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JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 01:58 AM
Im feeling this is like a Main-event type shit right here. I aint got a whole lotta time this week with a few exams, work and all the xmas bullshit so Im hoping u can get a verse together quick cuz the back end of the week is gon be rough for me.

anyways, heres ma rules:

8 bar min
12 max
2 bar leeway either way cuz i respect u and wont bitch about over or under bars

3 straight=KO
5 total=win

Votes Must be on at least 7 of 11 catergories

goodluck

Duke
12-19-2006, 08:04 PM
Checc. DIs..
No Hate B...
I jus got 2 do wat I got 2 do...

Haha.....



Nigga Da Treys'll-Dump N Graze-Ya-Fronts! Cuz My Plays-Amaze-Dis-Punk!
I'lll Spray-DIs-Cunt, Cuz Duke'll "Put Out J'S-FLAMe" Like Im Tryna Save-My-Blunt!

Dukes Here, So Please-Quit, Cuz Niggaz N Even U Know My Free's-Sick Git dis G-HIT!!
Da Heat'll Make U Bleed-Quick n Hollow Tips'll "Pause/Paws" On Ya Chest Sorta Like Eves-Tits!
{Damnnnn Nigga}


Cut Ya Body In-2-Proportions! Odin? He My Nigga But My Lyrics-Distort-Him!
He Fear-my-Preformance! N Imma Kill dis "CHILD" Like Gettin-an-ABORTION!

Yo, I Really Hate 2 Merk-Dis-Jerk! Have U Lurk-in-Dirt, Cuz My process Iz Focus Den Assert-n-Squirt!
My Verse Hurt-Ya-Work!! cuz as far as 'Text' U Missin da Required "A-Bill-a-Tees" Like Charges 4 Purchased-Shirts!!


U can Get Beat-Dawg, Cuz u kno I Speak-Raw Shake wen I Send da Heat-Dawg!
Lines Get ya Teeth-Gnawed! Cuz U Know "D iS Known To 'Stop J'' Like Blocked SHots In Street-Ball!!

Odin, Ya Writes-is-Played! I Ignite-da-Page.. wit my Typin-Ways! Flow? U cant even Ride-a-Wave!
Pussy Nigga.. U aint Fightin-Brave! u not as 'Ill As U Claim' like 'HypoChrondriacs' Who think dey Survived-Thru-AIDS!


My fists Pound-Face Hits Trounce-Fakes! So 4 dis CLowns-Sake I Blow Clips Round-Eights!!
Im Pissed Now-Jake! So I'll Cut ya "Fee-Myrrh in Half" Like "Purchasin Incense @ a Discount-Rate!!"
{Femur WOW.]

Punches? I Hit-Like-Hopkins Venomous Killa Spittin-TOxic, N DanYa Limbs-Popped-Kid!
Ma Clips-Pop-Quick.. And Duke is "Quick To OWN THIS CHILD" Like Quick-Adoptions!

Ill Make U Suffer frum AMounts-Of-Greed, I Doubt-ya-Steez! Get Pounced-wit-EaZe!
Odin.. Trounced-wit-Speed N Watch me 'Flip "O" In Seconds' like cum-ups wit an Ounce-Of-Weed!!
[OMFG]

BRIEF EXPLANATIONS
His Username Is JahtahChild.... So thats where the child/Kid Concepts come from and also the J/Blunt also....
And his other name of course is ODIN....


++EZ++

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 08:12 PM
History Im reciting-BWS Calls me “Holyfield” cuz in the “ring” I expose ya for your “bitin”
“Salt” ya game, Its “Gandhi” Im fightin- Murdered in the “A&M” ur 2 “young” 2 be a “titan”
MIO is mine so I’ll take my “corner-back”~Talk is cheap so I “spit it 2 ya face” like Owens
Attach tampons to mics when hes “flowin”-“cant see you” in battle cuz u simply protazoins
Best get a vest-son-Steal ya name, cuz Im “The Duke” getting “Wild-wit-the-Wesson”
Threads is boring only “readers” u get is “Digest-son”-”Bullets in ya chest only thing ur “IN-Vest-in”
Judges known I won I don’t need “24 seconds”,This battle is just me “Killing-Time” on “Shot-Clocks”
Im an “Urban-Legend” like Cola and Pop-Rocks-Flows “current” is so strong I could even “shock-rocks”
Exposed 4 biting like I cant turn the Page-back-Musta been smoking “trees” to try to take me for “A-Sap”
Ima show them what U-R Buy a vowel for my A-R, 2 leave ya in the O-R & da E-R,some1 call “Sajak”
Its no “Game”~My “bars” beyond ya “amplitude” of “micro-waves” so let Duke “Nuke-em”
Only “tracks” you “spitting” is intestinal as my punches force u to Puke-em
Your “heat” is “MIA” like “D-Wade”-Your moms is like “TracFone” cuz I can get em both “Pre-Paid”
Apply the vice & Clamps to Sqeeze-fades-“Wesley Snipes” movies the only time he Sees-Blades
Needs to be a army for there 2 Be -“bhgraides”-Its “magic” to me how a virgin can conceive-“aids”
You’d be “bananas” to find his work “Ape-Pealing”-Punches end up with more “fans” than a “ceiling”
Ballistics leave ya brain “leftout” like “3rd wheeling”- Cut u at da wrists to see the “hand-ur-dealing”
Fuck ya title, I’ll “Break”-ya-“hard-core” like u had “ABS” Punches leave ya “wheelin”
Now he’s reeling-“snatch the gold” off ya waste and the “judges” “Gimme a hand” for “stealin”

