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yung Kanon
11-23-2006, 02:43 PM
{yung Kan}

Its Kan, ALEXE, Lets go, im untouchable tempted to murder with rhymes and lines/
pushin back the shades on our brains to expose the shine from minds/
signs of crimes, feleonys from a different melody, writtin to destroy/
missile at the mouth explodes after what im spittin is deployed/
people keep ya rappas home, we scatter chrome to shatta domes/
ruling the ground under with hades, burrying mics inside catacombs/
known infections, livin in raps hypodermic needles for injections/
lyrical smith n wessons, blessin peasants by tearin them into sections/
if u at us testin, then just be ready for us to come n crunch rhymes/
this was just a basic warm-up for me, now metaphors n punchlines/
bolder booth tones'll rock and burn u at the tip of my flamin brimstone/
Anyone get ya boy, he wont milk this by the time raps r maimin his bones/
i aim n trim domes wit razors blazin 'cross ya temples till ya fadin gone/
hip hop swat to these buggin fakers, me n ALEXE stay raid'n songs/

{Hook}ALEXE

How I do things? (It's wrong and right)
The World (that I build and abide)
Nothing's the same (to typify)
The things I do (to gratify)
The Rap (throbbing my heart-beat stride)
Inbred in me, (fervent to write)


{yung Kan}

filleting slayin portrayin wrong whenever our pens touchin these pages/
cats don't cum when we plant the seed of defeat cuz they fuckin wit sages/
run with the majors, thats me and AL, on the rise, u already know suckas/
i might have to slow down for the haters eat this fucking shit muthafuckers/
i slap shit n raise uh nine, destroy uh playas mind with laser rhymes/
lyrical snipers just have u 'cross-heirs/hairs' like i cruzifyed ya razor line/
anyone fuckin wit me? shit...my lyrics make ya domes pop n bleed bitch/
see this, can make the "highest"... "no bodys" like stoned quadriplegics/
ya drop to knees when defeated, best bets retreatin or i sever ya head/
pass up the dough, im ur ruler, now let me be n measure my bread/
n plz don't fuck around, cuz 1, 2, 3 ya done after the fo' fifths n tips/
ya'll gon see more of s like to read the lips of uh slow kid with lisp/
str8 flowin this shit, n bitches better be playin there part, sayin im smart/
step on ya image n go paleolithic, punches swung will just cave in ya art/
cats chasin these stars while we middle figures with fingers up, sent!/
cats better chill or be burnt cause were here, im bringin up temp/

{Hook}ALEXE

How I do things? (It's wrong and right)
The World (that I build and abide)
Nothing's the same (to typify)
The things I do (to gratify)
The Rap (throbbing my heart-beat stride)
Inbred in me, (fervent to write)


{ALEXE}

Disengage the cruise control, then con you trolls of magic cues,
Aesthetically design new bruises impelling you in disuse.
With the Vault.age of a bank, gun the Kanon of a tank,
Shred your shank up to the neck, leave you rankles in Iraq.
Feckless bloviating now, blow-the-rating with some 'dis'ses:
With this risk to sound discourteous, disregard those in distress,
Disinherit breath from the disguised, disfigure mime's mimic,
Hospitalize all shots 'gainst me through E.R. of Rhyme's Clinic.
Dismantle diskettes of the records of disquiet or distaste,
Distinguish distribution's distance, FedEx' disabled out in Space.
Divest of vest, bare chest, honest I tend to test my cerebration.
Confess regress, extinct as pest I've lived in equivocation,
By privation of attention brewed much tension and depression
But cessation of sensation ignites mind's emancipation.
Equanimity became my concinnity qua solace
Indomitable to retreat regardless what the toll-is.
To humanity I reserve my poetry as air-shaft,
Humidity 'round my eyes morphs just through my sketches and draft.

{Hook}ALEXE

How I do things? (It's wrong and right)
The World (that I build and abide)
Nothing's the same (to typify)
The things I do (to gratify)
The Rap (throbbing my heart-beat stride)
Inbred in me, (fervent to write)

Flash
11-23-2006, 03:31 PM
all the vrses are good alexe got dope verse kanon tooo!hook great!vocab good!nice song i realy like it!8.5

Summer_heat
11-23-2006, 03:34 PM
very interesting collabo, nice to see ALEXE givin a go at text rappin!

but i expected ALEXE to come this hard, what left me shockingly suprised was the content that YK bought, i mean uve deff upped ur skill, no joke.
ur first verse was brilliant!

