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LOC
07-25-2005, 05:33 PM
now this is an actual verse for a callabo that i sent to ttown mc which will be up in his callabo soon, but it also reads like poetry if u read it line for line slowly its quite good so i thought id contribute to this section until i get some time to do a proper poem

They got me runnin’ from these crooked police ~/
I get no peace! ~
Not even a peep, or hope of succeedin’ ~//
All they want to do is seize da youth that speak up for freedom ~/
Expressions portrayed thru art Like HIP HOP, RNB & Graffiti ~//
Truthfully, as youths we spiritually needy ~/
In these times of greed, envy & all things seedy ~//
We in desperate need of sins to be cleaned, immediately ~/
Coz it seems to be dese kids wanna live life how they see it on T.V ~//
But ima Ghost so I kno you wont hear me until you see me ~/
Jus like you wont know LOC unless u get a chance to be me ~//
Im haunted by screamin’, trapped in a state of dreamin ~/
Bein poked, prodded & shot at by Demons ~//
We got xtermist, terrorist & then theres these leaders ~/
That miss-lead us into the belly of the beast for its feedin ~//

Shadyzking
07-26-2005, 08:42 AM
more rapping dan a poem.

LOC
07-26-2005, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by Shadyzking
more rapping dan a poem.

yea thats wat i sed

FREEWAY
08-22-2005, 08:44 AM
WEN DID DIS COLLABBO GO UP?...IM FEELIN DIS SHIT LOC WORD UP..ONE OF THA DOPEST THANGS I EVER SEEN U PUT DOWN NEGRO U DIG...PROPS

PEACE

LOC
08-22-2005, 09:57 PM
thanx freeway yeah i really liked it, shit was on ttowns callabo a remake of GHOST by 2pac....

it went up a while ago....it was YG drop so not many ppl peeped it haha thats y i posted my part of it here haha

ALEXE
09-28-2005, 09:07 AM
They got me runnin’ from these crooked police ~/
I get no peace! ~
Not even a peep, or hope of succeedin’ ~//
All they want to do is seize da youth that speak up for freedom ~/
~ :smokin: line but good to start with, last 2 lines are good, good flow for a freestyle~
Expressions portrayed thru art Like HIP HOP, RNB & Graffiti ~//
Truthfully, as youths we spiritually needy ~/
In these times of greed, envy & all things seedy ~//
We in desperate need of sins to be cleaned, immediately ~/
~~almost the dopest lines, well written, deep felt, true and good flow on it~~
Coz it seems to be dese kids wanna live life how they see it on T.V ~//
But ima Ghost so I kno you wont hear me until you see me ~/
Jus like you wont know LOC unless u get a chance to be me ~//
~~~dope lines, well thought out, really well written, feelin the last line the most~~~
Im haunted by screamin’, trapped in a state of dreamin ~/
Bein poked, prodded & shot at by Demons ~//
We got xtermist, terrorist & then theres these leaders ~/
That miss-lead us into the belly of the beast for its feedin ~//
~~~~dopest lines, well written, well displayed thoughts, good rhyme scheme, good flow, really dope~~~~
Overall it's great, good rhymes, well layed out and good imagery
much respect

LOC
09-29-2005, 07:14 PM
shit dis still gettin feedback yeah this was a personal favourtie of mine...thanks 4 da kind words Alexe

payce

ALEXE
09-30-2005, 05:22 AM
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

Trubs
09-30-2005, 08:52 AM
Originally posted by ALEXE
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

then y dont u drop something to help it be active...what's up loc...peace~

GUNS
09-30-2005, 09:58 AM
Loc isnt here anymore (well i dont see him here anymore)

i do see him on Death Row

ALEXE
09-30-2005, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by Trubs

Originally posted by ALEXE
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

then y dont u drop something to help it be active...what's up loc...peace~
ok :roll:
i don't know how many replies I will get though
:stick:

LOC
10-01-2005, 06:11 AM
Originally posted by Trubs

Originally posted by ALEXE
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

then y dont u drop something to help it be active...what's up loc...peace~

wat up trouble, wats crakn wit chu?

Trubs
10-03-2005, 09:09 AM
Originally posted by LOC

Originally posted by Trubs

Originally posted by ALEXE
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

then y dont u drop something to help it be active...what's up loc...peace~

wat up trouble, wats crakn wit chu?

what's up with u is the question...holla back...peace~

LOC
10-03-2005, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by Trubs

Originally posted by LOC

Originally posted by Trubs

Originally posted by ALEXE
just doin my thing
you do yours, so I do mine
I'm sorry this place isn't as active as it should be

then y dont u drop something to help it be active...what's up loc...peace~

wat up trouble, wats crakn wit chu?

what's up with u is the question...holla back...peace~

you kow what up gurl doin my thang, chillin...most of all watchin...but if ya got somethin to say you know how to pm trubs...holla

payce