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lilsam
12-17-2006, 03:29 PM
This The Tale Of Jimmy...
Broken, Pride Has Been Choken, Rocks In His Armchair, Reflecting On Past-Joy
Not Neglected But Dissected From Contact With His Son, His First And Last-Boy
His Former Girlfried Left Him When He Lost His Job, Felt Worthless And Tearful
Fast Lane Too Hectic, Swift Gear-Pull, Reversing Achievements, Of God He Fearful
After The Split, The New Man In Tara's Life Treated Him Like Shit, Texting To Abusive-Calls
And Life Felt Like A Trip In A Hospital, Saw Struggles And Pain In His Conclusive-'Hauls'
His Self Respect Had Been Thrown Away, Every Day He'd Awake To Dreams Of Depression
Tried To Encourage Himself To Join A Clinical Session, But Tiny Pride Made Him Alone Fight Oppression
Kicked Out Of The Home He Once Adored, Belongings Dumped In A Box To Carry To His Brothers
Who Offers Him A Bed With Warm, Comfy Covers, Whilst His Bro And His Girl Act Like Lusting Lovers
He Grows Jealous, Sees Himself In His Brother John, Sees Tara In Gemma, Johns Great-Missus
As He Portrayed Tara With The New Man He Got Mad, As For Tara, He Started To Hate-Viscous
Told John He Felt Grateful, But Became Hateful, Tara Possessing His Dreams, Cruelly Taunting
And In His New Home Could Feel Her Presence Haunting, Because He Found Her New Man Increasingly Daunting

[Hook]
The Tale Of Two Men, With A Gulf In Pride And Fulfillment In Life
A Women With Stunning Beauty Has Created Increasing Strife
Jimmy A Broken Man, Whereas Jason Has Bagged The Ex-Wife
And Now Jimmy, Once A Witty Man, Had His Heart Pierced With A Knife
Split By Tara..

This The Response Of Jason....
Jason, A Lonely Soul, A Lonely Heart, Went To The Club And Saw A Girl With Shattering Appeal
He Spoke To Her Politely, Offered To Go For A Meal, In One Conversation His Heart She Managed To Steal
She Never Mentioned Jimmy, He Never Knew Of His Existence, Thought She Was Single-And-Free
At Home He Had A Repetetive Boring Theme, He Had A Dream, And So Asked Tara: “Would U Mingle-With-Me?”
She Kindly Agreed, They Arranged To Meet At A Cafe, On Arrival She Made Her Intentions-Clear
She Knew Away From The Crowd She Had To Steer, Cos She Knew That From Jim She'd Get Attention-Here
She Ushered In His Ear, His Excitement Matched That Of A Kid On Christmas, Carried-Her-Home
But In Time He Found About Her And Jimmy, Both Had Similar Love, Didn't Know She'd Married-A-Clone
He Knew He Had Competition, Then It Got More Crazy, Because He Found Out She Had A Child
Never Been To Her Home, But He Smiled, Because It Felt So Romantic, The Obstacles Were Wild!
He Won The Battle For Her Heart, In Pride And Estatic Thoughts He Mocked Jimmy, But It Felt Increasingly-Wrong
And Even Though Her Heart Felt Like A Gong, Poor Jimmy's Pride, Will Further Decrease-In-The-Song
Jason And Tara Now Together, They Say Forever, Time Will Tell, Jason Can't Stop Grinning
Loves The Fact That Finally In Something He Winning...Meanwhile..He's At Work...And Tara Is Sinning............

[Hook]
The Tale Of Two Men, With A Gulf In Pride And Fulfillment In Life
A Women With Stunning Beauty Has Created Increasing Strife
Jimmy A Broken Man, Whereas Jason Has Bagged The Ex-Wife
And Now Jimmy, Once A Witty Man, Had His Heart Pierced With A Knife
Split By Tara..

lilsam
12-17-2006, 05:22 PM
bumpin peepz

JaTahChild01
12-17-2006, 11:10 PM
this was pretty good I'll try and get u a full line by line break down if i find time in the next few days

killa4hire
12-17-2006, 11:17 PM
not bad sam not bad

lilsam
12-18-2006, 01:20 PM
thanks
uppin

Flash
12-18-2006, 01:40 PM
damn good song,nice story!nice job sam!Nice flow,multiz,i liked more the first verse better storry!8.5/10