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Eyebagz
08-17-2006, 07:05 PM
Im engulfed with rage feel like ive been here for an age
Right now i wanna reach into my book and change the page
Im constantly riding boredom down the road ima explode
feel like upon me talents been bestowed with my unique flows
Dunno what to do no more writing for me is becoming a chore
with a new army not spitting hardcore hafta get ready for war
When i go off to explore upon shots will be fired galore
Im always open like a whore my life to everyone is an open drawer
even if my raps are worth a dollar atleast im twice as good as 50
As i walk through lifes department store my eyes fly around shifty
Shop secuirtiy stands by the door to nick me knock me down kick me
I shout you must be taking the pis...i mean the mickey
I run down a back alley and bury my fist in the wall im in for a fall
Dont come up to me im liable to start a brawl ill fight all
Dont give a fuck if i lose get a bruise or knocked out to snooze
Cause in lifes game i refuse to excuse my lighted fuse end of the world news

Quick keystyle shit..

lilsam
08-17-2006, 07:08 PM
Good spit
You awesome at this

BlackStar
08-17-2006, 07:28 PM
Dont give a fuck if i lose get a bruise or knocked out to snooze
Cause in lifes game i refuse to excuse my lighted fuse end of the world news

wow...nice flow and multiz here!!!

props homie!

Ttown MC
08-17-2006, 07:33 PM
damn homie good shit

liked the constant rhymeing (multis)

shit was good good vocab an good

job on structure




i believe i owe you a verse but im not sure lol my bad

lemme kno tho fam

lilsam
08-17-2006, 07:46 PM
[QUOTE=Eyebagz;222498]
Im engulfed with rage feel like ive been here for an age
Right now i wanna reach into my book and change the page


[QUOTE]

Liked that bit for some reason more than any other bit

Gotta mad good flow

jinder
08-18-2006, 04:08 PM
yeah real gud shauny
i liked tha dollar n fifty line lol
nah i liked it all
nice 1