View Full Version : Spoonz new rap

01-10-2004, 02:41 AM
ive been good lately on this shit ive been quiet but now its about time to break my silence
im gonna speak out on people claiming they the ones bringing the lyrical violence
dont quit your day job
yeah it might be dead end
but it sure beats going up against me when you cant defend against my flow
but against yours im like a dam im a concrete block
ever stong against your weak shit
your flows like some little splash upon the rocks
now i see some hardcore new talent trying to emerge with a vocal surge about thugs
you might not think its fair but niesse p the only niccas u know are the ones that you wear
i think theres people hear biting, stealing shit and claimin freestyles when they spent the last three weeks writing
only to come up with something whack about six lines long tryna be gangsta when they faker then jewelery sold on the streets of hong kong
im not over yet theres one more target to go
and hes the ramil impersonator, the murda perpetrator
who made you official kid stop playin people for suckas i couldnt see the black lines through you even if you was tracing paper

***thought i might just add an invitation for ppl to hit back, verbal assultor and niesse p

01-10-2004, 03:13 PM
lmao...u targeting me?...u calling me out...r u serious?...it's whatever kid because it's not that serious homey...i ain't claimed nothing about "BRINGING THE LYRICAL VIOLENCE" it's just a name, u reading to much into shyt kid...i'm just doing me...

u need ta take ur spoonz and dig u up a new style//
homey it's just words so y u beefing with a child?//
i kill dummies that bring envy to my situation//
i'm just doing me making u think twice before u think to send another invitation//
that's what wrong with kats always making newbie prove//
that they a lyrical mastermind when homey they better than u//
so don't fault me for a effortless dame//
when ur spittin is the same o same//
top notch spells my badge//
lucidly i do surpass//
i've already be acclaimed so i can care less bout ur ass//
so what, i don't posses what ya got beneth ya belt//
what makes u think u can target a dame who ain't no love for herself?//
that thread i posted the other day that was old yea it took be a while to create and i admit ima lair//
but i'm sly with mine and u wouldn't be hot if u was lit by fire//
the english vernacular doesn't with hold enough words so like u, simple, that's the way i rip u//
u would only be the best if i took ur spoons and dip u//
within the best punch lines//
niesse p aint the only one who hate u fag ass cats, "thugs," they claim they cluch nines//
silly fagget u can't beat me son//
i'll flip ur weak flow and then repeat it son//
so take ur hands from round my neck nicca let me breath//
i cause i can leave u hyperventlating like u a chick standing by to coceive//
i'm versital so i got more extinctions than a hoes hair stitched with weave//
my versitility can travel from sublines of happy and sad//
have u ever notice the illest of them all r always lacking a dad?//
but forget all that let me get back to the purpose//
sticks and stones breaks my bones and ya petty words r immune to my surface// (lol that was simple as hell)
so what i'm a rookie bastard//
but i shine like meros that's been glazed and plastered//
give in hang up jersey like they some christmas lights//
and think twice before u place up ur spoonz to fight//
cause u can hit me wit ur best and i'll get right back up like i'm a PCP dope feign//
u can't tie me down cause i don't likey them rope things//
slavery's over u can't master me cause my mind's levitated like i'm defying gravity//
so yesa massa wouldn't fall from my boby part that has cavities//
i can't paint u a picture clearer because i'm not Picasso but i can spit a masterpiece//

***don't hit me no garbage spoonz...the lesson of the day is think before u speak...i'm out***

01-10-2004, 07:30 PM
good stuff verbal_assultor... betta than spoonz... keep it up gurl ;)

01-10-2004, 09:20 PM
thank u...and i state it now "spoonz ur a bitch" get over urself homey...

01-11-2004, 03:11 AM
... ...

rookies these days think they can scratch me to get themselves a higher a place
but im about to clip your nails your shit just got shutdown down like your locked up with no bail
keep scratchin but the surface aint touched
while your dabbling in rap im recording my demo and such
put your badge away i know your name
"verbal assultor"? if i was your moms i woulda named you "verbally a shame"
damn that was a tough blow
i dont think anyone here would of wanted to of been you
its like if you were on a videogame you would of had to use your last continue
the only thing levitating your mind is the PCP
its got your so doped up you think you can see me
spot me
but still i appear unclear
just a blurred image to you who cant touch what she cant get near
you think i can be phased when you throwin every page of your rhyme book
all you do is leave me wondering how look the rhyme took
im the true lyrical master there'll be none after
theres only one spot here for you to fill
"lyrical disaster"

