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yung Kanon
12-07-2006, 02:37 PM
Time for some different shit a look in our minds using music

{verse 1} {yung Kanon}

Is music my life or is my life music itself?
I gotta do this rap shit or I might lose it,I've felt,
So I spew spit and melt the rocks and the hearts of stone,
There's no music in hell,just blocks in the dark alone,
Reap what my heart has sown,but I need pesticide,
The pests are sharp,they groan,God wants to test this guy,
Poisonous like Tsetse flies,they infest the crops,
Only the best be live,the rest in peace rest on spots,
But I make the pests all rot,I done hurt the haters,
And the text's all hot,you can call me the exterminator,
These cats is wack,definition of what hate be,
But I still lack this fact,who will exterminate me?
You can beat the demons without but what of the sins within?
To know what that's about,you gotta learn to sink to swim,
You must know the laws of gravity in order to fly,
My soul claws and grabs at me,I've tasted water that's dry,
When up is down and all of the lesson's reversed,
Just to bust a frown,happy girls shove anti-depressants in purse,
The dimension's twisted around and joy is grief,
Trying to define existence now as i toy with beats,
This boy is deep but then who isn't?
So when i spew writtens,it's a true vision,
Every verse wrecks shit,from the last to the first section,
So i guess your perspective must define your perception.



{verse 2} {the Odin}

Wheres the line between Music and life?words spread in pandemic-pandemonium
Tempted to use this knife? Im poisonous to the industry like epidemics-of-plutonium
Are we Living to die, or dying to live I present Pacs-Paradox-Shit Im scared of clocks
Im spaired-the-shock-Itís good I loan u my illness like kids pared-with-pox
People acting like savages, Im denouncing all acts of blasphemy you infer-to-me
The arsenic ravages, Im pronouncing all who oppose me dead in infirmaries
Drunken words slurred-and-sprayed- Im heard today-Rosetta stone confirmed-in-clay
All vision blurred-and frayed- Im bending backwards for truth snapping my vertebra
Truth appears to be nocturnal- tension is only released upon wisdom of journals
But the soulís lust for sanctity is what fuels this internal-inferno
Which portrays more conviction? An artistic-page~or Narcistic-Rage?
Tormented minds in a sadistic-cage- Intellect beyond your linguistic-range
Im all for the intellectual spreading of musical arts in Pro-thesisís
Im ready to provide the flame to mankind, like Prometheus
Knowledge wsted is a sin, like burned books I watch the intuitive-wrot
And if your against my will and cause, I line emcees up in congruent-plots
Take my race and fingerprints into account~I donít match the descriptions-writ
Throwing enemies into conniption-fits~leave ya more confused when the descriptions-hit
With Confucian convictions-spit-leave ya whole camp with the infliction-to-quit


A taste of Music and Mind

BlackStar
12-07-2006, 03:04 PM
dope...like I said, Odin fits better in this than me :D


To know what that's about,you gotta learn to sink to swim,
You must know the laws of gravity in order to fly,
My soul claws and grabs at me,I've tasted water that's dry,
When up is down and all of the lesson's reversed,
love this part...


Which portrays more conviction? An artistic-page~or Narcissistic-Rage?
Tormented minds in a sadistic-cage- Intellect beyond your linguistic-range
damn! like the rhyming here

no hook, no intro, no more verses...lol...it's cool on that way cause the reader is more focused on the 2 verses.

JaTahChild01
12-07-2006, 04:55 PM
sorry if some spelling is off kanon, i did this kinda quicxk for you cuz i knew i wasnt gon have much time and i didnt spell check it man.

Good job though, you def lookin like rookie of the year type material man.

Suggestion...you prolly shoulda added a 2nd verse from you like a typical collabo 2 verses from main artist and 1 from guest, especially with no hook to lengthen the track out.

Be easy

yung Kanon
12-07-2006, 05:02 PM
Big thanks im liking that prospect yeah i think i should of made another verse i thought a hook might of ruined it, yeah i noticed some spelling errors i forgot to spell check it myself but it dont matter itz all good BUMP!

