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yung Kanon
12-10-2006, 03:49 PM
verse 1 (yung kanon)

We Animals In The Game Caged In Rage,
The Letters Form A Page Dat Holds Ma Stage,
We Lock Thing Away In The Brain Hiding The Pain,
To Try To Know Wat I Think They Drain Ma Veinsís,
As Each Day Passís The Further I Descend In Ma Cage,
This Isnt Something That Will Amend With Age,
The Thoughts Are Crushed With Doubts,
Grab The Water B4 Its Rushed Wid Droughts,
The Deeper I Fall The Smaller They Seem,
Ill Never Rise Never Get Taller Or Be Keen,
Wats In Ma Walls Of ma Cage Are Disguised Conspiracies,
If It Was To Be Broke Youd Be Surprised Wid These Theories,
Breach The Walls Of Insanity And Youll Fine Ma Cage,
The Rules State Profanity So Mind The Rage,
Come To Ma Steel Walls And Feel The Cold,
Wats Inside No One knows But It Appeals Like Gold,
Behold Wats Untold As The Thoughts Wille Never Unfold,
Ive Been Told Ma Minds Been Sold Locked IN The Age Of Old,
The Key Is Nowhere To Be Found So I keep MA Thoughts Underground,
Ill Take These Thoughts To The Grave With The Silence Ma Sound,


Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling


verse 2 (yung Kanon)

The constitution of my nation states that I'm a free man,
But is it just an illusion I'm facin'?I hit like the waves of a sea can,
But by the time I reach the shore,I break on the rocks and recede back,
These not rhymes I speak,this is more than just another deep track,
I'm trapped in a cage,like a bird who stares at the sky,
Wings flap but they fail,some live,but it's rare to survive,
But that's worse than death,the cage taunts your state and you groan,
And when that curse is felt,all you feel is bitter hatred alone,
You can't take it and moan,the spirit dies and sets up a personal hell,
The feeling is basically known,but the pain's more real than these verses can tell,
There's no reversing the spell,it's not that kinda curse in fact,
But as much as it hurts,it's felt that the one thing even worse than that,
A craving worse than thirst in fact,when you ache to be free and fly,
But you're too immersed in that which you create but see a lie,
You had forged the lock of the cage and threw the key out as well,
You're the source,now you lost and you fazed in what you see now is hell,
We all trapped in cages,cages of pride and what we refused to say,
And though this fact amazes,the basis is right where we used to play,
As children,now we are prisoners of our silence,cold graves of our selves,
And we fill them with our visions,the lies hence controls maze and power swells,
Trapped in my cage,I try to reach out but the bars stop my hands,
Demons laugh as I fail,as I already grieve now for the loss I plan.


Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling



verse 3 (Eyebagz)

Im locked in, trapped and my skull is slowly moving in an crushing my brain
Im in constant pain but get on through trying to get someone to just explain
How someone could hate me enough to do this to me cause I just cant gauge
How theyíd stick me in this metaphorical cage for what to me feels like an age
I try to climb out and show the world what i have to offer but it spits in my face
I try as hard as i can to give chase but just canít seem to keep with the pace
And if I do manage to catch up I always end up running head first into the cages bars
Im trapped what do I do i try to squeeze through an now im ridden with scars
All i ever wanted was a chance to let what i feel i have to say out
With out having to grab random people on street and in their ears shout
Cause otherwise why would they listen to the words that i write down an try an spit
And i will never again be depressed clown and my wrists will never be slit
i used to hate life sit up at night thinking of ways that i could leave it assassinated
But i stopped thinking like that and now what lifeís got planned for me has me fascinated
Cause I wanna see if I can actually make something of myself and on the real fuck wealth
To me that aint succeeding most of the times its under mining ya self
And this cage that i canít get out of mayb my angel has the key and shell open the lock
Cause i keep looking at my clock seeing how long before i get that knock
An to be honest is doesnít look like its coming quickly so i hope she unlocks it soon
Cause if im locked in here forever ima end up a fucking loon




Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling X2

yung Kanon
12-10-2006, 04:10 PM
some new shit BUMP

Trubs
12-10-2006, 04:29 PM
caught me on a different level...some real lyrically type shit...i was really feelin eyebagz in the end when he said....


i used to hate life sit up at night thinking of ways that i could leave it assassinated
But i stopped thinking like that and now what life’s got planned for me has me fascinated
Cause I wanna see if I can actually make something of myself and on the real fuck wealth
To me that aint succeeding most of the times its under mining ya self
And this cage that i can’t get out of mayb my angel has the key and shell open the lock
Cause i keep looking at my clock seeing how long before i get that knock

another couple of lines that stood out...