01-11-2004, 03:05 PM
congrats u making a demo, well good for u//
u say u still appear unclear, then whop-d-do//
i'm not tryna scratch u off i'm tryna abolish u//
as far as rookie these days goes who put u above that ranking//
homey i'm better than u cuz ain't no room for debating//
moms naming me verbally a shame?//
homey look at my last thread "the stars" on it says i'm lyrical acclaimed//
look in the sky it's a bird it's a plane//
nah it's an australian rookie that verbal_assultor has once again puttin' to shame//
lyrical disaster? nah i'm filling a void//
cause remember u recording a demo, u about to be newly employed//
sike, that's bullshit just like them words that u type//
i'm still flashing my badge is it now clear in ur sight?//
u a lyrical master, word? the only thing true in that line is "there'll be none after" u in place//
cause after i cease of u them other garbage freestylers wont even show they face//
i don't have a rhyme book son but i'm a make one and every page will be dedicated to u//
and before i write, my thoughts will be mediated upon u//
i'll make a art out of it like it's calypso or kong-fu//
u right nobody would want to be me//
cause the only thing that gives me pleasure is knowing that u never gonna see me//
u aint got no other punchs to blow//
cause i'm telling them i'm young, i'm a female, and i ain't got a pops so?//
now what u gonna type, so more garbage that u the champ and u weighing like a feather, light//
like, i said get over urself cause it's making u foul//
don't say u don't need help because the 1st symptom to lyrical disasters is denial//
read my members text i overwhelm the average mind in massive ways//
and i'm taking ur bitch ass belt just call me Cassius Clay// (Ali)
i ain't a lyrcial god and i ain't close to perfect//
but look how i put ur shit down, flipped it, and reversed it// (lol)

***spoonz it's over...so stop imbarassing urself...but if u want i can keep going...i'm out

01-12-2004, 05:29 AM
embarassin MYself what about YOU
you think you can answer my punches with shit like "whop-d-do"
your way too overconfident
theres no substance to your raps
and the only void you gettin filled
is the one thats in your lap
i can tell you didnt spend as long on that rhyme
you hardly even dissed me
you think you droppin bombs but aint realisin that they missed me
yeah im australia now you understand it
bloody useless yank sheila in the aussie tongue youre branded
are you lyrically acclaimed to bad you're not lyrical in the brain
you can spit yourself insane but the facts will remain the same
im better
and i tell you i figure that becuase as i said before
theres no substance in your rap
your talking about you flipped my verse on me
without putting a single curse on me
good for you? fuck that shit more like i got the goods do you?

01-12-2004, 01:06 PM
my flow is supposed to be simple cause there's no means to battling u//
i called ya out ya name and u took it like i was flattering u//
i'm overconfident because there's a substance to my spittin//
u ain't beating me cause i can hit u with shit and viewers be like ah ha, oh no no, no she didn't//
drop shit, bloody mouth like popped lips//
watch this, if u jumped on threads u couldn't top shit//
u dropping demos, u must like dicks cause u thinking a head//
how u droppin demos when u sink, like u lil kim's face in a nicca's pelvic area, on thread//
homey, iím taking u out, like a snitch face n society//(Snitches arenít wanted in Cities)
my words will leave you empty and stressed like castration anxiety//
the only time you can spit shit is if you were eating fecies// (look it up)
u bleak, now its time to start deleting ur species//
watching this distortion rots//
it get spoonz more nervous then christians with abortion thoughts//
please, ya verses are never something new//
the only time someone actually reads ya verses is when you click preview//
u can preview ya verse before u post it//
the only reason they viewing this one because i'm so sick//
i mean this aint running but learn ya pace//
spoonz i'll give you back your spot then beat u again so u know i earned my place//
ur unaware of what u hiting at cause u throwing blind punchs//
u gettin served like u b2k or like tickets for kids for free lunchs//
yea i got the goods and it's custom fitted//
my flow is like horny dikes cant no nicca fuck wit it//

01-12-2004, 04:59 PM
niesse p where u at...he invited both of us...but u aint gotta respond cause i can handle utensils...

Murder Inc 845
01-12-2004, 09:28 PM
woo u killin it verbal assaulter

01-12-2004, 10:08 PM
thanx murder_inc845...

01-12-2004, 11:49 PM
back up i minute, now i got the word ON YA
i can tell you biting cause you get squares in your words when you copy and paste COMMAS
how in the fukk can you delete my species if to you i dont even EXIST
and how the fukk you gon beat me?
i STILL haven't been DISSED
when i throw my punches i can spell the WORD
thats punch E-S
so i remain the BEST you ever HEARD
my rhymes ride violent on you like i was crip and you was BLOOD
ima really start spillin this BLOOD'S BLOOD so back the fuck UUUUP
about your horney dyke rhymes
you say no black man can FUKK WIT IT
im a pekkahwood bitch
and ima stick my white dick UP IN IT
you only makin yourself a fool tellin me to look up FEACES
looks like you're the one that should check up on it you can spell it
bitch PLEASE

