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Caddillac
03-11-2004, 04:13 PM
Unseen in ma underground labratory,
eighteen with ma profound vocabulary,
best b-hold - the only and only sick epidemic poetry.
you can compete, ill defeat, delete ya mainframe,
destruct, tucked away, abduct, remain insane

_____

MantastiC

verbal_assultor
03-11-2004, 04:41 PM
that was different but i liked it...

holla_dolla18
03-12-2004, 04:51 AM
that was hot . . . . i enjoyed it . . . maybe you shoulda made it longer

Caddillac
03-12-2004, 06:01 PM
Continued ...

Collapsing from the Lyrical metaphorical skill,
Sending out a critical illness Disease that can kill,
Feeling the blistering beating pain bloating inside,
Behold the underground independent sickness I hide,
With a murderous mind magnifying magnitude
... still working on it :D

Caddillac
03-12-2004, 06:03 PM
This is something i thought up of when i was like 6-7 years old, lol it made no sense then and no sense now so here goes .. but i think if u rap wid it it soundz aite :P

Yaw Yaw Yaw ...
U say she'z a les then how can she be-a wiz,
U gotta move 2 the groove - get up 2 bump,
Now who'z gettin' ruppin - ill b giving u a big muffin,
Caught shoppin' - call coppin',
Good 2 say 999 - on so def three five,

cant remember rest :D

thei_chi
03-12-2004, 06:31 PM
*feel realy dumb*
i don`t realy get the last 1....
but i liked the 1st post n the 2nd...

Caddillac
03-12-2004, 06:44 PM
lol neither do i :P

but i think it means like if ma girl is caught shopping then i call the cops :D as in go skitz ...

and giving a big muffin means like goin skitz too or maybe 2 congratulate some1 :(

dunno what ruppin' is tho but then again wat was stuff like crunk and schtizel :)

thei_chi
03-12-2004, 06:49 PM
ok, ok...
but i realy liked the the other 2...
think u gonna battle some1?open a new thread......
i think u`ll do good!

Caddillac
03-12-2004, 06:52 PM
lol neva tried that shit b4 :P

thei_chi
03-12-2004, 06:55 PM
well u should.....
@least try....

holla_dolla18
03-13-2004, 07:34 AM
Originally posted by Caddillac
Yaw Yaw Yaw ...
U say she'z a les then how can she be-a wiz,
U gotta move 2 the groove - get up 2 bump,
Now who'z gettin' ruppin - ill b giving u a big muffin,
Caught shoppin' - call coppin',
Good 2 say 999 - on so def three five,

cant remember rest :D
haha that was cute. . . but the continued one was good . . . you really talented at poetry do you have finished pieces?? and you should try battlin

Caddillac
03-13-2004, 02:52 PM
lol maybe i will sometime when i get bored @ college or smth