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MAW
12-13-2006, 04:36 PM
Excuse this Rhyme was shit.

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 05:21 PM
lol...no problem! just post it and we can give you some feedback! :cool:

MAW
12-13-2006, 05:28 PM
Yeah I stay for innocent
But if we would do it
We would do it right
are you game or want you just stay tight
His hole person his figure is an example for shame
this mother is a only joke who looks like a man
She wanna protect him that we don't beat him with a coke
If I meet her I gonna Stab her
Pack her in a ditch and throw it over the bridge coz I'ma a packer
That's why I'm respected in the hood
I'm ridin wit my g's bitches and hoes, Mothafucka
This stuff is rather good
It is what father would
want if he'ld be here
Come on Jesus show this snitch what's in my wear
Yeah it is full of murder, blood and money
You think I'm joking but don't think it's funny
Or you will end up like greg
Just don't play wit us
yawl know it we are murderers
and all of you bitches heared of us
Where I stab you I gonna leave you at
You's a homo who's just gay and fat
Yeah It's the one door that we gonna clap.
Greg this is a dangerous life you live it.
You's a eater 4 life
yeah gon' taste this
These are the words spitting from
the barrel of my 45. Get It.

remember: it's just about a snitch and my english isn't the best

MAW
12-13-2006, 05:31 PM
Yo BlackStar you're from Berlin too? Is it the one in Germany?

Flash
12-13-2006, 05:42 PM
Yo BlackStar you're from Berlin too? Is it the one in Germany?

:laugh: :D :laugh: :laugh: i think its in Pakistan!

MAW
12-13-2006, 05:48 PM
There's a berlin in pakistan? It's faar faar away from germany.

Flash
12-13-2006, 05:51 PM
There's a berlin in pakistan? It's faar faar away from germany.

yeah man faar faar away thats why you haven't heard of it!but don't worry now you now!black star is from pakistan

MAW
12-13-2006, 05:55 PM
yeah for sure. I get a lil' scared about him in my hood.:D
just a joke!

Flash
12-13-2006, 05:57 PM
nno man realy his from berlin in pakistan!

Flash
12-13-2006, 05:59 PM
go to www.berlin-pakistan.com and see it

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:01 PM
Yes man i believe it! I know there're some other berlins around the globe. yo dude it's quite late in my country. It's already darkness out there.

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 06:02 PM
Berlin, Germany, that's where I came from!

Born and raised here!

You can holla at me via PM(personal message) or MSN/ICQ

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:04 PM
say man who's your favourite rappers?

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 06:04 PM
say man who's your favourite rappers?

lol guess what...BLACK STAR!!! Talib Kweli and the Mighty Mos Def

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:05 PM
ja rule he is the one

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:05 PM
and black you aren't from pakistan damn why did you lie?

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 06:06 PM
and black you aren't from pakistan damn why did you lie?

tell me once more a liar and you can see who'll help you with your rhymes cause me not! So stop it!

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:06 PM
Flash said pakistan. But it doesn't matter anylonger. Like you read or not I'm born and raised in Berlin, Germany.

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:08 PM
all the time i thought he is from pakistan!damn

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 06:09 PM
MAW, check the shout box or your PMs...won't wait anylonger

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:10 PM
i know it was wrong cuz he got the greatest rhymes and no one from pakistan rap but still i thought that he is from pakistan!

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:11 PM
just stop beefin'

BlackStar
12-13-2006, 06:12 PM
just stop beefin'

lol man, that's def no beef! :laugh:

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:12 PM
black sorry this was like you said that you like to be crazy smotimes!i was doing that peace!

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:15 PM
@BlackStar
of curse no beef

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:16 PM
damn this is funny!lol

Flash
12-13-2006, 06:17 PM
yo maw do you want help? ill help you!

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:23 PM
aye yo flash what do you think. what is good and what is suck ass in my rhymes?

MAW
12-13-2006, 06:26 PM
Yo flash check my rhyme at the bottom. what do you think?

http://www.murderinc-online.com/usforum/t25949-p3-cypher-thread.html

PDM
12-14-2006, 12:00 PM
very good shit MAW, probably the best you ever wrote

Clap doors we gon clap doors

FUCK Freddy Mittelstaedt and his fuckin family!!!

BlackStar
12-14-2006, 12:03 PM
very good shit MAW, probably the best you ever wrote

Clap doors we gon clap doors

FUCK Freddy Mittelstaedt and his fuckin family!!!

??? and who are you?

MAW
12-14-2006, 12:05 PM
I wrote some better for sure

MAW
12-14-2006, 12:06 PM
@BlackStar
It's just one of my "friends"
I know him but he copies my style
He's from berlin too

BlackStar
12-14-2006, 12:21 PM
put your MSN on...I add you

MAW
12-14-2006, 12:23 PM
got it! but it shows you're offline

Flash
12-14-2006, 01:27 PM
cool rhymes maw keep it up!

MAW
12-14-2006, 02:16 PM
Thanks Flash! You're good 2

yung Kanon
12-14-2006, 02:37 PM
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PDM
12-15-2006, 12:26 PM
Yeah, but I didn't beat up little girls with glasses from da back MAW
I didn't hide but you did

HAHAHA, it was really great and I can still laugh bout it

MAW
12-15-2006, 12:32 PM
I'd never beat up lil' girls.

PDM
12-16-2006, 02:42 PM
don't be such coward we all did.
but nobody hide behind a wall

PDM
12-16-2006, 02:42 PM
Like You!!!

MAW
12-17-2006, 06:39 AM
don't be such coward we all did.
but nobody hide behind a wall

Are this your freestyle skillz?