The constitution of my nation states that I'm a free man,
But is it just an illusion I'm facin'?I hit like the waves of a sea can,
But by the time I reach the shore,I break on the rocks and recede back,
These not rhymes I speak,this is more than just another deep track,

overall nice drop, keep it up...peace~

Flash
12-10-2006, 04:32 PM
verse 1 (yung kanon)

We Animals In The Game Caged In Rage,
The Letters Form A Page Dat Holds Ma Stage,
We Lock Thing Away In The Brain Hiding The Pain,
To Try To Know Wat I Think They Drain Ma Veins’s,
As Each Day Pass’s The Further I Descend In Ma Cage,
This Isnt Something That Will Amend With Age,
The Thoughts Are Crushed With Doubts,
Grab The Water B4 Its Rushed Wid Droughts,
The Deeper I Fall The Smaller They Seem,
Ill Never Rise Never Get Taller Or Be Keen,
Wats In Ma Walls Of ma Cage Are Disguised Conspiracies,
If It Was To Be Broke Youd Be Surprised Wid These Theories,
Breach The Walls Of Insanity And Youll Fine Ma Cage,
The Rules State Profanity So Mind The Rage,
Come To Ma Steel Walls And Feel The Cold,
Wats Inside No One knows But It Appeals Like Gold,
Behold Wats Untold As The Thoughts Wille Never Unfold,
Ive Been Told Ma Minds Been Sold Locked IN The Age Of Old,
The Key Is Nowhere To Be Found So I keep MA Thoughts Underground,
Ill Take These Thoughts To The Grave With The Silence Ma Sound,


Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling


verse 2 (yung Kanon)

The constitution of my nation states that I'm a free man,
But is it just an illusion I'm facin'?I hit like the waves of a sea can,
But by the time I reach the shore,I break on the rocks and recede back,
These not rhymes I speak,this is more than just another deep track,
I'm trapped in a cage,like a bird who stares at the sky,
Wings flap but they fail,some live,but it's rare to survive,
But that's worse than death,the cage taunts your state and you groan,
And when that curse is felt,all you feel is bitter hatred alone,
You can't take it and moan,the spirit dies and sets up a personal hell,
The feeling is basically known,but the pain's more real than these verses can tell,
There's no reversing the spell,it's not that kinda curse in fact,
But as much as it hurts,it's felt that the one thing even worse than that,
A craving worse than thirst in fact,when you ache to be free and fly,
But you're too immersed in that which you create but see a lie,
You had forged the lock of the cage and threw the key out as well,
You're the source,now you lost and you fazed in what you see now is hell,
We all trapped in cages,cages of pride and what we refused to say,
And though this fact amazes,the basis is right where we used to play,
As children,now we are prisoners of our silence,cold graves of our selves,
And we fill them with our visions,the lies hence controls maze and power swells,
Trapped in my cage,I try to reach out but the bars stop my hands,
Demons laugh as I fail,as I already grieve now for the loss I plan.


Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling



verse 3 (Eyebagz)

Im locked in, trapped and my skull is slowly moving in an crushing my brain
Im in constant pain but get on through trying to get someone to just explain
How someone could hate me enough to do this to me cause I just cant gauge
How they’d stick me in this metaphorical cage for what to me feels like an age
I try to climb out and show the world what i have to offer but it spits in my face
I try as hard as i can to give chase but just can’t seem to keep with the pace
And if I do manage to catch up I always end up running head first into the cages bars
Im trapped what do I do i try to squeeze through an now im ridden with scars
All i ever wanted was a chance to let what i feel i have to say out
With out having to grab random people on street and in their ears shout
Cause otherwise why would they listen to the words that i write down an try an spit
And i will never again be depressed clown and my wrists will never be slit
i used to hate life sit up at night thinking of ways that i could leave it assassinated
But i stopped thinking like that and now what life’s got planned for me has me fascinated
Cause I wanna see if I can actually make something of myself and on the real fuck wealth
To me that aint succeeding most of the times its under mining ya self
And this cage that i can’t get out of mayb my angel has the key and shell open the lock
Cause i keep looking at my clock seeing how long before i get that knock
An to be honest is doesn’t look like its coming quickly so i hope she unlocks it soon
Cause if im locked in here forever ima end up a fucking loon