lilsam
12-19-2006, 08:13 PM
wow
wow
wow

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 08:14 PM
if explanations are needed ask i dont wanna waste time andi nsult nigga duke by brekaing down my every line.

Good luck my ninja, this prolly my toughest battle to date, vote up my peoples.

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 08:18 PM
loving the Eve line, but My closer was crisp man...ABS breakin systems and abbs. Gon be a great battle.

also my bad, it looks like we both got terrell owens punches, hopefully you know i aint bite this cuz we dropped to quick

Summer_heat
12-19-2006, 08:54 PM
i will vote soon, but jus wanted to ask u a question Jatah, on ur first line, is that a personal? jus cos i dont get it n it might be sumet to do wit the past:

History Im reciting-BWS Calls me “Holyfield” cuz in the “ring” I expose ya for your “bitin”

i get the Holyfield wordplay wit the bitten ear, but whats wit BWS?

lilsam
12-19-2006, 08:59 PM
duke exposed alldgedy on bws 4 bitin
now known as bull

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 11:50 PM
yes its a personal. i dont believe it to be true which is why i asked duke to come here and be active on MIO because i iddnt believe it but none the less he was accused so i used it

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 01:29 AM
Fuckin votes.....

Sparx
12-20-2006, 02:34 AM
Nigga Da Treys'll-Dump N Graze-Ya-Fronts! Cuz My Plays-Amaze-Dis-Punk!
I'lll Spray-DIs-Cunt, Cuz Duke'll "Put Out J'S-FLAMe" Like Im Tryna Save-My-Blunt!

ok opener, good punch at the end

Dukes Here, So Please-Quit, Cuz Niggaz N Even U Know My Free's-Sick Git dis G-HIT!!
Da Heat'll Make U Bleed-Quick n Hollow Tips'll "Pause/Paws" On Ya Chest Sorta Like Eves-Tits!

lol nice

Cut Ya Body In-2-Proportions! Odin? He My Nigga But My Lyrics-Distort-Him!
He Fear-my-Preformance! N Imma Kill dis "CHILD" Like Gettin-an-ABORTION!

good

Yo, I Really Hate 2 Merk-Dis-Jerk! Have U Lurk-in-Dirt, Cuz My process Iz Focus Den Assert-n-Squirt!
My Verse Hurt-Ya-Work!! cuz as far as 'Text' U Missin da Required "A-Bill-a-Tees" Like Charges 4 Purchased-Shirts!!
U can Get Beat-Dawg, Cuz u kno I Speak-Raw Shake wen I Send da Heat-Dawg!
Lines Get ya Teeth-Gnawed! Cuz U Know "D iS Known To 'Stop J'' Like Blocked SHots In Street-Ball!!

this was ok, but ur flow is good

Odin, Ya Writes-is-Played! I Ignite-da-Page.. wit my Typin-Ways! Flow? U cant even Ride-a-Wave!
Pussy Nigga.. U aint Fightin-Brave! u not as 'Ill As U Claim' like 'HypoChrondriacs' Who think dey Survived-Thru-AIDS!
lol very good

My fists Pound-Face Hits Trounce-Fakes! So 4 dis CLowns-Sake I Blow Clips Round-Eights!!
Im Pissed Now-Jake! So I'll Cut ya "Fee-Myrrh in Half" Like "Purchasin Incense @ a Discount-Rate!!"
Punches? I Hit-Like-Hopkins Venomous Killa Spittin-TOxic, N DanYa Limbs-Popped-Kid!
Ma Clips-Pop-Quick.. And Duke is "Quick To OWN THIS CHILD" Like Quick-Adoptions!

nice wordplay. i would said Fast-Adoptions, cuz u used quick b4, but good shit

Ill Make U Suffer frum AMounts-Of-Greed, I Doubt-ya-Steez! Get Pounced-wit-EaZe!
Odin.. Trounced-wit-Speed N Watch me 'Flip "O" In Seconds' like cum-ups wit an Ounce-Of-Weed!!