**oh yeah, i dont think niesse p is gonna say shit. what a bitch huh

01-13-2004, 02:31 PM
if i was u i wouldn't trust the word u got on me//
who u getting it from, mr. australian white dick, the crocodile dundy//
attention all i introduce the flawless spoonz, tiz me honor//
mr. flawless here predcits ur bttting if u type a comma//
i took no time to check spelling because it's off top//
what u a grammar coach now, u need to check ur first line pops//
back up " i " minute i'm postive u meant one//
don't correct mine because the same shit, mate, u've done//
ayyyyye mates, we're on the site of the beautiful australia...there's a new species here, it's not human and it's doesn't make mistakes...it's the species spooooooooonz...

mates i tell u, he's a beauty, kind of cocky tho but it's nothing the crocodile dundy can't handle...

as far as squares goes in words u looking to hard homey//
u detecting copy and paste, guilty, is it my fault my pc freezes up on me//
so before i press crtl, atl, dlt, i right click and press copy//
then close whatever stopped me//
next i click paste, so my words wont be gone without trace//
my pc hardware is weak, i know it needs help//
look what u exposed feel good about urself?//
spoonz, nicca is a term i use on all//
blk, white, pr, chinese i loss them all//
they can't catch up with my pace leaving them to fall//
don't be a smart ass if i spelled the word wrong u knew what i meant//
this battle is over because like a storm i came and went//

01-13-2004, 05:10 PM
spoonz haven`t u learned ur lesson???don`t mess wit her!she`s outa ur league!

01-13-2004, 07:33 PM
damn gurl u got rhymes... keep it up

01-13-2004, 07:48 PM
***keystyling to da band's bad boy this bad boy that beat***

i was gonna wait til u hit back but fuk it u making a demo u bout to hit big//
then y suddenly u got the urge to battle with this wiz kid//
u said it was friendly competition but in my area competitons never friendly//
it's confrentational and the blood u speak of pours out and leaves competiton empty//
i do this for fun, it's in my spare time//
but i've been on it alot like it's fukin radio air time//
cause my back is fucked up yes n deed//
u was probably smoking some shit that had u pumped thinking u gonna mess with D//
best believe, i'm the h.b.i.c//
but i get it, u just mad cause spittin is my previlage//
forget it, cause u believed that u could fuk wit it//
incorrect, u gonna rip this young chick that's what u expect?//
i'm vexed, reading shit over homey u thinkin u a vet//
word? that being true is absurd//
i bet u some out casted australian nerd//
u garbage, homey think he the hardest//
reguardless, if u in the demo phase, i still look at u as junky acoholic//
u gotta be, if u thinking u won this battle b//
u don't master me, remember the line i said about master peice//
i went to my country slang i'm versital as a young kid//
punk bytch, i'm on fire look what u done did//
nonsense, i stay with my best and it's constant//
nah thei_chi he ain't learned his lesson//
messing, with his thoughts cause did he win is still in question//
veteran, isn't assossiated with me or this testing//
i'm testing u homey so pull out ur best//
yet, that's not been seen where that shit at//
at, shit, that, where, seen, been, not, that's, i type that shit back-// (previous line typed backwards)
wards, because i play with words//
heard, that i'm the supreme bytch in my burbs//
turd, top-c tip-c, turny top//
anyway u look ima be on top and i'm teaching u so learny pops//
locks, on u what u gonna do//
type more shit what's that gonna prove//
lose, is never assossiated with me//
please, don't hate on the skill//
it will, drive me to take ur surface and pill//
it back, homey i got it like that//
stack, the winnings on my weak back//
u lack, the skill, u can't even tustle with that//
wack, is what u type on others post//
ghost, is how i leave ya, all do it but u hating the most//
yo if ya heard this beat with the way i say it//
u'd give me the keys to the game because i'm ready to play it//
spray it, like a vet keeping cats wet//
yet, u a toy cause i just play with u kid//
nice, ain't tha word label u kid//
fight, to win because i'm da da doing it big//

***Spoonz u can hit back and then i'm done...they can vote after that because it's meaningless to keep going***

01-13-2004, 08:46 PM
thei_chi can have a fukk u

y dont YOU battle me or am i out of YOUR league?

hey verbal u got quite alot to say i got a proposal
lets take the battle to the next stage


r u equipped to do that?

01-13-2004, 08:58 PM
U gon audio battle so we can all hear or just between the 2 of u? would be kewl to listen

01-13-2004, 09:03 PM
the next stage aye...spoonz this ain't mitosis ain't no stages of this shyt...
u don't seriously wanna go there homey...u not ready for that...
they say i'm nice typing they aint seen nothing yet plus i spit fast and that's untouchable by anyone alone...
but i gotta check on that so stay tuned spoonz...

