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Eyebagz
06-20-2006, 10:04 AM
feeling bad are you?

feeling bad feeling down are you well why dont you kill yourself
im feeling the same right now you know what i might do it myself
and if you get a headache why dont you cure it with a gun
an' you do know anything special you try an do has already been done
dont ever think your unique son whatever you do ul be outdone
lifes a constant uphill run that you wish you never begun
your starting to feel like your brain has been ripped out your skull
then been chucked at the walls then put back in the gapping hole
cant fathom why youve placed on this land thats a disgrace
why did the god choose you to look like a prick an wear a brace
its ok mate i can see youve got many pressures stacked like plates
and i think there is a need to get violent like eu debates
your "afraid" of life like you were made of cheap cotton
and dont worry you will be forgotten cause life is dont give a fuck its rotton
everybody knows life is like george bush...full of shit
so dont cry and bitch just pick up that knife slit and quit

does it work or not lol please be honest

Summer_heat
06-20-2006, 02:39 PM
yea its gud, its not that different n it goes,
real nice drop
keep em comin!
"your starting to feel like your brain has been ripped out your skull
then been chucked at the walls then put back in the gapping hole"

only thing was u were real negative! cudda least give it a happy endin lol j/p!

Eyebagz
06-20-2006, 02:54 PM
lol im sorry i might try and make a whole song out of it...

jinder
06-21-2006, 06:28 AM
that was gud fo real, i liked it
yeah tha negativity was kinda scary lol
reminded me Plan B, he has that sick stuff lol
"your "afraid" of life like you were made of cheap cotton"
liked wordplay in that
tha endin was nice, well kinda harsh lol but was a gud way to finish it

Eyebagz
06-21-2006, 11:20 AM
lol thanks i think i was listening to plan b before i wrote it
and ima write like that but try and put more multis for a better flow