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JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 01:35 AM
8 bar min
12 max

No biting,feeding,recycling

All votes must be catergorical on at least 7 of the 11 catergories.

3=KO
5=win

Good Luck

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 01:36 AM
I use “Graphs-2-fight” intelligence! Load clips of #2’s You cant blow “lead”
Snatchin purses, ganked ya street ‘cred”- Call ya illness “butter” cuz that’s all u spread
extort ya “text” career leave bullets laced in ya ‘threads”-obituaries da same as ya work~unread
leave ma verse on ya cranium 2 give ya some “headnotes”- judges leave wut I said-n-quotes
Vocals shred-throats-Ya like “gore” in Florida Im winning no matter if you “led-votes”
“The Heat” leaves “3” in his chest and ya dead, no clue why this “boy-Wonders”
I enjoy plunders-Don’t forget Im a GOD, so much power I can Unemploy-thunder
15 and aint from the “streets”- ugliness is the only thing you’ll ever “discipled”
Nigga better pray to “God-son” before that auto-rifle-leaves ya voice stifled
I don’t fuck with minor leaguers if u beat me there will be no “re-BUTTLE”
Hands hold no heat cuz hes got a “bad-Mitton”, his mouth is the “Cocks-shuttle”
This kids just a bit-slow-You’ll never “Rain” on this board all Im seeing is “SNOW”
Make no “Mistake”,Only pussy he ever saw was in Word when he “Typed-O”
Steal ya fortune like J did to dash-Once I leave you “exposed” theres no need for a “flash”
Lyrics still lash-This aint a “game-Boy” Only battling this kid did was done with “Ash”

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 01:39 AM
theres my verse, its a bit short i dont have much time to write nowadays. Good luck,sorry it took me til early tuesday when i said I'd have it sunday thats my bad.

If any wordplay or punches need explaining please ask.

Flash
12-19-2006, 08:36 AM
Good luck Odin!i will post today!

JaTahChild01
12-19-2006, 08:26 PM
Where you at my friend? lol u was PM me ready to battle wheres ya verse?

Flash
12-20-2006, 04:21 AM
Look who we got here, Odin- the so called "Master"//
Man i think is time for you to retire,your rhymes are disaster//
Damn get a life,look at you! youre in the 20th year//
Maybe 4,5 years older,stronger,but gess what i have no fear//
And whats that Wade shit,you can’t move like me cuz you’re retarded//
Flash moving trough you like “lightning”,my trone is esaly guarded//
You’re not the “God”,stop living in this movie-“Bruce Almighty”//
Don’t tell me bout street’s,cuz they are mine,I run them nightly//
Leave the net for a moment,and get out,let me see you there,can you click?//
In the real life you got to be fast,like me last night, I fucked your ugly chik//
She wanted me to do her,because she was not satisfied from your tiny dick//
Better use your almighty power bout that,not for clicking the net//
You never was and you’ll never be the best,on that shit I can bet//
Death row topical chimpanzee,look at your self-mio’s monkey//
Your voice is shit,your audio sucks,this can be better done by a donkey//
And you got you self in a crew,damn how can they accept you-“The Commisson”//
A jerk who thinks that he is the biggest palyer in this game- this is your deffention//

Flash
12-20-2006, 04:22 AM
sry man i didn't have time i was thinking that we gonna do this in sunday!

Flash
12-20-2006, 04:33 AM
so the voting beguins from now!:D

Flash
12-20-2006, 12:25 PM
I win Odin because you didn't falow the rules 8 bars min!And you diid 7.5 bars!So im very sory man but i win!:D




Just kidding!

BlackStar
12-20-2006, 01:14 PM
opener: Odin (punch, wordplay)
wordplays: Odin (any questions?)
metas/similes: Odin (quality)
personalz: Odin (age, sig, songs, name...)
punches: Odin (see *)
multiz: Odin (multi-syllable ryhming)
flow: Odin
vocab: Odin (no doubt)
closer: Odin

Odin: 9
Flash: 0

Vote for Odin

*best line


This kids just a bit-slow-You’ll never “Rain” on this board all Im seeing is “SNOW”
lol

Sorry Flash...but I told you before that this verse is shit. I guess Odin would have got the fairness to give you one more day to write...he isn't that bad.
Flash, you're a coward in my eyes if you leave the BC now.
Sam was a bitch at the beginning, but he started to learn. He grew up and he battled Fluxx with a verse that could beat many other dudes. Ok he lost but he earned respect. And I have to laugh how you want to teach MAW...I told you how you create a punch yesterday...and your stupid talking about that you are weak and bad is so fucking senseless!!! Whatever...I thought I could help you to improve but like I said, if you don't want it, I can't change it.
and to say sorry that you disappointed me makes no sense cause you disappointed yourself. You give up very fast...
whatever...

1-0 for Odin

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 03:14 PM
thanks 1-0 upping

LIL-LATINO MC
12-20-2006, 03:28 PM
this an good battle

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 03:29 PM
VOTE^ dont clog

lilsam
12-20-2006, 04:56 PM
Sam was a bitch at the beginning, but he started to learn. He grew up and he battled Fluxx with a verse that could beat many other dudes. Ok he lost but he earned respect.

