines but sam lots of multis isnt good for me in a drop like this, and uve used lots of little questions to fill up ya lines, defo prefered second verse overall about 8/10

POC Was Here
12-23-2006, 07:30 AM
No Replay Value Huh?
Your Marketing Is Rookie.
Just Curious Sam, When Are You Planning To Drop "The Portrait"?

By The Way.......

FUCK ALL Y'ALL 12/25/06

Dude, Shut The Fuck Up.

Seriously, You Contribute Nothing To This Place, You Show Up Once In A Blue Moon, Mouth Off For No Reason And Always Try Ressurect A Crew That's Been Dead.

Talking Slick At Sam Cause He Shit All Over Kill4Hire, You's A Hooooooo

lilsam
12-23-2006, 12:08 PM
Focus sucks Ballz

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12-23-2006, 12:27 PM
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lilsam
12-23-2006, 01:18 PM
uppin dickhuggers
only 1 feed
fuck off

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12-23-2006, 01:21 PM
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12-23-2006, 01:32 PM
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JaTahChild01
12-23-2006, 01:41 PM
hey man I gotta pull a 8-9 hour work day today. I dont wanna leave u quick feed cuz ik u said u put alot into this so I''ll try and get u feed tongiht when i get home.

lilsam
12-23-2006, 07:41 PM
omg i gettin mad now
been uppin 4 ages

Ttown MC
12-23-2006, 07:46 PM
ill leave some feed later mayne, try leavin feed in other ppls threads an theyll return the favor lilsam

lilsam
12-23-2006, 07:48 PM
i do but nobody does
so i stopped

lilsam
12-23-2006, 08:19 PM
back 2 the top of threads

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12-23-2006, 08:33 PM
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lilsam
12-23-2006, 08:47 PM
fuck all of u lol oj oj

lilsam
12-23-2006, 08:47 PM
i need 4 more comments 2 save this drop and the portait. if not im sticking 2 diss tracks n collabz

Ttown MC
12-23-2006, 08:55 PM
Shits good LIl SAM, well executed an its very easy to tell you put a lot of work into this. Your no bagz but your not half bad with the story telling type shit...keep up sam. 8/10



Now shut hte hell up with your bitchin lol

lilsam
12-23-2006, 08:56 PM
no Bagz? i aint based on him. imo chopz is also up there as best with him

Summer_heat
12-24-2006, 11:01 AM
minus all the shit u said on msn, i wanted to read this anyways n im happy i did, been awhile i aint seen a trak from u witout wordplay, n my god did i love it!

i cant say i can compare this to Eyes shit, cos his stuff is usually more personal, n even when it aint theres a hint of him in it, u have great story tellin abilty none the less, like how u put urself in a solider n a grown mans shoes, which u showed a great essence in doin so, as in, u made the storys realistic especially the second verse. some of ur multis at time seemed forced when u was doin-the-thising lol, but other than that im well chuffed wit this drop! do agree its up there as one of ur best!

POC Was Here
12-24-2006, 11:21 AM
Stop Comparing Dude To Eyebagz, They're 2 Completely Different Artists And Their Styles Are Different.

Summer_heat
12-24-2006, 11:39 AM
thats what i meant! :(
ps. tut tut tut, wheres ur feed?

POC Was Here
12-24-2006, 11:43 AM
thats what i meant! :(
ps. tut tut tut, wheres ur feed?

I Haven't Had A Chance To Read It Properly, I'm Watching "Ghetto Fights" On Youtube...... Shit Is Vicious :laugh:

Nickolai
12-24-2006, 12:05 PM
spose ur watching kimbo fight lol

Sparx
12-25-2006, 01:16 AM
FUCK ALL Y'ALL 12/25/06

With The Hit Single Already Out!

3 Kings Feat: Soldiers Of Christ
http://www.murderinc-online.com/usforum/showthread.php?t=24385

Tha Untouchables 07'....Get Ready!

