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Nickz
12-13-2006, 08:14 AM
I found my friend once again
I saw him for the first time
In a long time...
And it brought up all this feelings inside, i never thought i had
When im depressed, you make me glad
Talking to you never makes me sad
Ill pick you up when you fall
All you need to make, is one call
My number is 9387...You know the rest
My friend your the best of the best
Always been a friend of me
Never ever been my enemy
You should know that you can always count on me
Your my friend
Our friendship will never ever end
Only you truly know me
That is why you`re my best homie

jinder
12-13-2006, 11:07 AM
nice
altho beginin is similar to a Shany track

ALEXE
12-13-2006, 03:11 PM
nice drop, nick
sounds like a great dedication, trully honest

Nickz
12-14-2006, 04:39 AM
Thanks ALEXE and jinder

PaC3Y
12-14-2006, 04:56 AM
great stuff nickz

Mlnuteman
12-14-2006, 08:06 AM
I thought it was kinda gay.
Can I get the rest of your phone number?

Nickz
12-14-2006, 12:24 PM
I thought it was kinda gay.
Can I get the rest of your phone number?

Hehe.. I dunno even know you and u want my number ? :P

BlackStar
12-14-2006, 12:29 PM
wasn't great..sorry...but I can tell more things about my homies.
This was def too short for a strong friendship!

and it was a little bit too simple in my eyes.

But please keep it up Nick!

Nickz
12-14-2006, 05:54 PM
wasn't great..sorry...but I can tell more things about my homies.
This was def too short for a strong friendship!

and it was a little bit too simple in my eyes.

But please keep it up Nick!

Thanks man 4 helping me...
:D

yung Kanon
12-14-2006, 06:29 PM
not feeling it really sorry

Trubs
12-14-2006, 07:15 PM
^^^^that was blunt! people gotta start somewhere...besides its poetry

it was a dedication so im guessing it came from the heart and anything that comes from the heart is beautiful, so good look nickz...peace~

BlackStar
12-15-2006, 11:56 AM
^^^^that was blunt! people gotta start somewhere...besides its poetry

it was a dedication so im guessing it came from the heart and anything that comes from the heart is beautiful, so good look nickz...peace~

word but everthing that comes from the heart have got more emotion and feeling in it...I felt nothing...lol
He can do it better trubs, believe me :cool:

Flash
12-15-2006, 12:01 PM
word but everthing that comes from the heart have got more emotion and feeling in it...I felt nothing...lol
He can do it better trubs, believe me :cool:

YEah she can do a lot more thatn that!

BlackStar
12-15-2006, 12:04 PM
she is a girl nikz is a girl lol!

oh..yea..sorry...messed it up...:D

Nickz
12-15-2006, 02:36 PM
Hehe...Yep im a girl;)

Trubs
12-16-2006, 02:15 PM
see what ur saying, but, its poetry damnit! when i thought up this section of the battle corner it was to showcase talent on any level, who are we to say what is good or bad is when it comes from a place that is certain with feeling, aside from the fact that she can do better, poetry shouldnt be judged, it is what it is...and so he didnt like it, somethings u should just keep to urself, that's what i saying...uppin.

BlackStar
12-17-2006, 10:54 AM
see what ur saying, but, its poetry damnit! when i thought up this section of the battle corner it was to showcase talent on any level, who are we to say what is good or bad is when it comes from a place that is certain with feeling, aside from the fact that she can do better, poetry shouldnt be judged, it is what it is...and so he didnt like it, somethings u should just keep to urself, that's what i saying...uppin.

and why do you post a poem if you should keep it for yourself? She wants feedback, I gave her feedback! Like I said...I don't feel it! That's my personal opinion. Maybe that's her way to express feelings but they aren't strong enough in my eyes!

I didn't say anything about the structure, wordplays or other lyrical methods!!!! I talked about my feelings to the song...