i didnt really like ur closer



overall a great battle verse, good multiz, and some good punches, the only real weakenesses wer the opener and closer, i think they coulda been harder... nice verse tho Duke



History Im reciting-BWS Calls me “Holyfield” cuz in the “ring” I expose ya for your “bitin”
thats a nice opener, and a good personal

“Salt” ya game, Its “Gandhi” Im fightin- Murdered in the “A&M” ur 2 “young” 2 be a “titan”
MIO is mine so I’ll take my “corner-back”~Talk is cheap so I “spit it 2 ya face” like Owens
Attach tampons to mics when hes “flowin”-“cant see you” in battle cuz u simply protazoins
Best get a vest-son-Steal ya name, cuz Im “The Duke” getting “Wild-wit-the-Wesson”
Threads is boring only “readers” u get is “Digest-son”-”Bullets in ya chest only thing ur “IN-Vest-in”
flow seems kinda off, but the multis and the punches r solid

Judges known I won I don’t need “24 seconds”,This battle is just me “Killing-Time” on “Shot-Clocks”
Im an “Urban-Legend” like Cola and Pop-Rocks-Flows “current” is so strong I could even “shock-rocks”
that was ok...

Exposed 4 biting like I cant turn the Page-back-Musta been smoking “trees” to try to take me for “A-Sap”
Ima show them what U-R Buy a vowel for my A-R, 2 leave ya in the O-R & da E-R,some1 call “Sajak”
:huh: sap coming from trees right? im lost on the other...

Its no “Game”~My “bars” beyond ya “amplitude” of “micro-waves” so let Duke “Nuke-em”
Only “tracks” you “spitting” is intestinal as my punches force u to Puke-em
Your “heat” is “MIA” like “D-Wade”-Your moms is like “TracFone” cuz I can get em both “Pre-Paid”
Apply the vice & Clamps to Sqeeze-fades-“Wesley Snipes” movies the only time he Sees-Blades
Needs to be a army for there 2 Be -“bhgraides”-Its “magic” to me how a virgin can conceive-“aids”
You’d be “bananas” to find his work “Ape-Pealing”-Punches end up with more “fans” than a “ceiling”
Ballistics leave ya brain “leftout” like “3rd wheeling”- Cut u at da wrists to see the “hand-ur-dealing”
Fuck ya title, I’ll “Break”-ya-“hard-core” like u had “ABS” Punches leave ya “wheelin”
Now he’s reeling-“snatch the gold” off ya waste and the “judges” “Gimme a hand” for “stealin”
O the begining of ur verse was kinda weak, but u just went TURN IT UP... and took off, punches wer sick, flow was slick and the multiz wer nice, good metaz too


this was a slow start but a great finish... time for cats...

Opener: Odin
Closer: Tie
Structure: Odin
Flow: Duke
Creativity: Duke
Personalz: Odin
Vocab: Odin
Mutliz: Duke
Metaz: Tie
Wordplay: Duke

Odin: 6
Duke: 5

Vote: Odin
But just barely... Dukes verse was sick, but Odin just turned it up to flip it his way barely... great battle tho n Duke is spittin serious heat lately....
:Yayo:

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 02:52 AM
thanks

the line u asked about is a reference too wheel of fortune...the host of it is Pat Sajak.I Mentioned "buying a vowel" and added vowels to R
AR-gun
UR-you are
ER-emergency room
OR-operating room
notice the vowels i used?

Yes tree sap and its a figure of speak to take someone for a sap or take them for a fool.

Sparx
12-20-2006, 04:38 AM
thanks

the line u asked about is a reference too wheel of fortune...the host of it is Pat Sajak.I Mentioned "buying a vowel" and added vowels to R
AR-gun
UR-you are
ER-emergency room
OR-operating room
notice the vowels i used?

Yes tree sap and its a figure of speak to take someone for a sap or take them for a fool.

i got the tree sap line i just couldnt believe u'd use it lol... ooo ok i c what u mean with the pick a vowel... yea i never watch wheel of fortune

Summer_heat
12-20-2006, 11:00 AM
i would vote but "R U Serious ?"....








jus doin my job as mod =)

Summer_heat
12-20-2006, 11:15 AM
oh, no ur Tha Duke, jus realised!

anyways, theres no need to vote no more.