PLOW BAM WADDUP

Summer_heat
12-20-2006, 05:00 PM
Opener: Odin
finisher: Odin ( u talkin bout Pokemon there?!)
Flow: Flash (cos his lines were shorter)
Wordplay: Odin
Multis: Odin
Personals: Odin (more stornger)
structure: tie

Odin: 6
Flash: 2

vote goes to Odin

Lil Latino mc, ur not very productive are u?
if u dont wanna feed r vote why the heck say owt in a thread.
cos ery time i read sumet by u its "this was a good battle" r "this was good" but with whack spellin. sorry maybe im gettin bitchy, but thats how i see it. annoyin.

Flash
12-20-2006, 05:05 PM
opener: Odin (punch, wordplay)
wordplays: Odin (any questions?)
metas/similes: Odin (quality)
personalz: Odin (age, sig, songs, name...)
punches: Odin (see *)
multiz: Odin (multi-syllable ryhming)
flow: Odin
vocab: Odin (no doubt)
closer: Odin

Odin: 9
Flash: 0

Vote for Odin

*best line


lol

Sorry Flash...but I told you before that this verse is shit. I guess Odin would have got the fairness to give you one more day to write...he isn't that bad.
Flash, you're a coward in my eyes if you leave the BC now.
Sam was a bitch at the beginning, but he started to learn. He grew up and he battled Fluxx with a verse that could beat many other dudes. Ok he lost but he earned respect. And I have to laugh how you want to teach MAW...I told you how you create a punch yesterday...and your stupid talking about that you are weak and bad is so fucking senseless!!! Whatever...I thought I could help you to improve but like I said, if you don't want it, I can't change it.
and to say sorry that you disappointed me makes no sense cause you disappointed yourself. You give up very fast...
whatever...

1-0 for Odin

i didn't say that im leaving the battle corner!i just say im leaving the battles till i get better!im going to do one more battle!so peace!

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 10:16 PM
2-0 upping

btw Flash practice makes perfect and I have helped out maybe people in the past year including Nickolai with working on battling so if u needh elp feel free to ask and I will try to help.

JaTahChild01
12-20-2006, 11:45 PM
up for votessss, people are mad slow on this voting process thing

Flash
12-21-2006, 10:21 AM
Its time for you to vote!Come on!:laugh:

BlackStar
12-21-2006, 12:14 PM
i didn't say that im leaving the battle corner!i just say im leaving the battles till i get better!im going to do one more battle!so peace!

[17:40] Flash: R.I.P Flash!but the true souljah never dies!
[17:41] Flash: but only one more battle and im leaving the battle ground!
[17:43] Flash: im leaving the battle ground till im not ready for a come back!

mhh...:roll:

try it Odin but I can't work with people who says that they are shit and they can't write bla bla bla...or starting to teach other new guys...whatever...do your thing Flash...good luck with it. Maybe I'm a bad teacher :unsure:

JaTahChild01
12-21-2006, 12:47 PM
Votessssss

Flash
12-21-2006, 01:19 PM
[17:40] Flash: R.I.P Flash!but the true souljah never dies!
[17:41] Flash: but only one more battle and im leaving the battle ground!
[17:43] Flash: im leaving the battle ground till im not ready for a come back!

mhh...:roll:

try it Odin but I can't work with people who says that they are shit and they can't write bla bla bla...or starting to teach other new guys...whatever...do your thing Flash...good luck with it. Maybe I'm a bad teacher :unsure:

bullshit!by battle ground i meant battles!and shit your not a bad teacher!and yeah im going to do my thing!

Flash
12-21-2006, 01:23 PM
come on im vaiting a enternity for some votes!:D

Sparx
12-21-2006, 02:04 PM
opener: Odin (punch, wordplay)
wordplays: Odin (any questions?)
metas/similes: Odin (quality)
personalz: Odin (age, sig, songs, name...)
punches: Odin (see *)
multiz: Odin (multi-syllable ryhming)
flow: Odin
vocab: Odin (no doubt)
closer: Odin

Odin: 9
Flash: 0

Vote for Odin

*best line


lol

Sorry Flash...but I told you before that this verse is shit. I guess Odin would have got the fairness to give you one more day to write...he isn't that bad.
Flash, you're a coward in my eyes if you leave the BC now.
Sam was a bitch at the beginning, but he started to learn. He grew up and he battled Fluxx with a verse that could beat many other dudes. Ok he lost but he earned respect. And I have to laugh how you want to teach MAW...I told you how you create a punch yesterday...and your stupid talking about that you are weak and bad is so fucking senseless!!! Whatever...I thought I could help you to improve but like I said, if you don't want it, I can't change it.
and to say sorry that you disappointed me makes no sense cause you disappointed yourself. You give up very fast...
whatever...

1-0 for Odin

basically... the same as Star for my vote... no offense Flash, but u wer way outta ur league here... i dono y u even bothered accepting the challenge, but meh u tried keep goin

lilsam
12-21-2006, 02:10 PM
3-0

unlucky flash

JaTahChild01
12-21-2006, 02:14 PM
thanks for thr battle flash i hope to see u keep trying and stick with it.

Flash
12-21-2006, 02:16 PM
damn he showed me what is a good punch!he hit me like cassus clay!lol!nice battle odin!and shit i tryed to do this!and sparx you can tryed do it your self not to quote anyway cool!Peace

JaTahChild01
12-21-2006, 02:20 PM
keep at it man i lost my first battle too
Learn from other peoples work and just practice the shit. You gon need punches ect to win so work on it man

Flash
12-21-2006, 02:24 PM
cool tnx Odin next time ill chalenge you!:D