TTP
12-07-2006, 06:27 PM
yo prop fo' this one good look out YK holla back fo' anotha tag team feature presentation

yung Kanon
12-08-2006, 06:41 AM
yer TTP fo sho thanks BUMP

Flash
12-08-2006, 11:35 AM
Time for some different shit a look in our minds using music

{verse 1} {yung Kanon}

Is music my life or is my life music itself?
I gotta do this rap shit or I might lose it,I've felt,
So I spew spit and melt the rocks and the hearts of stone,
There's no music in hell,just blocks in the dark alone,

Nice wordplay

Reap what my heart has sown,but I need pesticide,
The pests are sharp,they groan,God wants to test this guy,
Poisonous like Tsetse flies,they infest the crops,
Only the best be live,the rest in peace rest on spots,
But I make the pests all rot,I done hurt the haters,
good
And the text's all hot,you can call me the exterminator,
These cats is wack,definition of what hate be,
But I still lack this fact,who will exterminate me?
Nice Extreminator
You can beat the demons without but what of the sins within?
To know what that's about,you gotta learn to sink to swim,
You must know the laws of gravity in order to fly,
My soul claws and grabs at me,I've tasted water that's dry,
When up is down and all of the lesson's reversed,
Just to bust a frown,happy girls shove anti-depressants in purse,
The dimension's twisted around and joy is grief,
Trying to define existence now as i toy with beats,
This boy is deep but then who isn't?
So when i spew writtens,it's a true vision,
Every verse wrecks shit,from the last to the first section,
So i guess your perspective must define your perception.

Nice verse i realy felt it

{verse 2} {the Odin}

Wheres the line between Music and life?words spread in pandemic-pandemonium
Tempted to use this knife? Im poisonous to the industry like epidemics-of-plutonium
:D cool
Are we Living to die, or dying to live I present Pacs-Paradox-Shit Im scared of clocks
Im spaired-the-shock-It’s good I loan u my illness like kids pared-with-pox
People acting like savages, Im denouncing all acts of blasphemy you infer-to-me
The arsenic ravages, Im pronouncing all who oppose me dead in infirmaries
Drunken words slurred-and-sprayed- Im heard today-Rosetta stone confirmed-in-clay
All vision blurred-and frayed- Im bending backwards for truth snapping my vertebra
Truth appears to be nocturnal- tension is only released upon wisdom of journals
But the soul’s lust for sanctity is what fuels this internal-inferno
Which portrays more conviction? An artistic-page~or Narcistic-Rage?
Tormented minds in a sadistic-cage- Intellect beyond your linguistic-range
Im all for the intellectual spreading of musical arts in Pro-thesis’s
Im ready to provide the flame to mankind, like Prometheus
Knowledge wsted is a sin, like burned books I watch the intuitive-wrot
And if your against my will and cause, I line emcees up in congruent-plots
Take my race and fingerprints into account~I don’t match the descriptions-writ
Throwing enemies into conniption-fits~leave ya more confused when the descriptions-hit
With Confucian convictions-spit-leave ya whole camp with the infliction-to-quit

This verse was dope
A taste of Music and Mind

A great drop i realy liked it!with hook i think its gonna be more greater but enyway is good!9/10

Leon Fluxx
12-08-2006, 02:47 PM
I liked it a lot.. Especially Odin.. he fuckin killed dat wit wordplay alone was mad creative.. Honestly i've been gettin board.. I dont see anymore club bangers,disses, whateva else my niggaz.. its all this deep shit.. and personally i've seen too much of it.. even though this is hot.. im just tired of everyone actin like there "Political,Spiritual,deep minded tracks.. yea its cool when One person does it.. but everyone doin da same thing.. not sayin this is the same but its like everyone is doing the same thing ya feel me??? No more remixs no one does either.. anyways.. its a good track.. just gettin tired of everyone writtin da same joints...
8.8/10

yung Kanon
12-08-2006, 03:57 PM
thanks fluxx i understand what your sayin but i like to spit real shit datz me alot of tha time

yung Kanon
12-08-2006, 04:55 PM
Bbbbbbbbbbbbbbump

yung Kanon
12-09-2006, 05:58 AM
come on dont sleep on this

yung Kanon
12-09-2006, 07:46 AM
Bummmmmmmmmpppppppppp

lilsam
12-10-2006, 05:57 PM
Overall This One Is A Great Track, I Personally Think Kanon Has Some Better Drops, But I Guess When U With Odin Hes So Good He Can Overshadow Peepz A Bit. The Concept Was Nice, And The Flow Seemed Hot. Odin Had Crazy Multis, And Kanon Had Good Vocab n Structure.

8.8/10

koncret
12-11-2006, 12:33 AM
KANON you stepped it up on this killed it with a poetic type verse and odin that was one of the best verses i have ever reaad the wordplay and multis was insane

JaTahChild01
12-11-2006, 10:51 AM
thank you sir

yung Kanon
12-11-2006, 01:39 PM
thanks Kon