ALEXE good job on the hook, really feelin it

good drop yall!

ALEXE
11-23-2006, 03:37 PM
thank you :) fast feedback is always welcomed! props!

lilsam
11-23-2006, 04:14 PM
nice track

lol very modest in the name(best trak on MIO)

yung Kanon
11-23-2006, 04:24 PM
it was to get views lol itz real dope though if ya get time sam review dis properly bumpin this shit

lilsam
11-23-2006, 04:31 PM
lol, im well too modest, wid mine lol

will do yeh but just doing coursework

TTP
11-23-2006, 05:30 PM
yo i like this mayne holla at me for a callao both ya homiez

Nickolai
11-23-2006, 06:01 PM
i think the hook was pretty good for dis trackk

kannon ur first verse is da best from ur 2 verses specially the first few bars, real dope
2nd verse was still very very good as ur flow was dere nd nice vocab aswell

ALEXE ur verse was sick! nice to see u writing rap
alot of alliteration in ya verse, poetic style wit the vocab and rhymes kinda hardcore
goes dope! keep dat ish up

out of 10 i'l probz give dis 8.8/10

:)

yung Kanon
11-23-2006, 06:14 PM
got some peepz really bumping this shit thanks Summer,TTP and Nick

jinder
11-23-2006, 07:16 PM
real nice collabo yall
i liked Kanons 1st verse lil betta than 2nd cus tha flow was real gud
the multis n vocab nicely used
hook like ery1 sayin was tight
gud to see Alexe rappin (not that i dont luv yo poetry)
u had a gud flow n tha vocab was nice aswell
gud drop yall
keep it up

lilsam
11-24-2006, 04:28 PM
this song is fair hot, i liked it
Kanons 1st verse better than 2nd in my opinion.
Alexe came in nice, fitted with concept brilliant, with a hot verse.
Kanon Verse 1 - 9
Kanon Verse 2 - 8.4
Alexe Verse - 9
Overall - 8.8

Ttown MC
11-24-2006, 05:07 PM
kannon youve done good by yourself elevateing your rhymes an what not congrats on that shit, the verses were good a stronger use of vocab an rhymeing ability is present so good job an all.

alexe- i thought you was a poetry cat? all the same good solid verse an a nice hook to top it off


good job on this guys was a good read

yung Kanon
11-25-2006, 06:13 AM
Big props Ttown thanks alot

yung Kanon
11-25-2006, 04:52 PM
Bumping peoples feed dis shit

Sparx
11-26-2006, 02:55 AM
that was a nice drop Kannon, i liked ur first verse the best, hook was kinda mild, but a good drop none the less 8/10

pushin back the shades on our brains to expose the shine from minds/

thats dope

yung Kanon
11-26-2006, 07:14 AM
props Sparx any mor feed peoples

BlackStar
11-26-2006, 09:12 AM
kon...first verse was better! Better multiz!

Alexe...THAT WAS THE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing vocab, amazing metaphors:


With the Vault.age of a bank, gun the Kanon of a tank,


Hospitalize all shots 'gainst me through E.R. of Rhyme's Clinic.

that's ill!!!


Dismantle diskettes of the records of disquiet or distaste,
Distinguish distribution's distance, FedEx' disabled out in Space.

an anaphora of "dis"...and as a result of this an alliteration!!! very good work!

oh your multiz are awesome too...damn, you're such a good rapper in my eyes. I have to see more work of you!
it was good that you don't write that much cause Kanon doesn't stand in the shadow.

Hook is good in my eyes but...mhhh...it doesn't fit in it.

KEEP UP THE WORK (BOTH!!!!)

yung Kanon
11-26-2006, 11:43 AM
Thanks Star :) were wer my quotez :( only joking lol ALEXE needz to do more shit on this part of tha forum

ALEXE
11-26-2006, 01:31 PM
thanks for the break-down, BlackStar :D Glad you like it
Glad all of you liked this collabo! I appreciate all the feedback
Props

yung Kanon
11-26-2006, 02:19 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^same great feed guys glad peepz actually checked our shit and feeded it and we both got major props

yung Kanon
11-27-2006, 03:02 PM
any mor reviews to come BUMP