01-14-2004, 06:16 PM
what i've got in mind d-tox is that each person will record their battle onto thier computer, upload it into some webspace and paste a link here.

yeah let me know if you have the equipment verbal. all you should need is a mic and some instrumentals, we gotta use the same one though :]

01-14-2004, 07:00 PM
Kewl sounds good. I know if you both do this i will listen to them for sure

01-14-2004, 11:04 PM
aight spoonz...i'll holla...

01-15-2004, 07:03 PM
aye whens this battle suppose to go down??

01-15-2004, 07:11 PM
for fukks sake give her a minute

01-15-2004, 07:27 PM
Now spoonz dont get up at me or baddestchick, All i said was if you do it i will listen and Baddest was just asking when its going down, probably cause she wants to listen also.
Sorry dawg if you thought one of us was bein rude

01-15-2004, 08:56 PM
no drama on u dtox i was replying directly to baddest

01-15-2004, 09:00 PM
well shes kewl , she didnt mean no harm by it she was just askin when it was goin down lol :)

01-15-2004, 10:39 PM
whateva mayn

01-16-2004, 02:32 AM
damn spoonz u need to calm ur ass down... i was juss asking... shit...

01-16-2004, 07:11 AM
yea but u been punkin me in otha threads

01-16-2004, 12:17 PM
LMAO...spoonz u just gaining foes in every direction homey...what i wanna know is can baddest rap?

cause if so we can get a 3 way battle going on here...cause it looks like u and spoonz need to squash that shit...

spoonz i'm still looking into that but i can't get around because i got back problems and my peoplez wont let me do nothing...

i ain't been to school for 2 weeks and they aint gonna let me go to the studio and i ain't went to school and plus i'm on bed rest...i didn't even ask my moms yet cause she be trippin and my step pops is a dumb ass so i probably can get over on him...

but i'll holla...

01-16-2004, 06:45 PM
haha well i'd rather stay out of the battle... cuz on the reel u guys both got a lot of talent and im not even gonna front cuz i got nothing on u guys lol... im juss being real wit u i can't rap like u two... but spoonz sorry if i was punkin u or wateva wasn't nothing personal... no hard feelings aight?

01-16-2004, 07:06 PM
Originally posted by BaDDesTchiCK
haha well i'd rather stay out of the battle... cuz on the reel u guys both got a lot of talent and im not even gonna front cuz i got nothing on u guys lol... im juss being real wit u i can't rap like u two... but spoonz sorry if i was punkin u or wateva wasn't nothing personal... no hard feelings aight?

lol...u never said u couldn't rap so go head and post a couple of bars for us...u never know who u got until u put urself out there so go head and spit for us ma...

01-16-2004, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by BaDDesTchiCK
nothing personal... no hard feelings aight?

sure if u didnt come here for all that im cool. juz the impression u gave me.

hey verbal dont stress about nothing, get yourself better.

i didn't think it would be any trouble though most people have some sort of mic for thier pc which i intended to use.

anyways im out.

01-16-2004, 11:44 PM
yo i'm going all out for this kid...i'm going to the studio and recording it with a beat that was made for this battle by my homey so hold ur horses...

01-17-2004, 02:09 AM
I thought it was said that u had to use the same beat?

01-17-2004, 05:21 AM
yeh verbal this is a battle not a diss track war.

i was thinking more along the traditional battle lines where we both freestyle for a time limit over the same beat.

01-17-2004, 01:15 PM
Originally posted by Spoonz
yeh verbal this is a battle not a diss track war.

i was thinking more along the traditional battle lines where we both freestyle for a time limit over the same beat.

yea...ok...but all this gonna have to go on hold because i've started yesterday doing physical therapy for my back and i ain't gonna be able to do it no time soon...

so when i heal and shit let me know what the beat is so we can do this...

sorry about all that u probably had ur hopes up or something but my health is first homey...

i hope u gonna still want to do it when i get better...

lol u said a diss track war...i wasn't thinking that way spoonz...

01-17-2004, 09:04 PM
lol my hopes up? who do u think i am?

between me and you its for fun this is like "recreational battle" lol so its no drama if you need to rest.

in the mean time chops we should battle again otherwise no hopers like shawn are just gonna get me lazy on the lyrics.

01-17-2004, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by Spoonz
lol my hopes up? who do u think i am?

between me and you its for fun this is like "recreational battle" lol so its no drama if you need to rest.

in the mean time chops we should battle again otherwise no hopers like shawn are just gonna get me lazy on the lyrics.

lol yea ur hopes up cause i'm calm...physical therapy does that to u...

Murder Inc 845
01-18-2004, 02:46 AM
Werd spoonz. Let like not rap about the same old shit tho. lets rap about topics and shit. still same format. 16's.