Stuck in this cage
filled with rage
no way out
we cant escape
drowned with faliure
cant get away

we falling
we falling
we falling
we falling X2

first verse great flow,it remind me on akon's loked up! the hook is good!secound verse,nice explynin about the cage good!BAgz was spiting fire nice verse too! 8/10

Nickolai
12-10-2006, 04:36 PM
Nice drop kanon, i wud say that ur second verse was better. there were nice vocab, multiz and good flow there man
flow changed tho in the 1st verse which made it sound weird but still all good
hook was nice and simple didnt ruin anything.
Bagz for me had the best verse in the track but didnt overshadow kanons verse
once again nice vocab, multiz and flow and great topic for a track, like how u feel trapped
keep this ish up
peace

yung Kanon
12-10-2006, 04:40 PM
thanks trubs flash and nick

jinder
12-10-2006, 05:15 PM
nice collabo yall
verse 1
nice vocab n multis, flowed real well
it was gud fo like an intro to tha track
verse 2
i liked this betta than 1st 1 cus got mo interestin
i like metaphors n imagery u used in this 1 aswell
verse 3
shauny had tha flow, multis n vocab too
liked way u told it like a story
it was a diff angle to kanon
hook
nice n simple

nice to see u bk shauny
nice drop yall
keep it up!

yung Kanon
12-10-2006, 05:19 PM
thanks jind

koncret
12-11-2006, 12:40 AM
the first verse was hot second i wasnt rally feelin it like how you made the cage a metaphor for how the government had you trapped but still wasnt feelin it bagz wasnt feelin the start but after that it heated up

Leon Fluxx
12-11-2006, 02:12 AM
I broke dat fucker down line by line.. as soon as i was gonna rate it.. i had an internet error message and da shit closed.. im soo heat...

Let me break it down real quick..Kannon like da one word mutli rhyming.. Also.. DOnt rhyme da word more den once and 3 bars... also.. U have great visuals.. and u also have a poetry style to ya game i see.. Work on punches.. if u claim u gon make an upset ova me in a battle.. but verry good style...

PERSONALLY.. Im gettin worn up wit da deep tracks.. too many people are odin it..includin me..
Im tryin to go back to da poppin bubz or drinkin on da block and goo back to my street style.. EVERYONE SPITTIN deep shit. and not that its bad.. im just "full" i cant take no mo.. Just like Crunk music.. no offense cap u kno my story about it.. lol.. but im full. .this shit is hott...
Creative aspect was there.. bagz u killed it.. i like da wordplay.. just da raw flow u brought to it.. u didnt bring a poet style.. u brought an emcee style too it.. which kept da ratin higher..I like it..

8.6/10

nice track.. hook alil basic.. but maybe its better to be basic.. then 10 bars as a hook ya kno??...
good job my niggaz.. keep up da skillz

Leon Fluxx
12-11-2006, 02:12 AM
caught me on a different level...some real lyrically type shit...i was really feelin eyebagz in the end when he said....



another couple of lines that stood out...



overall nice drop, keep it up...peace~


Trubz what up Homegurl.. Holla at me.. Tha Commission got open arms wheneva u down homegurl..
1 luv

yung Kanon
12-11-2006, 06:28 AM
thanks fluxx im down to battle you when ever

yung Kanon
12-11-2006, 01:40 PM
BUMPIN peoples

Summer_heat
12-11-2006, 02:28 PM
it was gud.
i wasnt following ur first verse fully Kanon, but u worked it up on ur second.
Eye back wit his usual story tellin style, loved the endin too.

Eye wasted the track, it was more personal imo, but u did ur thing too YK, respect for that.

yung Kanon
12-11-2006, 02:31 PM
thanks summer

yung Kanon
12-12-2006, 02:08 PM
Bumpin peoples

BlackStar
12-14-2006, 04:46 PM
really like the topic...you described your situations very good and to compare it like beeing locked in a cage!

Kanan, you out more multiz than wordplays or similes in your first verse!
you did it def better in the 2nd one!