Odin wins by DQ of Duke.

reason, if needed, (cos i am a good trustworthy mod):

http://www.itshiphop.com/showthread.php?t=74503

check the "R U Serious ?" verse. similarity is great. maybe its a real big coincidence... but maybe...

any more proof needed?

http://www.itshiphop.com/showthread.php?t=75712

u might have to sign in for this one, but its a pretty good "sum it all up", i wud reccomend checkin it out.

http://rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/about42496.html?sid=d87da79d0e8a6fcddec04cfab7de6b 08

Summer_heat
12-20-2006, 11:20 AM
cmon its a classic deathrow "EXPOSED" thread, lol, wheres my award?

lilsam
12-20-2006, 11:23 AM
Served .

POC Was Here
12-20-2006, 11:24 AM
God Damn.......

lilsam
12-20-2006, 11:37 AM
duke
R
I
P

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 11:41 AM
I'll wait for Duke to respond before I do. Dude has been cool to me and I owe him a chance to explain himself before jumping all down someones throat, so upping for duke i spose.

Thanks summer

Leon Fluxx
12-20-2006, 11:43 AM
WTF DUKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I JUST ALLOWED U TO JOIN THE COMMISSION.. Trusting dat u were real. i didnt believe tha biting at first.. I cant believe u did dat shit to me.. acceptin my offer den i say "naw u probably didnt bite.. cuz when i first came on niggaz thought i was skilow" and i gave u dat speech thinkin u would neva get exposed again.. but u did.. FUCK!!!!!.. i really wanted him in da commissoin.. Who's he biting off.. i'll scoop him up lol..

wait in the thread it says "the duke" maybe its him.. just recyclin his shit..[/

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 11:44 AM
lol I'll still take votes on this for whoever Im battling, its all about competition to me. if it aint duke then iight but still gettin mad views and opinions so lemme know, maybe not full cats or anything but an opinion is always nice.

Leon Fluxx
12-20-2006, 11:46 AM
Imma vote.. imma get some early morning pussy right quic.. figga deal.. holla..

jinder
12-20-2006, 12:26 PM
in tha 2nd link it shows "the duke" is biting in another battle
its the same site from where tha lines in this battle have come from
so he cant be "r u serious" cus hes prolly called "the duke" on that site, which he has been caught bitin on
to me looks clear hes biting
i dont even know dude, how cud yall not realise?
lmao at summers EXPOSED!
gud work miss mod lol

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 03:11 PM
I think it'd be hard to call him a biter cuz he has a very specific style of writing ya know? Thats a reason i wouldnt have guessed cuz itd be hard to re-work things into his structure ect.

LIL-LATINO MC
12-20-2006, 03:27 PM
this an good battle

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 03:28 PM
then vote^

Whether duke was a biter or not someone wrote that verse and I def wrote mine so I dont want it going to waste, I want at least some kinda vote even if yall wont gimme catz

Leon Fluxx
12-20-2006, 05:41 PM
Opener - Odin wit da bite line
Mutlis - Duke
Flow - Tie
Punches - Odin
Metaphors - Tie He had a eve line dat was hot
Wordplay - Odin
Vocab - Odin
Strucutre - Odin
Closer - Odin

Odin killed it.. even if Duke didnt get caught.. He still lost.. this is my break down..

Holla

k.o.
Odin kills it...

Leon Fluxx
12-20-2006, 05:47 PM
in tha 2nd link it shows "the duke" is biting in another battle
its the same site from where tha lines in this battle have come from
so he cant be "r u serious" cus hes prolly called "the duke" on that site, which he has been caught bitin on
to me looks clear hes biting
i dont even know dude, how cud yall not realise?
lmao at summers EXPOSED!
gud work miss mod lol



Wait let me get this.. In the second link.. Its shows duke.. thats not him on another site???.. Thats his battle verse against da otha nigga in his battle.. U saying he reused da verse.. Thats recyclin not biting if u say that..

I can realize cuz its his name.. he might just be recyclin his battle verse.. Whos he stealin it from.. HIMSELF??.. i dunno if im wrong give me alil info jinder.. i dunno.. trying to figure this all out

jinder
12-20-2006, 07:17 PM
lol ok ill try it again
duke from mio has bit lines in his battle against odin from some1 called R U serious from itshiphop
on tha site itshiphop there is a member called the duke, he has a battle wit some1 on that site, but tha lines he used r stolen from some1 else, they "expose" him
n tha last link u can see where duke has stole from several diff sites in several diff battles
he hasnt reused any lines he has bit off otha ppl

did that help?
basically tha site he has bit lines from to go against odin that site already xposed him for bitin
ery site has him down fo bitin
mio tha last to know it seems

i really dont know him but from links summer gave theres no doubt he aint a biter, theres too many links

btw on tha 3rd link it shows he even stolen audio shit!

Leon Fluxx
12-20-2006, 07:42 PM
yea, i didnt know what lyrics.. cuz i dont remember everyones lyrics.,.thanks though..