lol... we've been ready since '05... ur the one whos having trouble executing

Sparx
12-25-2006, 01:25 AM
Crack In His Hand, A Man Approaching, Buys A Bag And Quickly-Leaves
And Even Thought He Wasn't A Killer, Wasn't In A Click-With-Thieves....
It Felt So Wrong, But Kids Were Living Off Food Past Sell-By-Date
And This Man A Soldier At Heart, Helping Kids, Thinking 'Hell-My-Fate'
nice opener, but the second bar was meh...
On The Cold Streets, Kids With Uncleaned Sheets, Living Off Adversity
When His Precious Asked What He Doing, He Said 'Don't Be Observing-Me'
Not Because He Wanted Her Gone, Didn't Want Her To See-His-Good-Willing-Sins
But Never Once Did He Boast, Never Acted A Gee..His-Hood-Killing-To-Win
Never Laid A Hand On Nobody, No Wife To Help, Just Him And His Reason-To-Live
Didn't Spend The Money On His Own Pleasure, No Leisure, Just Treason-To-Give
No Real Jobs, Didn't Go To School, Poverty Always-Been-An-Opposition
And Throughout His Life And Different Locations, Always-Seen-Decomposition
good multiz and vocab, but ur kinda saying the same shit over and over again, we get it, hes broke, and ur flow is kinda off
Looked Into A Mans Eyes As He Died, Tears Swelled, Man Had A Heart-Attack
Seen A Man Depart-A-Back, From Seeing Crack Babies To Actually Carting-Crack
And That Was The Whole Problem, A Women Asked For Crack-And-He-Cried
He Didn't Sell It And Decided To Quit, A Job In A Dainty Shack-He-Applied
As He Settled Into A New Routine, Happy, He Winced As He Saw-an-Addict
Demanded Some Crack, 'I Got None', They Beat Him Up, Four-Of-Them-At-It
He Felt A Piercing Blow Inflitate His Spine, Been Stabbed, Knew-He-Was-Dying
They Ran, Kids Came In Flying, “We've Come To Visit You, Who-Left-You Crying?”
“Some Bad Men, I Love You Both, Come Kiss Me”, They Didnt Understand-His-Tears
Noticed Blood On Their Hands As They Hugged, Now They Could Apphrehend-His-Fears
“Bye, I Love You Kids Forever”, And Through The Force Of Tears They Replied Sadly
“I Love You Too, You Like A Soldier”, He Slouched Dead, “Who Killed My Daddy?”
there we go, u flipped it and u progressed the plot, nice content sam, final bar was a nice touch lol kinda ironic
(Hook)
Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity
They Live On

I Am In The Trenches, Gun In My Hand, Life In My Grasp, Refusing To Drop-It
As I Held A Gun, A Man At Mercy, Saw Myself In An Enermy..Couldn't Pop-It
We Looked Deep Into Each Others Eyes, Gun Facing Each-Of-Our-Heads
Both Holding Guns, Finger On The Triggers, Shoot? Or Reach-For-Their-Lead
Try And Steal His Artillery? So We Both Lived? No Words Just Concentration
Must Focus On The Enermy With Concentration, UK v Germans, Felt Like Same-Nation
As His Enermy Wept, I Shared The Tears, My Leader Called “Kill Him Or I Will!”
I Picked Up My Weaponery Feeling Ill, Heard A Pop, Struck My Arm, 'Still-He-Goes-To-Kill?”
The Man Who Wept In Front Of Me Shot Me, But I Knew He Had-To-Pop
My Weak Arm Started To Flop, But I Fired Back, I'd Be Surely Mad-To-Stop
I Shot Him In His Chest Consecutively, As He Stopped Breathing He-Looked-Me-In The-Eye
Collapsing, He Leaned Up, Gasping For Air, Amazingly He Shook-Me- I-Wondered-Why
He Let Out A Weak Smile, “Do Yourself Proud, Friend” Before He Stopped-Breathing
By Then My Arm Was Seething, He Encouraged Me, So Swiftly I Popped-Believing
As I Pulled Each Trigger I Thought Of The Man's Final Words, With 'Friend'-Repeating
And His Inspiring Attitude Transpired Into My Gun, Desperately Trying To Defend-A-Beating
My Arms Pain Was Lessened, My Strength Of Heart Helped Soothed-The-Pain
But As A Shot Entered My Chest, The New Danger Swiftly Removed-The-Gain
Death Was Staring Me In The Face, As I Fell To The Floor, Mixing Face-With-Grit
I Realised My Loss Wouldn't Be Detrimental, Because They Could Replace-My-Hit
I Grasped The Floor, A Stone Was In My Hand, Slipped Away, Like My Survival-Grasp
I Was Desperately Desperately In Need Of Treatment To Save Me, Needed An Arrival-Fast
But It Never Came, I Started To Go Dizzy, Dozens Of Thoughts Ringing-In-My-Ears
But One That Stood Out, From My Late Father, Was “ Remember The Stining-Off-The-Tears”
very good verse sam, i like, flow was good, multiz were nice and the content was well told, a better verse than the first
(Hook)
Lets Recognise These Heroes And Never Forget Their Giving
Lets Use These Troops As Idols, Inspired By Them And Their Living
Fighting A Long Lost Cause, Or Staring Death Face To Face In Wars
Trying To Act As A Hero For Eternity, As New Life Springs In A Maternity...
They Live On

good drop sam, u hav a nice concept here, but u did kinda repeat ur self a bit in the first verse, great drop still... my score: 8.9, just away from a monster, nice work sam keep elevating...

:smokin:

Eyebagz
12-25-2006, 08:56 AM
like sparx said first verse repeats abit buts still good. Second verse is much better. i wouldnt call it the best youve ever done.

And focus what the fuck was all that

Focus
12-25-2006, 06:30 PM
like sparx said first verse repeats abit buts still good. Second verse is much better. i wouldnt call it the best youve ever done.

And focus what the fuck was all that

I'm Advertising.........Observe.

Summer_heat
12-25-2006, 06:40 PM
not for long, post ur darn drops n advertse in ur own threads, cos i will be deleting them or else. give feed on this drop or dont post.

POC Was Here
12-26-2006, 10:04 AM
Delete Focus' "Advertisements" The Cocksucker's Far Too Annoying.

Flash
12-26-2006, 03:29 PM
Delete Focus' "Advertisements" The Cocksucker's Far Too Annoying.

yeah delete that motherfucker yeah!:eazy: :eazy: